Date: 05/08/10 06:00 am Title: Chapter 22
haha i love the play fighting,hahs so funnyxD
Date: 05/07/10 04:28 am Title: Chapter 23
WOw wow wow awesome can't wait :):):)
Date: 05/05/10 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 22
WOw awesome can't wait :) this was holarious :)
Date: 05/05/10 09:25 am Title: Chapter 22
after those vacation pics of them playing in the pool, and Bill spiiting water at Tomi? this part of your story just seems like something they really would do. sweet.
Date: 05/05/10 09:20 am Title: Chapter 22
love it, i really like it because its so sweet and it is just so good.!! update soon again :)
Date: 05/04/10 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 22
awwwwwww its such a sweet chapter after all the drama! i love it :)
update soon-ish?
Date: 05/03/10 11:36 am Title: Chapter 21
Maybe I missed it but you didn;t seem to write about the situation with Teddy completely. I know that wasn't the focus of the story, but it feels a bit confusing and somewhat like a loose end. Who sold Teddy out about the drugs if Tom didn't? His first attack was just paranoia, the second one seems to have a purpose but not exactly clear.
Author's Response: Well we're not supposed to know exactly who sold him out. He figured it was Tom because Tom had got caught by the police, and soon after that the police came looking for Teddy, so he assumed it had been Tom that told them. That's why he came after him. Hope this helps!
Date: 05/02/10 05:37 am Title: Chapter 21
Awwww what a great ending. Sequel? Please xD
Date: 05/02/10 04:33 am Title: Chapter 21
Wow awesome I cryed a litle it was awesome :)
Date: 05/01/10 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 21
Cant wait for the next sequel!!
Date: 05/01/10 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 21
awwwwwww! happy ending. tomi is finally groeing up! all twins have their brother again, and its raining cookies and skittles. kay well maybe not the latter but that would be frickin awesome. any a ways i cant wait for the sequel!!
Date: 04/30/10 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
perfect!!i can't wait for the next chapter :D:D:D
Date: 04/30/10 03:32 am Title: Chapter 20
YAY! Alex is good Now!!! Next chapter xD
Date: 04/29/10 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 20
yeAH!! YEAH YEAH! hes awak, well it was technaclly in the last chapter but i just read them!! he is finally awake *happy dance*
Date: 04/29/10 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 20
Wow awesome I awemost cryed :) can't wait :)
Date: 04/28/10 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 19
OMG MORE PLEASE!