Date: 05/24/10 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 17
OMG Bill is so submissive and adorable. Will he ever get angry? Maybe "anger" is not installed in his system, but it would be interesting to see him get angry once. :)
Author's Response: He is exceedingly submissive. I actually did not plan on it being this extreme, but it seems to suit his character well.
Date: 05/24/10 12:39 am Title: Chapter 17
I'm a bit awe struck by the fact that Tom has not addressed that fact that Bill might be perfect for him. His protectiveness of Bill with Merrick is not just because she has a gossipy mouth. I feel it is much much more and Tom is afraid. He is frightened of what could happen of what may already be happening and I'm a little sad. Tom knows everything about Bill now. He was inside his head and inside his body even if only for a mainteneninse ( sorry my computer says this word is wrong no matter how I spell it ) purpose. Surely there must have been some kind of bond formed. I feel like Bill is pure in his thought pattern for Tom even if it was twisted with memories. He can still split the difference in his head that it was Tom he wanted and not his past. I can understand Bill being confused and his mind does seem to work much like a human mind but still. He knew the difference I think. I'm glad nothing drastic happened with them going out i had a fear that something would since Bill seems so child like at the moment in awe of everything around him. He is so sweet and Tom does have a romantic streak I can feel it. I just have a feeling that when he finally realizes he cares so much for Bill it will be too late.
Author's Response: I apologize for the delay in responding to your review.rnrnI agree with your surprise that Tom has not addressed his feelings for Bill. This will happen soon, I assure you. Both characters need some time to go over how they feel for one another. I have posted Chapter 18, hopefully this will give you a bit of satisfaction when it comes to their feelings for one another.
Date: 05/23/10 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 17
I absolutely love you're writing, Halcyon. It's amazing.
Author's Response: Thank you very much Nea :)
Date: 05/23/10 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 17
Lol, I was kinda iffy about the night out, since I really don't like going to bars and other nightlife, but this chapter was awesome! Yeah, I did enjoy it.
Few mistakes/words missing: The center of the club was broken up by large glowing cylinders...
...his hair wet with sweat as he ground furiously against his man for the evening, whose mouth was...
Lol, Andi's reaction was rather amusing :D
Author's Response: Thank you for the corrections, I appreciate it.rnrnAnd I agree, I dislike nightlife for the most part. I was trying to make it sound agreeable. Something had to happen in this chapter, I needed to get out of the apartment.
Date: 05/23/10 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 17
I've loved this from the beginning!! Gosh this is such a great universe you've created! :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much, I am glad that you are enjoying it. I am having a great time writing it.
Date: 05/23/10 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 17
Gah, Tom needs to stop effing around with these thoughts of getting rid of Bill!
More soon!
Author's Response: Agreed, he does.
Date: 05/23/10 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 17
He canīt sell him :-(
Author's Response: We shall see what happens, I doubt that Tom will be able to let Bill go so easily.
Date: 05/23/10 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 17
OMG continue pleaseee!
:DD i love it!
Author's Response: Thank you, there will be more to come.
Date: 05/23/10 05:34 am Title: Chapter 16
Uaa~~ Andreas getting topped by a big, dark and handsome bouncer. Hoho.... X__X sounds like fun! XD I love playful and slightly slutty Andreas, I'll never know why. Question: Was there confusion between the 'Fifth' and 'First' districts in this chapter? It's just first Andreas is complaining about Tom liking living in the First district and then he proceeds to tell Bill that in fact he can imagine him enjoying high class in the first district as well, and so on. I haven't slept in some time, frightfully tired, so maybe it's me. I just didn't want to be mixed up, excuse me if I said it sounding absurd! xD I love the colour of this chapter, really. I already had a great picture of the futuristic setting in my mind's eye, but I love how it was emphasised, expanded and strengthened here. It's futuristic, but it's magical. (I'll always prefer Sci-fi over fantasy, it must be my inner geek.) Bill is so cute - so lost and child-like, I love it. Tom damnit, stop contemplating selling him, rawr! Anyhoo~ I'll shut up. Fantastic~~ n___n
Author's Response: Very good eye! I will have to go back and edit that. Yes, I was confusing myself with the districts while I was writing. I have a dyscalculia, a disorder where you processing numbers is quite difficult. You will notice that I try to spell out numbers far more often than actually typing the number itself. rnrnThank you very much for the praise, I am happy you are enjoying the storyline! My wife is in love with Andreas and therefor will be keeping him around as an interesting character. It is hard to not become absorbed in him, I find him so interesting.
