Date: 05/16/10 11:06 am Title: Chapter 15
I'm sorry I read through 15 chapters at once without a single review. This story is one of the most original and interesting bill x tom fanfics I've ever read and so I couldn't stop myself. I love the idea that a machine can also have deep emotions, and notice you always describe Bill's emotions in details. His confusion and sadness never fail to make my heart aching. I also love the delicious tention slowly building between these Tom and Bill. Thank you so much. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you so very much for the kind words! I am happy that you are enjoying the storyline so far, and it feels good that you are enjoying the build up of Bill's emotions. I find him easier to write about than Tom right now.
Date: 05/16/10 02:13 am Title: Chapter 15
Ah poor Tom. He just freaked out a bit there. I'm not sure i would not have reacted the same however, I feel badly for Bill as well. He wasn't trying to freak Tom out. Andi reminds me of a friend of mine. His ( her ) name is Cocoa. She's really vocal and kind of a Diva and would totally do what Andi did if seeing Bill with a bruise on his face. I really like how this is going so far though even if Tom is an ass but whatever, he'll get over it eventually. Great chapter can't wait to see how this going out thing works. he he :)
Author's Response: I am sorry for what happened to Tom, it caught me by surprise whilst I was writing, I had no idea Bill was going to do that I feel for how confused both of them must be.
Date: 05/15/10 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 15
That's amazing. Jen sounds like...I don't even know. He sounds amazing.
Author's Response: He is amazing.
Date: 05/15/10 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 15
Awwww!!! you and jen are SO SO CUTE!!! :D anywho DAMNNNN andi.... dayum... DAMNN... he backhanded tom! -high fives andi- but wait this confuses me....what exactly is andi to tom? oh and thank you for posting so soon!!!!! much loveeee :D
Author's Response: I am glad you enjoyed Andi's appearance. He is Jen's favourite and he was very specific about how to portray him. If you notice, his character does not exactly match his telephone personality. I may edit this later, but in person Andi is just like my wife. Except for the shoes, Jen would never be caught dead in jogging shoes. I did not want him in heels though, I wanted to save that for Bill.
Date: 05/15/10 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 15
Andi is like totally high hahaha
Author's Response: He is definitely one of the more animated men :)
Date: 05/15/10 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 15
OMG! Good good!
Lol its okay abut andy thingy :] he looks nice in this fic
Loved the update (LL
XoXo
Author's Response: Thank you
Date: 05/15/10 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 14
OH great great great! Like always!
:DDD lol omg we had a similar view of Jacek! And poor tomi, ): now he might feel sad cuz bill wasnt thinking about him ):
XoXo update soon!
Author's Response: I am glad you shared my image of Jacek, Daniel Day Lewis is a gorgeous man.
Date: 05/15/10 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 14
poor poor tomi... and he was hard too... :P
Author's Response: I have to admit I'm surprised by how many readers felt bad for Tom in this part of the story. I was really expecting everyone to feel for Bill more, and now I feel terrible for what I have done to Tom lol.
Date: 05/15/10 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 13
Aw. :)
Author's Response: I hope you enjoyed :)
Date: 05/15/10 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 14
Oh my god. Oh my god. OH MY GOD!!!! How could you leave me with this cliff-hanger? Are you trying to kill me!?! AHH!! Did Bill malfunction? or was it just memories? is he going to be okay? OH MY GOD! i think this is my favorite chapter so far! i literally couldn't stop squealing and when i got to the end i like nearly died. My Step-Dad was like
"Can you calm down? whatever is going on is not that serious."
BUT IT WAS. oh my gosh. I can't believe Bill has it this bad! i mean i feel bad for Tom and all because obviously bill isn't in the right state of mind at the moment(i think i said that right) and is subconsciously hurting him. But i feel worse for Bill, for the fact of, he was ripped away from his love and i guess it hurt so bad that his mind couldn't differ reality from fantasy, or something along those line. It was truly sad. I love this SO SO much! I hope you can post more soon!!!
