Date: 07/20/10 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 4
The random wanking scene was quite random, but hey! I'm sure you know more about random boners than I do, my dear Halcyon. I'm loving this!!
Author's Response: I enjoy that you call it "wanking". I think that's hysterical for some reason.
Date: 07/20/10 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 2
Most of the times when you used 'it's' in the chapter, you meant 'its'. But that's okay. 'Its' is possive, like, 'its hands'. GREAT so far!!
Author's Response: Yes I am aware, I do that all the time and seem to have no concept of being able to remember it.
Date: 07/19/10 01:05 pm Title: Chapter 20
Loves it! Can't wait for the next chappie....
Just wanted to say good job with writing this, your doing very well of putting this into words. Some authors are horrible at that.. but you are really good!
Author's Response: Thank you very much Light. I am glad that you are enjoying the writing.
Date: 07/16/10 11:46 am Title: Chapter 20
This is a bit strange but I was watching an episode of Star Trek TNG and it was an episode where they were trying to decide if Commander Data has a right to his own life and freedom to chose what is right for him. It made me think of Bill in this story and reminded me once again how both Bill and Tom used memories to come up with solutions to problems they are facing. Bill remembered being tested while trying to come back at Andreas's little battle of whit. Tom's memories and a place with emotional memory to come to his conclusion that he needs Bill. So to elaborate on my previous review, I feel like a machine based on human concepts and human way of thinking and feeling is an extention ( no matter how I spell this it seems wrong) of ourselves as we wish we could be.
Author's Response: "Extension"rnrnBill and Tom are both creatures that seem to live in the past far more than they live in the present moment. I think it has a lot to do with how empty their lives seem now, and how full their memories make them feel. Bill craves the love that he used to have, and really has nothing current to live for. Tom misses the closeness of his family, having lost both members and having no one else to be with him.
Date: 07/16/10 03:08 am Title: Chapter 20
ooh lala ! *waggles eyebrows mischievously*
Author's Response: I am glad you liked it.
Date: 07/16/10 01:40 am Title: Chapter 20
I've read all 20 chapters today and enjoyed it immensely! I really like what you've done with your characterizations, and the fact that the TH tattoo on the back of Bill's neck has been turned into his key absolutely made me grin :) Can't wait to read more and see where you (and Tom, Bill, and Andi) end up!
Author's Response: Thank you amythystmoon. I am happy that you are enjoying the story, and that you like what I have done with Bill's tattoo. I hope you enjoy what is to come.
Date: 07/15/10 02:53 pm Title: Chapter 20
I loved it :D hihi, Lol-scene with Andi xD Haha, Bill the wolf, deffs xD I hope you continue soon!!
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: Thank you Chi. I hope to have another update before the month is up.
Date: 07/15/10 11:07 am Title: Chapter 20
I. Hate. You. .... Nah i don't i love you! *glomps* I HATE THE FACT YOU ENDED THERE DAMMIT! *glare* Really H, after that long wait, you end THERE....Tis perfect. :D
I have my views on Andreas. I somewhat like him, and at the same time I don't. I mean he's very... Haughty shall i say? He needs humble pie. *huffs* But then again, that's what makes his character. His attitude. Also, he IS very brash about his comments on Tom. I mean, he's so mean and ... Harsh! *tsk tsk* That plays a big role in me not liking him. Also, i noticed the way he treated the "help" at the store. Totes not acceptable! I mean... It was very rude of him. I didn't like it. Lol i actually yelled at my computer.
(Two red bulls and three ice cream sandwiches and i'm yelling at inanimate objects ._.)
Now, the things i do like about Andreas is his confidence. (Still it can be considered arrogant) Andreas seems like the type that can put on a plastic bag, or a potato sack and be like "Yeah I make this shit look good." I just personally feel he needs to tone it down a bit... but not loose his self :)
On Bill, he somewhat confuses me, though he still is my favorite character. I can't really explain my confusion. He seems lost. In this massive world, he seems lost without jaeck. I think, he's searching for the love he had with jaeck in tom. Furthermore here comes Andreas flailing around in Bill's line of, shall we say vision? In his line of vision, and Bill has to deal with yet ANOTHER confusing thing. (I think Andreas is going to tey to make a move on him) Poor bill is just looking for love.
Tom... I can somewhat see your struggle to get "in tune" with him, but darling, you're doing just fine so don't worry.
