Date: 03/10/11 11:51 am Title: Track 02
This is very good!!!
Author's Response: :D Thank you, darling ^-^ We're glad you like it!
Date: 03/10/11 08:10 am Title: Track 02
XD gotta love the enedeing
Date: 03/10/11 05:15 am Title: Track 02
In real life Bill should have gone to the hospital anyway, to check for internal bleeding, brain damage and such. You also MUST call the police and wait by the car till they arrive. There is also a flaw in Tom's 'I'll repair your car as payment' plan, he'll still have to pay for the parts needed. Besides if the car is as damaged as you described it, it wouldn't be repairable (or maybe Bill's just over dramatic). Besides, doesn't Bill have an insurance? Or Tom? I don't know about the rest of the world, by in my country, it is mandatory to have an insurance that covers damage you've caused to others when driving.
But that's real life, this is fiction, so those kind of things can be ignored for the sake of hot boy love ;)
Author's Response: Hi :) Just a few things to clear up why we wrote it the way we did. :) I agree with you, in the hospital matter. They SHOULD have gone to the Hospital, anyway, to check out the severeness of the concusion, but I think we've been able to portray how awfully stuborn and spoiled Bill is, and how attached he is to his job. Even if Tom had offered, in any case, to take him to the Hospital, Bill would have refused, in the end, 'cause that event he was supposed to be hosting (in time) is an important one for his carreer. Also, where MissingMySould and I (BillsMK) live, the police and insurance companies are not the best organizations in the world. In fact, the police, here, are the real criminals, out there, and insurance companies almost never, NEVER work properly. They are just money-sucking enterprises, that never show up when you're in need of them. So, anyhowders, we decided not to put those two into context because, at the end of the day, neither one of us knows how those things work propperly, so we didn't want to risk making any mistakes in describing those two, so we just did it 'our way'. At least, they way it works in out country, where anyone is willing to do anything to get out of trouble, and not have anything to do with neither the police nor insurance; ergo, why we didn't even mentioned them (well, maybe the police, and only once :P). Oh, and here, insurance it's not mandatory. Only for drivers below 18 years of age, and we certainly weren't aware of it being mandatory anywhere else, because we didn't reseach, since we didn't plan on mentioning insurance from the begining. Regarding car damages, Bill, in fact, was a little over-dramatic. It was only a few scratches on the doors, and the only car part REALLY damaged was the bumper. I don't believe the engine or any actualy mechanic parts of the car were damaged. The smoke coming from the hood was more alarming than the real damage in it. I believe the bumper is easy to repair, if you take out the blow, fill the scratches and re-paint it. Anyway, I just felt like you needed to know, in case you found other 'flaws' in it. 'Flaws,' because they have a reason to be there, in the end :P I'm glad you pointed things out, though, and I hope this makes you understand why we didn't write everything that was missing. :)
Date: 03/10/11 12:14 am Title: Track 02
OMG-i'm dying to know what happens next!
Date: 03/09/11 10:19 pm Title: Track 02
i knew it was Tom from the very beggining
Author's Response: Yeah, well... I think we, subconciously, made that extremely predictable, really :P
Date: 01/30/11 09:44 pm Title: Track 01
oh no! I wonder if the crashed car has bill in it? And don't you think Tom would feel guilty enough to fix his car for him ( to keep from police and insurance issues?)... well that would be an intersting intro....
I do hope you'll continue this soon...
Author's Response: Haha, I won't give away anything until the next chapter is up :) I can't promise how soon will that be, but I assure you it's in the oven :) Thank you for reading and thank you for your reviews! ^^
Date: 01/30/11 09:28 pm Title: Track 00
oh! I like the start... I'm looking forward to reading more.;..
Author's Response: :) Thank you, darling. I'm glad you liked it! :)
Date: 12/08/10 09:21 am Title: Track 00
This is soo wonderful, took me in, like i couldn't stop reading it, and I wouldn't hit you, it was good. Don't be so hard on yourself.
Author's Response: We're so glad you liked it and could'n stop reading. We'll try to post more of this as soon as we possibly can. :) And, don't worry. I only wanted to hit myself, when I realized I had deleted the story the very fisrt time I posted it :) I'm really happy with this, so ^^
Date: 10/06/10 03:43 am Title: Track 01
I think the backstory is pretty interesting...
B
Author's Response: Thank you, darling! :)
Date: 09/27/10 09:39 pm Title: Track 01
please write more? :) ive been waiting forever!!
Author's Response: Oh, sorry for taking so long to answer, and to only bring you with it more uncertainty. :/ University is being a fucking BITCH to both of us, and we don't know when we might be able to bring another chapter. We're so very sorry, but that's just how it is. It keeps our focus completely off writing, and we hate it, too. We've been also waiting forever to post some more, but we can't, at the present moment. We'll try to finish what we've prepared, though :) We haven't abandoned the story!