Author's Response: As usual you never fail to amuse me with your enthusiasm.
Date: 05/15/10 12:37 pm Title: Chapter 13
That was neat, I am sorry it took me so long to get to reading this chapter. I know that you had it up for a while but I din't want to read it when I was not in the mood to write a review for you. It is neat that you can put pictures in the middle of the story like that. Thank you for the mechanical magic I know that kind of writing takes a lot of imagination. I wonder how you are going to make Bill's speech after all the tinkering that has been done. I also wonder how the whole Andi, Tom and Bill interaction/meeting is going to work out. I mean he is going to see Andi for possible buyers of his alleged boyfriend. That is going to be award and complicated. I say just keep Bill, I think that it has been long enough time that no one has seen a Humanoid to notice that Bill is in fact one. Then again I am sure there are others looking out for them if there are possible buyers in the black market for a Humanoid. You know to think how useful Bill is with all the different languages that he knows. The dead ones can be learned once more. He could help others regain lost knowledge. Why would anyone want to destroy that? Because He is like us. Damn humans are raciest motherephers. Well looking forward to your next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you Kaihane as always for your words. I appreciate that you take the time to review my work and give me your insight. I am happy that you enjoyed the inner workings of Bill, it is one of my favourite things to write about and I am happy when the imagery comes across well.
Date: 05/13/10 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 13
Wow, this story is absolutely amazing!! I don't even know what to say. keep up the great work, I cannot wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you very much Violet! I hope that you enjoy what is to come!
Date: 05/12/10 10:21 am Title: Chapter 13
aww i thought tom was about to crack there for a minute :P
Author's Response: I know I would have ;)
Date: 05/12/10 08:07 am Title: Chapter 13
*sighs contently* i always love ur up dayes. just the thing i needed before exams. :)
Author's Response: I am glad to have brightened your day.
Date: 05/12/10 03:33 am Title: Chapter 13
The tension in this chapter was delicious. Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: You are very welcome.
Date: 05/12/10 12:42 am Title: Chapter 13
Ohh *O*
I had been waiting for this update! And as always amazing! Love it so much
Please continue soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much Chiklpr, I hope you continue to enjoy what is to come.
Date: 05/11/10 10:57 pm Title: Chapter 13
Naughty Tom! Thinking those things with Bill RIGHT there like THAT! (though I'm sure Bill would have done anything Tom asked if he'd done so nicely ;P)
I've been waiting FOREVER for you to update, glad you did, more soon!
XD
Author's Response: I believe Bill would have done anything Tom asked no matter how he asked it. And I doubt that my mind would have stayed clean with that bounty before me.
Date: 05/11/10 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 13
Tomi please use care. What will Bill be like now if Tom fully reset him? That was a very clear picture of what a humanoid looks like when being worked on. I kind of feel badly for Bill because its a violation of sorts eventhough he said it was ok. I don't know why I feel that way I just do. I really really hope this isn't a bad idea.
Author's Response: Put your mind at ease asahi, Bill has no issues with being worked on. He will not suffer any truama :)
Date: 05/11/10 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 13
I'm enjoying this so much. A rich and interesting universe and the story is unfolding at a very satisfying pace. I love a good AU so I was immediately pulled in by the idea, then taken by your attention to detail and of course, the characters. :) Fantastic job and looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you so very much for your kind words. This review made me smile when I read it, I am happy that you are enjoying the world I am trying to create. I hope you enjoy reading what is to come.rnrnP.S. I absolutely adore your callsign :)
Date: 05/11/10 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 13
Ich Liebe!!!! oh my goshness, I actually called my mother (who is a doctor) and was like "Uhmmm mom what the heck is a cervical and thoracic vertebrae" yeah... i think that was one of the weirdest questions ive asked her LMAO she was like WTF????
anywho i loved the little table scene between bill and tom. -fans self- totally yummi yummi yummi
Author's Response: Thank you.