Date: 03/23/10 11:04 am Title: Chapter 6
*sobs* ....... murderer *pouts*
Author's Response: Oh don't cry, things will turn around soon ;)
Date: 03/23/10 05:51 am Title: Chapter 6
Oh no what did he do to Bill ?! Ö
How could he shut him off just like that :( Poor Bill. Can't wait for the next one, love this story!
Author's Response: Thank you I am glad you are enjoying it :)
Date: 03/23/10 01:34 am Title: Chapter 6
I don't know. I'm kinda upset Tom reset Bill. I liked Bill I can't believe Tom did that. Anyway.... Bill is so life like and beautiful. I want Tom to see that.
Author's Response: Have patience with Tom, he will come around.
Date: 03/22/10 11:24 pm Title: Chapter 6
This reminds me of Chobits, only a bit less pervy. I liked this chapter. You're descriptions of Bill's internal circuitry are great.
Author's Response: Thank you, I kinda feel like I skimped out on the descriptions of this last chapter personally. I am glad that you approve :)
Date: 03/22/10 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 6
Noo Tom reset Bill? Aw thaw awful of him! So glad you updated I love this story
Author's Response: Do not hate Tom just yet, I promise he is a good man :)
Date: 03/16/10 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 5
So glad you updated this and your banner is so smexy
Author's Response: Thank you very much, I am pleased with the banner for now. Not too bad for Microsoft Paint ;)
Date: 03/16/10 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 5
I'm very intruiged by this story... please continue! I eagerly await an update.
Author's Response: I am glad you are enjoying it so far, I will update soon.
Date: 03/16/10 01:14 am Title: Chapter 5
Your review count jumped like Uber major =] that's wonderful because you have an awesome story. Awww, I love your thank you notes, they're so cute.
Author's Response: I'm so happy to have reviews :)
Date: 03/16/10 12:02 am Title: Chapter 5
:) more plz
Author's Response: Will do.
Date: 03/15/10 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 5
I really like this! I love the concept of Android Bill. I watched the making of the Humanoid albums and it was really cool how they turned Bill into the android.
Author's Response: I have not seen that, I will have to look it up. Thank you!
Date: 03/15/10 05:36 pm Title: Chapter 4
love.love.love.love.love.love.love.love this story! I think you've shown the characters wonderfully! And I think this story is one of my absolute favourites! Keep it up, please? :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am definitely going to update soon, right now I am waiting for a brainstorming session I have planned. There is some work to be done but I promise I will update before the month is over.
Date: 03/14/10 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 4
Poor Bill (B5354), he is so lonely :-(
It is interesting to know that B5354 has feelings. First I thought it will be only some kind of robot without emotions. I am looking forward to see how will their relationship shape... so Tom is going to take him home? For cleaning? Really? :D
Sorry for mistakes, that I made here, I donīt speak english very well.
Author's Response: Your English was very good as far as I can see ;)rnBill hasn't always been lonely, but we will see if Tom takes him home or not. My magic eight ball says the signs are good.
Date: 03/14/10 02:51 pm Title: Chapter 4
I love this story! You write science fiction so well - it's so cute that Tom's considering B5354's emotions. Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you very much, I'm trying to update as soon as possible on this particular story. However, I'm feeling swept up in "A Dangerous Deal" right now. But have no fear, I'm having a dinner date soon to brainstorm the plotline a bit on this one and should be able to move forward.
Date: 03/14/10 03:41 am Title: Chapter 4
This is awesome!!! I totally love hoe Tom jacked off to Bill
Author's Response: It was tons of fun to write that scene ;)
Date: 03/11/10 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like it :-)
Author's Response: I am glad :)
Date: 03/10/10 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 4
I love this!
You write so well, everything is so perfectly planned and so descriptive.
I love the character you're developing for the Humanoid, and Tom's attitude.
I can't wait to read more of this, update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you very much, so glad that you are enjoying it :)
Date: 03/10/10 01:19 am Title: Chapter 3
Bill is kind of like Gigalo Joe in Artificial Intelligence.
Author's Response: It has been a very long time since I have seen that movie, hopefully he was a good character?
Date: 03/10/10 01:15 am Title: Chapter 4
HAY! I just seen your banner I love it. It's great =]
Author's Response: Thanks you! This is temporary for right now until I polish it up some. It's not terrible for Microsft Paint though!
Date: 03/09/10 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 4
I like the chapter. I feel it's a vital part of the story and important character development.You're doing a great job with this story so far, I really like it.
Author's Response: Thank you as always, hopefully I will come around to updating soon.
Date: 03/05/10 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 3
I love how this is going, it's great. I really like your writing style, you seem fairly experienced with writing. You're writing is almost perfect, you only have a few spelling mistakes here and there, nothing dramatic, perhaps you should find a beta reader? If you don't know what that is it's someone who goes over your work for you and corrects anything that's wrong, and if you get a good enough beta reader they will support you and talk over any ideas with you that you have and everything. Your story is really cool so far though, totally original. I like how you have everything developed so well too, it's really cool.
Author's Response: He'll if you'd want to help review the chapters before I post them I'd be happy for your input, just shoot me an email: Halcyon_MOD@yahoo.com