Date: 07/21/10 11:20 am Title: Track 01
First of all, good story, but I think that you could describe Tom's feelings a little more detailed. Sometimes you do this very well, for example when you describe his anger caused by Georg and the missed audition, but at the end of the chapter when the accident happens and Tom sees what he's done I miss the breathless fear and the non-believing feeling that would come up in such a situation. First of all :P Thank you so much for the constructive criticism, for your sugestions and sharing your thoughts with us. We'll definitelly keep it in count :) Very few people care enough to give us some advice, when that's the whole point of reviews! :) Anyways, truthfully, we left it like that on purpose, though. We didn't want to deepen it too much because we want it to leave it with some sort of cliffhanger :) And, finally, we're writting this in Spanish and English, simultaneously :P Thank you so much for reading!
By the way, in which languages do you write this story? ;)
Hatsumomo
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Date: 06/20/10 11:29 pm Title: Track 01
Oh no! I need the next part! Please hurry!!!
Author's Response: Haha, :) We're working on it, hon :) School is still on for one of us and it's a bit hard to write a lot, so have some patience... We'll update as soon as we can :)
Date: 06/14/10 01:32 pm Title: Track 01
ahhh, this story looks amazing. :D
Author's Response:
Gah! :D Thank you, darling! :3 We hope you enjoy what's to come! ^.^
Date: 04/29/10 09:28 pm Title: Track 00
He knew it now, though, and it wasn't about it being a dream impossible to accomplish. It was something achievable a hundred percent because he had done it, he had reached it. Hell, he even tasted it, touched it, smelled, it, fucking heard it!
Epic!oh how,I LOVED.
That was so good-WOW.so is the third extension on the workx???Please resume!
can't wait for the next one!!!
ur newest fan,
Author's Response: :D Glad you liked that part so much, hon :) I never thought one of my writings would deserve the word "epic" xP This boosted our ego TONS xP And yes, we are gonna bring the next chapter up as soon as we can. :) Thank you for being our fan ^^
Date: 04/29/10 08:35 pm Title: Track 00
Yea,That was so good.I'm Gonna read more(next chapter)
Author's Response: Haha :P Glad you liked the chappie! ^^
Date: 04/27/10 06:54 pm Title: Track 00
hey i'll defi come back to read the next chappie! cant wait to see when you got it on! kinda bummed when i noticed your story doesnt get as much reviews.. cause it really is really well written! so hope you dont get put off by it and you'll continue anyways. some people are just weird and dont know a good thing when its right in front of them... xD
Author's Response: Thank you so much, hon, for this lovely review :3 I'm glad to know you'll come back for some more of this :D & Don't worry about the reviews, though... It just means that the readers are kinda lazy :P We're getting tons of reads per day! :D Which makes us really happy even though we're lacking reviews. We're hoping that for next chapters that will go better, but we are not discouraged at the least! :3
Date: 04/16/10 12:39 pm Title: Track 00
i like this story! i like your Bill and Tom and how you described the music bizz and everything. i'm really curious to see how this is going and what Tom's gonna do now!
Author's Response: Thank you, darling! :) I'm glad you're enjoying it! ^^ Thank you for the review, and I hope your curiosity makes you come back to read the next chappie! ;)
Date: 04/14/10 07:53 pm Title: Track 01
good job keep at it!
Author's Response: Thank you, darling :)
Date: 04/13/10 12:36 am Title: Track 01
OH MY GODNESS! hahaha I can't believe it!... you did it! ^^ and was a good job!!!
LOL I read your note and FUCKIN' HELL! i feel special and stupid in this moment!... I know I said this too many times but you know that I LOVE to help you with the fic and now that you added me like co-author just I don't have to words to describe how I feel... :')
THANKS ^^ you're an amazing person and you deserve the best!... With all the things around you...
One more time I KNOW MY ENGLISH SUCKS but this page is in english and i'm not gonna say something in spanish i don't feel comfortable (i'm an idiot)
x'D
Anyways...
I LOVE YOUUUU! and I'm pretty sure that this history is gonna rock!
<3
Author's Response:
Haha, you don't need to comment every chapter, hun ;) I glad I made you feel special! :) And YOU know I say this WAY TOO MUCH, but thank you so much for everything! :3
Don't talk bullshit about your English! It's so much better than you think! ;)
I love you too, darling! ^^ <3
Date: 04/11/10 07:05 pm Title: Track 01
what's the other language? spanish? well about this chapter I really felt pitty for poor Tom, I thought Bill after all would have helped him, but I can't wait to read another chapter
Author's Response:
Yup :) In Spanish :P I won't allow myself to reveal any info about what's gonna happen, :X I'm just gonna say that Bill's not an easy person to get through :P
Next Chappie is in the oven. Hope I can get it done soon! :) Thanks for the review ;)