Date: 07/04/10 10:06 am Title: Chapter 18
This was such an emotional roller coaster of a chapter. Poor Bill down and up and repeat.
Author's Response: Indeed, Bill is having a very hard time dealing with his emotions.
Date: 07/04/10 03:25 am Title: Chapter 17
She is freaking annoying. When will we get Bill and Tom sexy time again? We all need it.
Author's Response: I agree with you entirely! I am craving some more intimacy between the two.
Date: 07/04/10 03:12 am Title: Chapter 16
The city sounds beautiful and complicated.
Author's Response: Thank you, I enjoy the imagery.
Date: 07/04/10 02:59 am Title: Chapter 15
Tom's kind of screwed here!
Author's Response: Poor Tom.
Date: 07/04/10 02:49 am Title: Chapter 14
Wow a panicked Bill is a dangerous Bill. And poor Tom stuck and being used.
Author's Response: Bill is very dangerous. Keep that in mind at all times.
Date: 07/04/10 02:36 am Title: Chapter 13
Open cavity and the patient is talking Jim through it funny and creepy.
Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked it. This is one of my favourite scenes.
Date: 07/04/10 02:23 am Title: Chapter 12
Uh oh Tom's already very attached and he doesn't even know it ha
Author's Response: Indeed he is.
Date: 07/04/10 02:14 am Title: Chapter 11
I bet Jacek is very dead probably been dead a while. Poor Bill.
Author's Response: A good guess. There will be more on Jacek later.
Date: 07/04/10 02:03 am Title: Chapter 10
Oh weird he had a girl's name? Poor Bill not knowing what will become of himself. Scary biscuits.
Author's Response: Very scary. To have your future completely unknown, and also being unclear of your own past.
Date: 07/04/10 01:51 am Title: Chapter 9
Merrick is a nosey busy body who needs to get lost. Shit!
Author's Response: Lol, no one seems to enjoy Merrick.
Date: 07/04/10 01:39 am Title: Chapter 8
Dude that totally sucks!
Author's Response: I know.
Date: 07/04/10 01:19 am Title: Chapter 6
Dude Tom sucks for basically killing Bill. I wonder who we get in place of Bill now.
Author's Response: There is more than meets the eye.
Date: 07/04/10 01:07 am Title: Chapter 5
Lol Tom perving out while Bill transfers his list of qualifications like a whore...how sad.
Author's Response: You have a very interesting mind. The way you translate the scenes is very different from my own. I enjoy it.
Date: 07/04/10 12:58 am Title: Chapter 4
Lol Tom really has been along for a Lon time. I wonder who he was built for and I wonder how log ago he was lost in transition?
Author's Response: Hopefully the future chapters will shed more light for you.
Date: 07/04/10 12:47 am Title: Chapter 3
Awe they programmed the humanoid too well. People get attached and it gets attached to you. What happens to a humanoid who's person dies? How awful to watch the person you love grow old and die and be left behind. I'm already feeling sad.
Author's Response: I agree, watching your loved ones die would be horrible.
Date: 07/04/10 12:37 am Title: Chapter 2
Wow neither of them.are behaving in a way I expected. I like that. Thank for not being predictable.
Author's Response: I am glad you are finding the events surprising :)
Date: 07/04/10 12:02 am Title: Chapter 1
Ooh a very intriguing beginning. I'm looking forward to seeing what else will happen. Great beginning. Well written, well written stories tend to be few and far between.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your praise, I appreciate it :)rnrnIf you enjoy this I highly recommend "A Beautiful Kill" by Ghostie. She is one of my favourite authors, and I envy her incredible style when it comes to fantasy writing.
Date: 07/03/10 12:52 am Title: Chapter 19
The way you express Tom's emotions and Bill's confusion is wonderful!
I also adore the question this story brings up--what constitutes a human, or at least a living being? Bill is blurring those lines and it's really hard on Tom, I can tell.
Also, that prayer is beautiful! Please keep up the wonderful work, because I'm hooked! The conflict and situations you depict are very vivid and real, they draw the reader in so well. All I have are praises to sing for you!
Author's Response: Thank you very much Melluransa, I appreciate your praise, it really makes a difference in my writing. Thank you.
Date: 07/01/10 02:38 pm Title: Chapter 19
wow i will read more i love this story
Author's Response: Thank you.
Date: 07/01/10 12:42 am Title: Chapter 19
tom!!! ooo i am excited for the shoppinggggg
Author's Response: Me too! My wife is constantly bothering me for more Andreas and more shopping. He's very excited about the upcoming chapter.