Date: 06/27/10 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Really interesting first chapter! Good idea, can't wait to see where you're gonna take this !
Author's Response: Thank you. I hope that you enjoy what is to come.
Date: 06/18/10 10:57 am Title: Chapter 17
Thank You very much. I enjoyed the chapter, I also like the improved banner. Did you do that? Or was it someone else that you know? I really hate that woman. She just has the worst timing in the world.
Author's Response: I updated the banner myself, I liked the original idea but before I was working on Microsoft Paint. It was time for an upgrade ;)
Date: 06/13/10 07:59 am Title: Chapter 16
The cities divided into status. Neat. This fic is truly awesome. The technology and the lack of it all in one place or world. I am sorry that I have not gotten around to reading your fics's updates I have been really busy with work. I will try and read another chapter tomorrow. Thank you so much for updating.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing, I understand all too well what it means to be busy.
Date: 06/09/10 03:45 pm Title: Chapter 18
I am also flattered for your thank you to me, as it was me who nominated it. I actually nominated it in another category too, but I think the nomination form didn't make it, cause I never got the confirmation mail back... :(
Anyway, I love this story, and I think it IS worth the nomination, and even though there's many great fics in the AU category, I'm probably gonna vote for this one. I am really enchanted with this fic.
The last chapter was also a piece of art - I think it's kinda sad, the way Bill is feeling, but at the same time it's so cute how the boys(or should I say 'a boy and the humanoid' lol?) are acting. I hope they will soon understand that they're meant to be together. :)
With love, Karin.
Author's Response: Thank you very much Karin, I really do appreciate the nomination. I found it very flattering to be included with many of the authors that I admire so very much. I have to be honest I felt very out of place lol.rnrnI am glad you are enjoying the storyline so far, and I promise I will try to get through the next chapter as soon as possible.rnrn- Halcyon
Date: 06/09/10 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 18
Hey halcyon this is diamond i made a new account :D okay hmm... i REALLY liked this chapter... but idk if this sounds rude or bitchy and i sincerly apologize if it does.... but it seems like the chapter was missing something.... like all of you chapter usually have this spark and this one seemed to be lacking it..... It was good but it was lacking your usual spark, like something was missing....
I feel like a bitch now - hides face -
but it was good dear.
Author's Response: Thank you very much, I appreciate the criticism.
Date: 06/08/10 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 18
This story touches just about everything I like in fiction - massive changes in society, robotics, love and affection, violence, male-male relationships and Halcyon's writing.
Author's Response: <3
Date: 06/08/10 09:23 am Title: Chapter 18
Hi! Well, it's a good thing that you have been nominated, because otherwise I'd've missed this story and now that I have read in one go all the chapters there are, I can safely say I would have missed out big time! I have read my fair share of fics on this and other sites, but your story is really something else, something unique both in its concept and in its execution. You have a true gift for portraying your characters innermost feelings and for creating a whole new universe out of nothing. I am partial for AUs and sci-fi anyway, but your story is truly among the cream of the crop of this genre. You have made me shead a few tears multiple times, I would only like to highlight a couple of scenes, from Bill's memory with Jacek that Tom looked at, Bill's thoughts in general, including his breakdown in the kitchen, the tv report on how humans destroyed the humanoids...you have made my heart ache for these poor creatures, existing in a limbo, between humans and machines, cursed with real feelings and desires and a need for another to hold them...a story of how humans were conceited enough to play god and then abandon their creations to their fate. Of course you haven't revealed the reason for the Recall, and I'm anxiously waiting for it, but I'm sure nothing can justify this move enough.
All in all, superb piece of fiction, a joy to read and if any of the fics deserve to win in the cathegory AU, then it is surely one of them! Please, update soon, I can't wait to read on!
Author's Response: Thank you so very much for your review, and I apologize for the great delay in my response. I have kept your review on my phone for quite some time as I was so deeply touched by your kind words and encouragement. I am happy that you have been able to take so much from these characters and the life that they lead. It means very much to me that I have been able to provide you with something that brings you enjoyment, I hope that you continue to be pleased with Humanoid as the story continues.rnrn- Halcyon
Date: 06/07/10 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 18
Congratulations on the nomination! It's well deserved. I'm glad you added one of Bill's memories in this one to clear things up a little, and the description after Bill cries was amazing! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter! A new hairstyle and deeper feelings-indecision over whether to sell Bill? :3
Author's Response: I am glad you are happy with the memories, there are more to come.
