Date: 07/14/10 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 20
*dances*
An update!
Glad to see you back, dearie!
Author's Response: I weep with excitement every time you review. I am such a fan of your work and it always surprises me that you are reading my story.
Date: 07/13/10 01:02 pm Title: Chapter 6
I felt like I'm watching the movie A.I for the for time. How bill's robot with human emotions is giving me the chills (in a good way).
The part that he said 'please don't kill me' killed me a little.
Author's Response: This is yet another time I keep hearing about robot films I haven't seen.rnrnThank you!
Date: 07/13/10 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 2
the way you describe the waking of bill, you're a genius.
Author's Response: Thank you very much, I enjoy Bill so much.
Date: 07/11/10 01:09 am Title: Chapter 19
Holy... I'm in love. Amazingly written, and very captivating. Keep writing!
Author's Response: Thank you very much Karle, keep reading!
Date: 07/07/10 11:54 am Title: Chapter 18
I like Tom's personnality. He's so caring. He's strong but he have a soft heart.
Author's Response: Thank you Sarajuly. I enjoy Tom as well, although it has taken me a while to really understand that man.
Date: 07/07/10 11:34 am Title: Chapter 17
i love the description of the town, pretty ingenious system. Andi is going to freak out when he will learn Bill is the humanoid.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! And yes, Andi will flip a bitch when he finds out.
Date: 07/07/10 10:58 am Title: Chapter 15
poor Tom, that's so unfair but how he could explain what happened.
Author's Response: Indeed.
Date: 07/07/10 10:41 am Title: Chapter 14
i think Bill have a little adaption probleme. In the other hand, he only had one person in his life.
Author's Response: Agreed.
Date: 07/06/10 06:26 am Title: Chapter 1
P.P.S.:Lol, i love that story < 3
Author's Response: Thank you very much.
Date: 07/06/10 06:26 am Title: Chapter 1
P.S.:Yes,Andi's eyes are penetrating blue,but his surname isn't Schyuler (that;s a german poet right?)but Guhne.
Author's Response: I know absolutely nothing about Andreas in real life, so I gave him my last name. And yes, it is German.
Date: 07/06/10 06:25 am Title: Chapter 1
I had nothing to do one of these days and my web connection was very weak and unstable ,so i decided printing a fiction in THF so i can read it and keep the boredome away.The title HUMANOID-featured fic-caught my eye and i started with 20 pics from 90.
I read them and i had a dream about B5354-honestly!!!First thing i did in the morning was print the rest of the fic.Now i'm addicted....
Really,that;s so emotional.I'm especially inlove with the parts where Bill was mourning over the eagle-his words were so beautiful.I like how the plot is going for now-that;s weird because i don't usually enjoy AU slash-Bill's character seems so lovable and caring and lol he reminds me of my sister :D The only thing i dislike is Tom;s coldness -i mean why doesn't he cuddle more often Bill,it's not fair from him ;(
Can't wait for their relationship to develope,update sooner
Author's Response: Thank you very much anorexia, I am glad that you are enjoying the fiction. I am very jealous of your dream with B5354!
Date: 07/06/10 03:50 am Title: Chapter 19
Halcyon, I burst into tears reading this. Call me emotional but the ending of this just really got to me. Drowning must be THE WORST way to die. Well one of them.
Why does Tom blame himself though? He couldn't have prevented it from happening. Still it was very, very, sad. I think Tomi, need not blame himself anymore.... It was very sad though. You always seem to explain emotions so powerfully in such short sentences it seizes to amaze me.
Now on another note. *wipes stray tear*
OHMGAH! YOU WERE FEATURED! *dances jig for you* That's awesome! It was very much deserved! Also, you've been so M.I.A.!!! Come back!! Ich miss dich! But anyways, very good job on this chapter! i thoroughly enjoyed it! and i can't wait for Andi and Bill to go shopping! *wipes forehead* This should be interesting"
Author's Response: Thank you very much my dear, I appreciate your praise and that you have taken the time to review. rnrnOn a personal note I apologize for my neglect with Beta work. I have recently been put on high communication restrictions by Jen and have not been allowed to email or go online for the most part. I will hopefully be back online this weekend and we can finish work so you can begin posting.
Date: 07/05/10 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 12
i keep thinking Tom won't be able to sell him at the end.
Author's Response: I do hope that he doesn't.
Date: 07/05/10 11:59 am Title: Chapter 19
Well, now I've caught up with the whole story, so I'll be anxiously awaiting your updates! I enjoyed this look into Tom's past, and the emotions present visiting the graves. I'm worried Andreas is going to realize what Bill is, but other than that, I'm looking forward to their shopping trip. A bit of levity to balance the seriousness of this chapter, perhaps?
Author's Response: Ah you have a good grasp of how sneaky Andreas is, he is definitely hard to pull a fast one on.rnrnI am glad that you enjoyed the scene with Tom speaking to his family, it was difficult to write.
Date: 07/05/10 11:43 am Title: Chapter 18
For some reason I'm very charmed by the way you're incorporating Tom's cornrows into the story; rather than just being the way his hair is, you've made it about Tom and Bill, which I really like.
Author's Response: Thank you, I wanted to make it something special. I actually began with Tom's hair down and completely forgot about it until my Beta brought it up.
Date: 07/05/10 11:05 am Title: Chapter 14
Ooh, that went from sexy to scary very suddenly. I'm glad that they didn't sleep together, though. You've done such a good job establishing Bill's feelings for Jacek as genuine, so I'm glad you're not having him just immediately forget his past lover in favor of Tom. As always, a great chapter!
Author's Response: I wanted them to sleep together very badly, but my Beta smacked me and told me to calm down and keep their pants on for a while longer. I will let her know that you approve :)
Date: 07/05/10 10:16 am Title: Chapter 7
Oh, I'm so glad to know that Tom didn't actually reset him! And the look into Bill's past was very interesting, as was the news item about the destruction of the humanoids. You did an excellent job infusing such a short description with such horror...I can totally picture what a terrible scene it would be. All in all, a fantastic chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you, the news item was a fun part to write.
Date: 07/05/10 10:06 am Title: Chapter 6
Poor Bill, I can't believe Tom so callously reset him. I'm really enjoying this story so far. Your writing is excellent, and Tom's reactions to the whole situation feel very genuine.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I am surprised that you are pleased with Tom's reactions so far, I am finding his personality difficult to get into. I cannot seem to put a good strong finger on who Tom really is as a character. If you have any thoughts about him please let me know, I would be happy to have any insight you may have on him.
Date: 07/05/10 12:58 am Title: Chapter 19
this is such a great story! i love it soo much!! i want to know wuts gonna happen sooooo bad! hurry and update again soon plz!!! bye!
Author's Response: Thank you, I am happy you are enjoying it!
Date: 07/04/10 10:17 am Title: Chapter 19
Poor Tom is so conflicted and confused. You'll figure it out we all do
Author's Response: Tom is definitely very conflicted. Hopefully things will clear up for him soon.