Date: 10/05/10 12:48 am Title: Chapter 22
Omg O.o That was crazy.
You forgot to capitalize the 'K' in the the last dialogue, which distracted me.
Badass Bill is scary, and somehow cool at the same time.
Cue Tom being scared XD
Date: 10/04/10 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 22
Oh my God, Bill is an assassin... :) But he just wanted protect Tom, so I believe it is ok. Now I am curious how will Tom react..
Date: 10/04/10 11:23 am Title: Chapter 22
Is this my lucky day or something? I actually got to see an update of this fic. And wow, great chapter, hotness and action roll into one.
Seiously. I was so absorb reading this chapter that I felt like I'm watching a movie. Please don't let us wait so long ever again! (taken from bill's line "don't leave me ever again")
Date: 10/04/10 09:12 am Title: Chapter 22
Wow! I didn't expected that at all! It's a good thing, keeps things interesting and intriguing! Bill can be so dangerous to protect his Tomi ^^ Can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 10/04/10 08:22 am Title: Chapter 22
Bill sure can be dangerous when he wants to ! Is that why Humanoids were destroyed ?
Date: 10/04/10 06:45 am Title: Chapter 22
You should update it soon girl
thank you anyway :)
Date: 10/04/10 01:21 am Title: Chapter 22
Ok so I just realised I can't spell and that I said Tom has a way of subitting to Ham... What!? Ok you can make fun of me now but I ment him not ham. LOL!!!
Date: 10/04/10 01:17 am Title: Chapter 22
Wow!!!
This story has taken an unexpected turn however, it is not a bad thing. Andreas and all his cunning has uncovered the truth as I knew he would although I'm suprised it took this long. I knew the clues with the drink and sweater would tip him off. Andreas is well read and seems to know his worldly history. Had it not been for Bill's taste and love of the good life this may have been avoided but as it is I can't imagine Bill any other way.
Andreas had a right to be angery with Tom, this is a very big secret although not truly Tom's to tell. I can understand Andreas in this way because it is almost a betrayal. Tom kept something vital from him and the danger of the is horrifying. That Andreas is so privy to the black and white of this makes me more nervous. He at first saw Bill as this beautiful creature who was fragile but lovely just the same. Bill held a mysteriousness to him. Now he only sees danger and he forgot so quickly that he once saw Bill as his equil in mind and body. Bill may have it in him to be the dangerous humanoid but Bill himself does not think in a distructive pattern. In all of Andreas's pretentious glory he slaps Tom to once again show not only anger but his superiority, That Tom would be stupid enough to bring a humanoid into his life is inconcevable and vile. I some how trust Andreas even less now but maybe he will proove me wrong. Tom has a way of submitting to ham and Andreas knows this. I do hope Tom is stronger this time.
Tom is so cute when lost for words and Bill is beautiful no matter wha the wears. For the first time I saw a deeper feminien side to Bill. It is not as unnerving as I thought it would be. Bill has a demurness in this chapter which I find endearing ( I do prefer him as a man though ) Again you create a stunning scene with the skyline and the city and all it's lovely textures. I love the detail and I could almost see you compareing the sleekness of the marbel city with it's skyline so covered in blue with the smoothness of Bill's skin and the enchanting blue of the dress he wears. Their connection finally starting and Tom understanding that Bill wants him as well. I still love that Bill finds everything so facenating. When Bill thanks Tom his words are sincere and Tom's answer is some what the truth. I was a bit scared when they continued their romp in the ally and I was prooven correct but I was not expecting what happened. I was proud of Tom for protecting or wanting to protect Bill. The men were firghtening. I knew when Bill stepped forward he would not do so without a plan but I was unprepared for this out come. Bill was amazing though ;) he is clever and convinsing in his fragileness until now. There is no doubt that Bill is every bit as dangerous as Andreas would think and I do believe that Bill enjoyied this... to a point. Bill needed to protect Tom but it is unclear how Tom will react to Bill's short term crazyness. If Bill's thought process was to take the shot, it will maybe destroy him and maybe not. If Tom can not fix this damage then maybe he cannot sell Bill. Somehow I don't think one gun shot could do much to harm Bill although I could be mistaken. This should proove that TOm was Bill's only outside thought, that his ( Tom's ) life means more to Bill than his own. It is possible that if Bill is unable to avoid taking the shot that Tom could realize even more of what he feels for Bill. It would be interesting if the shot heard was not from the gun facing Bill but that of one behind him. It is true... GO TOm! Protect Bill at least a little and if not, Tom! Save him!!