If you ever need a braistorm buddy darlin' you know my email. ^_^ *glomps*
(on a sidenote) in your other review i saw you were put on lockdown by jen *tsk tsk tsk* HALCYON!!! *growls* *sigh* Darlin.... Bah. Well i was going to shoot you with a cock harpoon next time you got on yahoo but... i'll just Glomp you to death, ja?
^-^ Ttys darlin
Author's Response: I am glad that you approve of Andreas. He is definitely a favourite of mine.
Date: 07/15/10 10:39 am Title: Chapter 20
Andi and Bill better hurry up and get their asses over to Tomi's place before he has a conniption in finding out that Bill is NOT home.
Author's Response: I highly approve of your use of the word conniption. It is rarely used and it really is a fantastic choice :)
Date: 07/15/10 07:52 am Title: Chapter 20
Uh oh, wait till Tom gets home!
LOVED this, can't wait for more!
XD
Author's Response: Thank you Shibby!
Date: 07/15/10 06:42 am Title: Chapter 20
awiiies *.* well i don't like andreas very much is this story :p but I like the whole plot and I can't wait for a new chappie :D
Author's Response: Not a fan of my Andreas? Send me an email and let me know why, I would be very interested to hear your opinion.
Date: 07/15/10 06:20 am Title: Chapter 20
I love this fic. I think I'll have to re-read this to make sure I got every detail.
Author's Response: I am glad that you love it, I myself just re-read one of my own favourites.
Date: 07/15/10 01:37 am Title: Chapter 20
So, Tom is being difficult, eh? Well, thank you for posting! I always look forward to new chapters, and nor is no exception! Bill and Andreas new relationship brings a whole new factor to the equation. I love it! And then there's Tom... :3
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review Eternity. I enjoy the forming relationship between Andreas and Bill, and I am glad that you approve.
Date: 07/15/10 01:07 am Title: Chapter 20
I am so proud of Bill standing up to Andreas. I am also pleased Tom took the time to see how things might be for Bill. I look forward to their post shopping interaction. =)
Author's Response: I am glad that you enjoyed the shopping trip, or at least what has happened so far.
Date: 07/15/10 12:50 am Title: Chapter 20
Will Bill be there when Tom arrives home? How long has Bill been in transit...did he get lost because he killed jereck? Is thar what happened? I've been mulling his all over for a while. Hum?!
Author's Response: No answers will be revealed in responses, you will have to be patient ;)
Date: 07/14/10 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 20
Hey!! Long time no update! Well I'm glad your back girl! I've been reviewing ever since the beginning and I love this! Congrats on the feature!
Author's Response: Thank you, I know the wait between updates was long. I hope to have another by the end of the month. And my wife is laughing hysterically at me being called a girl, he calls me that all the time ;)
Date: 07/14/10 10:47 pm Title: Chapter 20
While Bill and Andreas were shopping I kept imagining someone form the store noticing something different about Bill but I'm glad not. Andreas is a very sly personality and very charismatic in a nearly terrifying way. ( this is not a bad thing by the way... at least not right now ) I see that Bill has passed his little test with grace and agility. Bill's mind works in a very organized way and it was wonderful to be apart of that process. It is what makes Bill so real in his doll like state. However, Bill is not a doll at all or a mere robot.
Tom's mind works on a similar line as Bill. Things seem to be organizable and thought through in a processed way. The way he used cleaning his store and choosing a place that was so familiar. It allows for Tom's filing process to work it's magic and it also allows for him to feel something he can't feel in any other place. He can hear his father's voice so clearly in that place and it is comforting to hear this when needing to find your hearts own voice. I believe he did in the end but now it is up to him to put that answer to work.
Author's Response: I agree with your observation that Tom and Bill seem to think in a very organized fashion. I think this probably has something to do with my own thought processes being so disorganized and chaotic in every day life. I attempt to make up for this by staying as organized as possible in my writing, which ends in organized characters.
Date: 07/14/10 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 20
Woohoo!!! Tom is finally opening up!!! XD Hopefully Bill will too!!! I love Andi!!! I wish i had my own personal Andi myself his soo full of... awesomeness!!!! XP
Author's Response: I do have a personal Andi, and it's fantastic. Requires a lot of energy though.
Date: 07/14/10 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 20
Ah. *o* Make some more! :D
Author's Response: Will do.
Date: 07/14/10 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 20
I loved the cataloguing Bill's memory banks did to search for the correct response to Andreas! That was fantastic!
Author's Response: Thank you Sephora, I am glad you approve.