Great chapter!!!!!

damn...i sure can picture Bill in those pants. great chapter!! I can't wait to see more! Its good to know Merrick is there to help not hinder. You seem to have some time line discrepancies...I thought a few chapters back you were talking about the alcohol Bill wanted not being made in a hundred years or something, and Prada or Gucci or whoever even longer...and there was something about Germany too, but this chapter your talking only 50 years...butr either way what good would it do Bill to get where ever Jacek was sending him after Jacek died...unless there is some sort of Commune or something which might be ok...anyway fantsatic chapter and I am looking forward to more.

Don't do it, Bill! Go back to Tom! :O

Annnddd now I'm just gonna wait anxiously for the next part ^^

I'm going to start by saying I'm sorry for not reviewing that last chapter. It's been crazy and i haven't felt like reading lately. I don't know what's wrong with me ;(

Although Bill's actions were not so suprizing they were still insane. It is hard for anyone to deal with consiquence when emotions are high and thought process is running too fast even for a humanoid. I'm sorry for what happened to Tom and I know that Bill is too. I fear he will never forgive himself for harming Tom. When he was running I could almost feel the wind rushing through my hair with him. The red and blue lights of the districts flying by. When Bill stopped it was like seeing an angel cry. An angel who made a mistake... he fell ;( I nearly cried when Tamera caught him and brought him to Merrick. However, now I'm almost glad she did get to him before Andreas called a favor. Maybe there is hope now but I'm not sure. Poor Tom is in pain and confused not to mention scared. I would be too if it were me. Bill never intended to hurt him consciously but none the less it happened. Bill is right, he never should have gone out with Andreas and he never should have left Tom's home. I just hope that he can survive now. I'm curious as to what Merrick will tell Andreas about Bill or if she will tell him anything at all.

I knew she knew. Though that kind of sucks because Tom no longer trust Bill. Merrick is wanting to sell Bill. Well if Tom were to leave things be from this point on all he need worry about is taking care of those medical bills. I just fell that humanoids are now part of a slave trade. They have emotions, feelings, but they get brushed off because they are lead to be fabricated. I love how out have your own characters. They are turning out to be very fleshed out. It seems as if there are a lot of victims in this. No real head nemesis. Then again that is how life is. There is more then one block to a pyramid for the one on top to stand tall.

Thank you for updating. For a while it was quite on your end. I was going to give p on you. Then finally you started updating again. Thank you for the wonderful reading metrical.

Tom is alive!!!! Well, nothing will be the same anymore but he's alive!! Now, let's get Bill and Tom back together again.

You're making a mistake Tom!

Wow, this story is just so intense! Every new chapter is very mysterious and intriguing, I enjoy it quite a lot! I feel so sad for Bill, I really hope things will get better for him and Tom cause I want them to end up together :)

I'm so glad Bill is in good hands!! Now if only we can reunite him with Tom. It was a horrible thing that happened, but hopefully they can recover. thanks for the update, keep up the great work!

hmmm...I am starting to really wonder what the heck happened that they were all destroyed for...I'm not really sure what to think about Merrick either...is she going to help Bill or sell him or what? An damn Tom, why can't he see Bill was just running on insinct?...Anyone would've done the same thing as Bill, he just happens to be a bit stronger so his reactions havge a bit more impact. I hope this all turns out well and I loved this chapter and I can't wait for more!!!