Date: 03/30/10 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh and also I am now really pissed at tom! I mean seriously at the beginnig when he first gets kids I can understa d him being all rebelious and "I didn't ask for this" but really it's been FIVE years! GROW UP! You have kids you big DEAD BEAT! *whew* ...... Kay I'm done ranting :)
Date: 03/30/10 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 7
Okay I am a honest reviewer, and I noticed you were doubting on if you should continue updating. At the beginning I will admit I was kinda bored with the story. Now I'm one of those people who firmly believe in the concept if you don't like it don't review, so like I said the story didn't ...... Appeal to me. Then BAM you hit me with the end of chapter seven and I am firmly hooked. Like I said I'm honest and I'm truly begging you to update like ............ Now!
Date: 03/30/10 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 7
you have to keep updating this story now. I am totally hooked on it. I can't wait for the rest :)
Date: 03/30/10 05:35 am Title: Chapter 6
I don't really like Slash stories, and I really like your story. So I want you to update more :)
Date: 03/30/10 04:52 am Title: Chapter 6
Please dont stop making this!!! Its SO GOOD!! :) i think its good that its not a slash story!!! PLEASE keep going i LOVE IT!!!!
(sorry for my bad english, but im from Denmark :D so im not so good)
Date: 03/30/10 12:13 am Title: Chapter 6
Just because the site is a slash loving site doesn't mean the general fics should be ignored. I do love the fic, and squeak for every update.
Date: 03/29/10 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 6
just so you know I really like this story so I think that you should keep it going. :) It is nice to have a change every once in a while
Date: 03/29/10 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 6
personally i read het and slash and I'm glas there's no twincest involved for once
first cuz u must be a freaking psycho to just even love it and second,; it's so over
Thank for the new thing sweetheart
Date: 03/28/10 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 5
Ya know, if I was Bill, I would totally get Tom in some other bus or car or something and keep him away from his kids untill he was mature enough. I'd rather raise them myself then... But that's just me...
I like the story though! Keep going, please, 'cause I want more :D
Date: 03/28/10 02:42 pm Title: Chapter 5
Keep going!! :) its great!!
Date: 03/28/10 08:24 am Title: Chapter 4
Please continue!!! :) I LOVE THIS STORY!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK ;)
Date: 03/28/10 01:27 am Title: Chapter 4
i love reading this story on THUS, so i thought i've give you some extra reviews/support on this site
great story
Date: 03/27/10 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 4
god tom grow up i love it
Date: 03/27/10 10:45 am Title: Chapter 3
i love this story please keep it up its one of my favorites