Date: 04/28/10 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 11
PLZ more
Author's Response: Will do
Date: 04/28/10 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 11
Yay! In die Nacht! :DD
(little mistake; you missed a 'T' in one of the 'Nacht's)
I just discovered this yesterday. Wow, very good story!
Lol, I'm slightly autistic (Asperger's) so I tend to use a vocabulary similar to Bill. Except I use contractions whenever I can, whereas Bill does not, but it's fitting since he's a computer. :P
And bad Tom, being so insensitive!
I too would have wondered why Jacek "made" him wear dresses and heels, but I wouldn't have said it like that
Author's Response: Ah thank you for the spelling error, I will fix.rnrnI agree with you that Tom was insensitive about the issue, but I do not think that he made his comments intentionally. When I wrote it I really fell into the idea that Tom is used to dealing with his friends, and for a young man to poke at the manhood of his other male friends is very common. I think he was reacting to the situation in the only way he knew how, which was to slightly joke about it by calling Bill a girl (in a roundabout way).
Date: 04/28/10 05:29 pm Title: Chapter 11
Ah I totally love, love, loooove this story! You're such a great writer.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for the compliment :)
Date: 04/28/10 05:07 pm Title: Chapter 11
Awww I love all the new bits of the story you added! And in die nacht is such a pretty song! I love it. Can't wait for ur next update :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Date: 04/28/10 03:03 pm Title: Chapter 3
This is an amazing story! Your mind is a beautiful thing for writing something so creative and interesting.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your kind words, I am happy that you are enjoying my fiction.
Date: 04/28/10 11:19 am Title: Chapter 11
This story is amazing, Halcyon. I love it.
Author's Response: Thank you my dear, I hope you continue to enjoy it.
Date: 04/28/10 03:47 am Title: Chapter 11
loved it! glad u updated so soon! ^^
Author's Response: Thank you, I am trying to update this more regularly now that my life has calmed down a bit. Feel free to email me and bother me if the wait gets too long.
Date: 04/28/10 02:38 am Title: Chapter 11
good good more ;)
Got totally addicted
xoxo
Author's Response: Good, I'm glad :)
Date: 04/28/10 01:50 am Title: Chapter 11
I laughed out loud at the thought of Tom in a dress, I'd probably pay him to do it, just once. LOVED this, can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: I am glad you are enjoying this, and the idea of Tom in a dress IS downright hysterical :)
Date: 04/27/10 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 11
Aww Bill :( Tom really was a jerk but at least he realized it. I hope he says so and not just through a washroom door. Tom seems like he might be coming around a little he did call B Bill and not just his ID number. I still feel like it will take time but I don't think Bill will be sold at least I really really hope not. I think Bill is wonderful and created so beautiful. Tom better realize that. I'm really interested in seeing this one through and where you will take it. I do believe Bill is in some real danger if he is found out. I hope Tom will protect him.
Author's Response: I do believe that Tom will protect Bill no matter what the cost. There will be more reason for this coming up. Thank you!
Date: 04/27/10 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 11
Yay! You updated..god I love this story
Author's Response: Good, I am happy you are enjoying it. I am back home now so hopefully my updates will be closer together from now on.
Date: 04/27/10 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 6
Did Tom really reset Bill, or are you tricking us like they did in I Robot?
Poor Bill, he was so sad and scared, and to him being reset was like being killed, but he still told Tom where the red line was.
Author's Response: I have never seen I Robot so I am unsure about that one.rnrnI am sure it was very difficult for B5354 to have to tell Tom how to perform the reset. I imagined a part of his mind screaming out in fear, but it being unable to silence his programming.
Date: 04/27/10 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 10
That last line is beautiful! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you, it is also from Khalil Gibron.
Date: 04/27/10 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 10
:D new reader
Omg sooo good!
Author's Response: I am glad you are enjoying this so far :)
Date: 04/27/10 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 9
"Holy shit on me."
I LITERALLY laughed out loud and got several odd stares from people walking the halls. LOVED this chapter!
Author's Response: I am glad you enjoyed that line as much as I did. My wife says that all the time, and every time he does it makes me laugh.
Date: 04/27/10 12:15 am Title: Chapter 10
That was some quick thinking on B's behalf. Helping them get away from Merrick. It is interesting to me to get more into Who B or Bill is and how he became this way. Clearly there is so much more to him then being just a machine. It is like i said before... perhaps Bill is made differently then the others for a reason. Tom would do himself good to keep Bill and learn.
Author's Response: I love receiving reviews from you, you are always so giving with what you are feeling from the chapter and the characters within. I am hoping to open up on Bill in the next chapter and show more memories of him, as well as Tom.
Date: 04/17/10 02:54 pm Title: Chapter 9
I think i nearly cried because i saw it was the end of the chapi. Anywho, i LOVED the details you used when bill was 'mourning' over the loss of the easel. You captured EVERYTHING perfectly! i actually felt what he was feeling! seriously your crazy talented ^-^ = nods head = I think you have ALL the potentials of becoming a novelist fer sure!
Author's Response: Thank you, the easel scene was one of my favourites.
Date: 04/17/10 02:38 pm Title: Chapter 7
He resets him. i kill him. plain and simple!. yeesh, you are so amazingly descriptive in your writing! i love it! i think this should be featured.
Author's Response: No killing Tom allowed
Date: 04/17/10 01:57 pm Title: Chapter 4
B5354 i really like his character so far, It doesnt tell a lot about him, but i assume as i get into later chapters it will ^_^ tom seems like a good guy all in all but idk somethigns jsut a tad bit off, haha idk how to explain, like his feelings... i think
Author's Response: I agree with how you feel about Tom. He seems almost more robotic than B 5354 sometimes.
Date: 04/17/10 01:34 pm Title: Chapter 2
O.O i'm seriously trying not to review for every damn chapter and story of yours, but its to hard, you simply need to be praised! This is only chapter two, and i'm SO sucked in! i mean i barely breathed and blinked while reading this! This IS really really good so far! I'm loving it! Bravo!
Author's Response: Thank you