Date: 05/22/10 11:39 pm Title: Chapter 16
I loved this. I loved Bill's reaction to everything and the detail that was put into it. The colors and textures are wonderful :) I can see the futuristic city of Chicago in my mind as if it were really like that. The tram was amazing I could see Bill looking curiously at it and then his reaction when he stepped through. I would do the same the first time i'm sure. When they finally made it to the club i started wondering if going out was such a good thing. The bouncer I wonder..... Anyway... Tom was attentive and I wonder if he even realizes that he is so with Bill. Andreas still makes me think of Cocoa. I love him.
Author's Response: I am glad you enjoyed the chapter. It was a lot of fun to write the vision I have of the city, I am glad you liked he textures and the colouration that I tried to get across.
Date: 05/22/10 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 16
Ohh interesting!
Pleasee update soon!
(LL
Author's Response: Thank you, I hope it continues to hold your interest.
Date: 05/22/10 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 16
Andreas can NOT have Bill!
What the hell is Tom even thinking about it?!
More soon!
Author's Response: Tom is being ridiculous, give him some time. He shall come around.
Date: 05/22/10 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 16
All I can pretty much say is that I LOVE this fic hun! I've never had the time to post a review but I took the time to do it now after I finished reading this update. I love how you write the characters and make them your own. The ideas in this are unique as hell. I usually can't read sci-fi of any kind but this one I love. Drew me in from the very first chapter I read and now I can't stop reading. I fangirl almost when I see it's been updated. Can't wait for the next one!
- Meg
Author's Response: Thank you very much for the praise Meg! I am glad that you are enjoying HUMANOID as much as I am enjoying writing it.
Date: 05/19/10 11:21 am Title: Chapter 15
Andi also scares me. For a little man as you write him seems to have the ability to pick Tom up like a rag doll and throw him half across the wold. I din't know that Bill being a Humanoid would bruise. That was a surprise. One thing that I don't like that Andi keeps on saying. "What's yours is mine." Bill is NOT Andi's Tom's maybe but that is about it. I don't know how Tom is going to go about trying to sell Bill now that Andi is in the picture. For something that seemed hard before now has evolved into a full fledged problem. So on another note it took me a while to read both these chapters. So I EXPECT to be seeing a new one like my tomorrow. Snap snap. I am pretty sure Andi does in fact have blue eyes. Also he has bleach blonde hair. He also keeps his hair in a classic EMO cut. Thank you for updating. I would make some fan art but I have been jam packed with a bunch of projects. BUT if there is a seen that you want me to draw in the feature let me know. But I do have a rule. Nothing that is Twincest. I think that statement narrowed down the ideas about 75% ~Laughs~ Let me know Kay.
Author's Response: I hope that you will come to enjoy Andi, he is a strong and feisty character but he is a good man.
Date: 05/19/10 10:55 am Title: Chapter 14
Wow. That is scary. I know that Bill has the ability to crush someone but I din't think you were going to use it. I am feeling sorry for Bill though. He is lost and is not understanding Tom to well. Next chapter I go. Thank you for the update.
Author's Response: You are welcome, as always.
Date: 05/19/10 02:09 am Title: Chapter 15
Oh, my goodness. I love the way you depict Andi-I know very little of him as well-so demanding, self-certain, and sophisticated. I like that Bill is able to bruise, it makes him seem more human. Can I take this as clue that Tom will catch on to the same detail?
Author's Response: I will reveal no secrets ;)
Date: 05/16/10 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 15
OOOOHHHH i rly rly like this. Plz more but tomi and bill have 2 be in love :)
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 05/16/10 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 15
I can't believe Tom hit Bill! That was a little uncalled for!
I love Andreas!
More soon!
Author's Response: I am glad you love Andreas, he was fun to write.
Date: 05/16/10 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 14
........... I had to read it again.... It was just that damn amazing.... Good god i love this, like fried oreos! O.o...they are quite tasty BTW....
Author's Response: I am glad you are enjoying it, I normally reread it every few weeks just to refresh my memory.
Date: 05/16/10 11:48 am Title: Chapter 15
LOL, great chapter!!
Author's Response: Thank you!