Date: 03/26/10 08:23 am Title: Chapter 7
Oh thank god, I though that He had reset him. I was so worried. It just hurt to see something like that become robotic. It is like someone with amnesia. You don't realize how much a person actions are based of their past experiences. All the people that help surround and curate those very memories no long exists as well. It is all together just a depressing thing.
Author's Response: I am glad that you are feeling a connection with this character even though he hasn't really developed that well as of yet. I promise things will go better with him in the future.
Date: 03/26/10 08:02 am Title: Chapter 6
I am happy with this fic, but I am also sad that he reset him. I mean how could he do that. I found that truly depressing. All those memories of his life before are gone in one smooth swipe.
Author's Response: I would never have let B5354 get reset :)
Date: 03/26/10 07:37 am Title: Chapter 5
Bill is a work of art.
Author's Response: I agree.
Date: 03/25/10 11:49 am Title: Chapter 7
This story is really good. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Hopefully the wait will not be long.
Date: 03/25/10 09:24 am Title: Chapter 3
Poor thing had OCD programed into him I just know it. Tom is going to go mad when he gets back to the shop, everything will be in it's proper place and clean. Please please what ever you do don't give up on this story.
Author's Response: Haha yes he has OCD, I didn't think of it that way. The organization and the nervous twitching too.
Date: 03/25/10 08:09 am Title: Chapter 2
Something to be so human like, it has become human. The mass of man seems only capable of making slaves.Though there is always that question what really makes one human?
Author's Response: Do you think that it's possible to become human? I myself am unsure of whether or not I believe entirely in B5354's humanity. We shall see.
Date: 03/25/10 07:22 am Title: Chapter 1
You got me hooked. Congratulations and it is only your first chapter. That is a sign of and excellent Arthur. Your grammar & spelling is grate in this. I know that this is going to be a page turner for me. I also know I am going to hit a cliff hanger, so I am going to strongly urge your to continue for the first chapter on.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the compliments, I appreciate them. I will try not to leave too many large gaps in between updates, but I'm also trying to work on my other story as well :P
Date: 03/25/10 02:29 am Title: Chapter 7
Oh my goodness! I love this story so much! It quickly became one of my big time favourites! I hope to read more soon
Author's Response: I am glad you are enjoying it. I will update soon :)
Date: 03/24/10 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 7
Yay you updated! :D
Author's Response: Indeed I did, I just couldn't wait any longer.
Date: 03/24/10 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 7
Oh Tom, If you rest Bill I will rest you!!! I'm just kidding but anyway, I'm curious like Tom to find out why Bill is not in some rich place with this guy. I'm kind of glad though because maybe Tom can realize what Bill could be to him and for him. I'm curious as well to know more about Bill or Bonnie as this guy calls him. I feel like there is more of a story there then with any other humanoid that was created. I think Bill was created differently then all the others for a reason but not the reason that first comes to mind and not for the purpose of what was seen in the video either but something much deeper than that. Come on Tom don't sell him! You can't!
Author's Response: Thank you Asahi. That's an interesting concept, that B5354 was actually created differently than the other Humanoids. I have to say I hadn't really considered that about him, mayhaps he was. I will definitely delve into that with my brainstorming buddy, thank you!
Date: 03/24/10 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 7
Hi! New reader. I just have to say that I just read the entire thing and I'm in love with this story. It's so amazingly well written. I feel so bad for B5354 after reading chapter 7! I need to know what happened to him! I'm hooked now!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I assure you that B5354's life will not always be such a mystery.
Date: 03/24/10 08:13 am Title: Chapter 7
:)
I love this story, I'm so glad you've updated really quick aha!
I love the developement of Tom, and even though B5354 is coming I'm still eager to find out about his past life.
Your plot totally captivates me.
I hope you're not too busy and you update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so very much, I am very pleased with this story so far. And I will be sure to delve into B5354's past in depth, it will just take some time. I don't want us (the readers) to learn about it too quickly, I want everyone to learn at the same pace that Tom is learning.
Date: 03/24/10 05:47 am Title: Chapter 7
Wow, that was a quick update. I'm so happy!:D And I'm so relieved that he didn't reset the humanoide..then he wouldn't be "Bill" anymore, now would he.. Thank you so much for this, you just gave me a perfect start for the day!
Author's Response: I am glad to give you a good start, Bill is always a good way to wake up :)
Date: 03/24/10 03:49 am Title: Chapter 7
So he didn't reset B, he just took out the key. Relief! :D
Author's Response: No he sure didn't reset Bill yet. And I agree, I was relieved he didn't make that choice.
Date: 03/24/10 01:26 am Title: Chapter 7
The Humanoid Holocaust scene was disturbing. Much like the human Holocaust. I love how Bill is terrified of 'dying' like that. I do believe that he experiences emotions. Like the Matrix taught us, love is a word, what matters is how you express it and feel it.
Author's Response: I agree with you entirely. Thank you for your input :)
Date: 03/23/10 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 6
Haha, funny..I was totally going to say the same thing as Hutula! I seriously think he did!
Oh, and I just have to tell you how much I love this story already! ;) Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I appreciate your kind comment :)
Date: 03/23/10 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 6
OMFG more plz. make billa and tomi be 2gather :)
Author's Response: Oh my gosh come on now, do you really think I would be able to avoid Bill and Tom being together?
Date: 03/23/10 06:27 pm Title: Chapter 6
My flatmate and I are having a bit of a disagreement on whether Tom reset Bill or not.
I have a sneaking suspicion he did.
He didn't, did he? o_o
Author's Response: You will have to wait and see, I promise I will update soon. The next chapter will be a big one.
Date: 03/23/10 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 6
wait so...tom pressed the reset button on bill? D:
Author's Response: I don't know, did he? What do you think :)
Date: 03/23/10 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 6
Oh nooo ...what happend to Bill? :-( All humanoids had soul or Bill was something special? This story reminds me of a movie "I Robot" a little. The robot there was "alive", had soul too.
And now, with reset, is Bill dead? Poor Bill :-(((
Author's Response: Bill definitely has a soul, Tom will see this don't you fear. I think that he already knows, he just needs to admit it to himself.