Date: 09/28/10 08:47 am Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoy reading your story.
In the beginning I thought "Please, don't let it be one of those bad Terminator copies".
But I got positively surprised.
Update soon, please.
Date: 09/13/10 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 21
can't wait for next chapter!
Author's Response: I hope you enjoy it.
Date: 09/06/10 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 21
I know its been awhile since we've posted.. don't fret there will be more soon
Author's Response: Yeah
Date: 08/30/10 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 21
WHY??!?!?!?!?!?! DON"T STOP!!!!!!
Author's Response: I'm sorry, I hope that the updates since this chapter have kept you busy.
Date: 08/23/10 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 21
Sorry sorry sorry. This review is so late and overdue. Okay so hi again it's me Teagan the creeper that's been reviewing since the first chapter! Greatly sorry for not reviewing for the past like what... four... six(ish) chapters but I have terrible timing and hadn't noticed that you updated
Anways just wanted to say that I love this story and all that you have done with this! It just keeps getting better and better with each chapter!
Author's Response: It's quite alright, I obviously am overdue at responding to my reviews.rnrnThank you so much, I am really happy that you are enjoying this story.
Date: 08/22/10 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 21
i didn't get the contest thing,prob. because i am idiot xD hmm Andi has something that I don't like,I feel like he's evil.Plus that Tomi is jealouus *lalala* hahhaha xD Well I can't wait to read mooore *_*
Author's Response: Tom is definitely jealous!
Date: 08/08/10 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 21
Oh my god, you're amazing. *___* And this story is phenomenal. Please, post extra-super-caladrifigousischly soon!
Okay, as for my prediction...:
I think that in the next chapter, it's Tom who finds Andreas, and angrily asks him what he did with Bill. Andreas confronts him about Bill being a Humanoid, and perhaps slaps him a couple times, walking off without giving Tom any indication as to whether he'll keep quiet or not.. And Merrick watches with wide eyes from behind a dumpster, or something XD Then Tom goes in the direction that Andreas was leaving, and searches for a while before finding Bill. Then they have loud, passionate sex in the bathroom, and go see a movie. (No, i kid, that's not in my prediction...more in my WANTS and NEEDS list XD)
Author's Response:
Date: 07/29/10 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 21
Since Andi figured out that Bill was a Humanoid by looking at the Prada label on his sweater (I'm assuming that Prada would be a past thing) I'm sure the story isn't taking the best turn. :)
There are two possible solutions in my mind.
Tom either found Andi at the right time and is wondering where Bill is, or someone else knows that Andi was with a Humanoid, and is confronting him.
I personally find the story fascinating. It's nothing like I've ever read before. I can't wait for the next Chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you very much Vallen, I am glad that you find the story fascinating :)
Date: 07/29/10 10:43 am Title: Chapter 21
Well by Andi's reaction to the Prada, that line of clothing was most likely made for Humanoids given the fact that Humanoids at one point were high end. Prada also must have fallen with the Humanoids. At lest Tom found Andi at the right time. Right when he put two and two together. Though Andi is not happy in the lest. He liked Bill. That is whats probable going to anger him the up most. It is not Tom's fault that Andi randomly stopped by and took Bill out shopping. That is all Andi's selfish and unmethodical actions. Poor Tom. He has enough on his plate with out Andi throwing a two ton wight upon it. I mean Andi wont know whom to contact do to the fact that Bill him self is a unique make and model Humanoid. I also worry about that chick that is always popping up randomly. She might end up learning to much information. Then what? I would say that Andi also knows to much right now. I do hope that Andi wont becomes cold and violent towards Bill, or want to turn Bill off. I think conniption is an appropriate word for the up coming chapter also conundrum. I feel sorry for Bill. He is the one that is going to get hurt the most in all of this. Well I am looking forward to the next chapter, thank you for updating.
Author's Response: Ah I am glad that you aren't forgetting about Merrick ;)
Date: 07/27/10 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 21
Uhm, in the next story, Andreas is going to attempt to make a move on Bill, or at least hint at it, Tom will become upset and there will be some physical violence and/or Bill panicking.
Date: 07/26/10 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 21
Awesome!! I'm so happy you finally put more chapters up!!the story is just fantastic, I'm loving it!!
uhh I think Andreas is going to find out that Bill is a Humanoid or...ummm or maybe Tom will find them kissing or something and then he will be so mad that want to get rid of Bill but then he realizes he can't live without him anymore LOL Hope you put the next chapter up soon!!!!
Date: 07/25/10 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 21
Ohhhh, the plot thickens! I love all the hints of things that don't exist anymore that give poor Bill away.
Ohhh, contest sounds fun, but I suck at these kinds of things. . . ummm--I think the hands on Andi's shoulders belong to Tom, he convinces Andi to be quiet in public, they hustle Bill back to Tom's apartment and they have a (probably loud) discussion there. Yeah.
Can't wait to read your (much better, I'm sure) version!
Date: 07/25/10 04:51 pm Title: Chapter 21
Ah Bill is speaking of things that don't exist any longer. Lost 10 years? or more in the past. Tom didn't catch him up because it was pointless. He didn't need to be updated because he was going to be sold. But Andi is smarter then he looks. He knows what Bill is. Oh my this may not be good at all.
Date: 07/25/10 11:15 am Title: Chapter 21
OO love this so much you are amazing i will read more
Date: 07/25/10 09:30 am Title: Chapter 21
First of all, let me just say that Bill has good taste. :D Let's see. How's about Tom and Andi find each other, both intent on telling each other that Bill is a humanoid. But what happens to Bill? STRANDED, bless his heart.
... this is why I don't write. :D Best wishes for next chapter!
Jane
Date: 07/25/10 04:39 am Title: Chapter 21
Well, Tom finds Andreas obviously. I think Andreas is shocked enough that he will blurt out to Tom was he knows. but maybe not. Bill will stun Tom by how sexy and beautiful he is in his new outfit. =) Keep up the great work, I can't wait for more.
Date: 07/24/10 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 21
So, i guess Belvedere vodka and Prada doesn't exist anymore in this world. Please, don't get Any executed.
Date: 07/24/10 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 21
I have no clue! I'm guessing that Prada went out of business around the same time the Humanoids did...?
This chapter was one of my favorites!
Date: 07/24/10 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 21
I think Tom is the one grabbing Andreas when he goes outside and he'll question Andi on where Bill is. Then they'll have a huge yelling match about how dangerous the situation with Bill is. Then Bill will walk outside and wonder why Tom was there and Tom will drag the both back to his house in order to hide
Date: 07/24/10 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 21
Bill was betrayed by his good taste, how ironic !
I think the strong hands belong to Tom, and I think Andi and him will argue about what to do with Bill. Perhaps we will learn why the Humanoids were destroyed =)
And because I like action I also predict that someone will hear the conversation between Tom and Andi.
Anyway it was an interesting chapter, I'd like to know more about what happenned to the Humanoids