Date: 06/07/10 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 18
can I has a birthday update?
and a few before then?
yes, I am in LOVE with this story. Please more updates. (my birthday is the 15th, in case you feel the need to respond to my plea)
Author's Response: I am sorry for the great delay in my response :(
Date: 06/07/10 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 18
I have fallen in love with this story!! the first thing i thought when i read the first chapter was "this would make a good movie" I love your style of writing and it has inspired me to finish writing a story I've been working on for a while now. :)
Author's Response: I agree, this would make a good movie lol. Unfortunately I don't think I can afford to hire James Cameron to create it for me. I spend enough money just trying to support my wife lol.
Date: 06/07/10 01:21 am Title: Chapter 18
I can't help but feel so sad for Bill, he's so lost:( When he was crying on the floor of the kitchen I wanted so badly for someone to hear him and pick him up and hold him. I can't imagine loosing everything you've ever known and finding myself being moved from place to place so long. Poor Bill. I can understand why he felt Tom didn't care and he doesn't feel like this is where he should be. I can't tell you how many times I felt that way after my parents died. I know what it's like to feel lost and alone. It's really scary and hard on your mind. It was a relief that Tom felt horrible for what happened and that he made it known to Bill. I'm glad that what Tom said could bring Bill at least some comfort. I just hope that they can realize their feelings before something happens.
Author's Response: I wanted to hold Bill myself in that scene, I am actually regretting not making it longer. It was heartfelt, and difficult to write. I am glad that you felt something from it, and as always I am glad to read your reviews.rnrn- Halcyon
Date: 06/07/10 12:26 am Title: Chapter 18
Can't wait for more!
xD
Author's Response: Thank you
Date: 06/06/10 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 18
Tom's gonna get corn rows! :D
Author's Response: Indeed!
Date: 06/06/10 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 18
LOL. Gosh I wonder what he's going to do to his hair... I have a feeling XD
And aww, I think injuries are like the best way to bond XDD
And ooh! Nomination!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: 06/06/10 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 18
I'm absolutely pleased to see another chapter up! (Rather, chapters?) Gosh, are we on #18 already? Time has flown south for the winter! (Haha, but it is summer =__=) *clears throat* Well then, I don't know where to begin, because these final two chapters have been wonderful.
I'm continuously having problems wrapping my head around Bill, and all the very, very real human emotions he's feeling, coupled with the fact he's a machine. It has nothing to do with you or your fantastic writing, but personally, I cannot imagine a non-living being struggling, let alone struggling so deeply. I can't see the mechanics, it just doesn't process, though I'm trying. Nonetheless, I feel for him, I really do. Bill's character in this is sweet, gentle and easy to sympathise.
Tom's apology warmed my heart, it was so decent and genuine sounding, I was terribly pleased with how that turned out. It's really wonderful to follow how their relationship develops in such a unique setting and situation, and you never fail to paint the perfect picture. I'm excited for Bill fixing up Tom's hair for some reason, it's rather silly, but I still am regardless. xD
Amazing job, always a pleasure to read and as routine works, I'll be awaiting the next installment patiently!
PS: Congratulations on your nomination. I think you deserve it! =D
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review, I appreciate your praise.rnrnI am myself having a harder time understanding and feeling Tom that I am with Bill. I find him to be acting more mechanically at times.rn
Date: 06/06/10 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 18
Awww awesome1
I missed this fic!
update soon!
xoxo
Author's Response: Thank you very much.
Date: 05/27/10 01:41 am Title: Chapter 17
hey, this time Merrick facilitated something good happening. thanks for the updates, keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you for the praise!
Date: 05/26/10 01:22 am Title: Chapter 17
oh this is so good im sitting on the edge of my seat wanting more!!
Author's Response: I am glad you like it!
Date: 05/25/10 06:21 am Title: Chapter 17
aww adorable!!
Author's Response: Thank you
Date: 05/24/10 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 17
About time someone dragged those two out of the house :) Andreas is a great character, over-the-top but in such a purposeful and likable way. Again, every new setting you describe is fantastic as the last and the journey through the city, to the sultry club, was no exception. An ideal place to build up the tension, really ;)
Author's Response: Agreed, they had to get out for a while, the apartment was driving me insane. I am glad that you like Andreas, I adore him. There will be some more of him, and definitely some more character work outside of the confines of Tom's home.