Date: 10/04/10 12:21 am Title: Chapter 22
holy criznap how on earth did you expect someone to guess what happened in this chapter?!?!?! It was insane!! I really love this fic so far and am hoping, however unlikely it seems right now, for a happy ending. I wonder if we will find out what happened to Bill's little underground railroad thing. Was Jacek betrayed?Were they caught? you know?...but yea i love this fic so far and can't wait for more.
Date: 10/04/10 12:05 am Title: Chapter 22
ooooh! wow! such a full chapter! full of sexiness, action, fluff, all the good stuff! osm thank you so much!
Date: 10/03/10 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 22
OH SHIT. I think Tom's illusion of Bill has just been shattered o.o
Date: 10/03/10 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 22
OMFG. Not, coherent.
Ask Raiju, she was on the phone with me while i read this entire thing. OMFG. OMFG..... He bit the mans dick off..... omfg..
Date: 10/03/10 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 22
I have got to tell you:
Everytime I read this story, I fall harder in love with it. I especially loved the line, "which had been easier at the restaurant when he wasn’t harder than quantum physics"...omg. I lol'd hardcore...and shared with everyone in my y!chat messenger. For real. That was the most amusing analogy that I have heard in awhile. Thank you for this chapter, and the awesome laugh (even though I am sure it was unintended) I needed it. Much love.
Date: 10/03/10 09:17 pm Title: Chapter 22
oww:), omfg that was so good!! I´ve been waiting for you to update, I´m so happy you did :), this story is really something, is one of my favourites ever I think, really original, and sometimes disturbing(I like disturbing), just keep it up, I´m eager so see where this is going. :)
ps. Bill in lace panties almost made me come in my underwear :)
Date: 10/03/10 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 22
Did the man shoot Bill? Aaah. I'm scared. Poor thing, it really sucks that Andreas hates Humanoids - it isn't fair. :(
Date: 10/03/10 08:26 pm Title: Chapter 22
Wow! WHAT A CHAPTER! I don't think I've been this excited to review anything in forever! Where do I begin! (Get ready for one of Estricnina's own epic wall of text reviews!)
It started out great, because all my suspicions came to life and Andreas chewing Tom out was not only predicted but funny and also very critical. I love how it's all not just sunshines and rainbows, that your characterisations are consistent and well played. At first I had no idea how to view Bill in a dress like that, but I sure as hell tried, and I think for the most part succeeded. It's been a while since I've read about Bill in female clothing, so maybe my gears were rusted, but overall, very nice! I love the buildup there, with Tom just totally taken back by Bill's beauty. (As if he wasn't already. xD) I just wanted to point out, I had to re-read a few small parts here in the beginning, for your dialogue lines are a little spacey - that is you start new lines when the same person is talking and I got a bit confused as to who was saying what here and there. Just watch for that! :D
The scene in the vehicle of sorts was amazing. I tend to get on and off bored, for lack of better word, with smut(ish) scenes from time to time that reflect one after another, but the whole approach here was fantastic. Again, the pacing, the time taken to present every little feeling that somehow played an integral part in the overall picture - love it. What turned into a sweet kiss in hopes of acceptance, really ripened into a very, no - incredibly hot scene and it carrying on into the alley was ... you know, I pride myself on a extensive vocabulary, but you've pulled the words out from under me today. Even though I at first thought an alley? Tch, aw Tom, you know how to show a ladyrobot a good time, I couldn't help but repeat aloud quite soon this is actually really tastefully done! I'm so impressed!, of course everything felt so fresh and new because you didn't let us forget that Bill isn't human. Like I was born to be squicked, the Greek gods could not let me have my peace, even after accepting robot!sex (XD) - right after I said that, pleased, Bill executed that... um, self-lubricating thing and I think I squeaked aloud and turned away thereafter. XD No, though, I had a great laugh at my own silliness, and a joyous one for all your creativity after collecting myself, and in the end it feels no less tasteful than it had when I began it.
The only other time during this chapter that I think I went aw, gross! is when you mentioned Bill's left eye, I believe. Haha, again, another blow of reality that Bill is in fact a machine, and while the image of his one eye moving in ways it shouldn't, it was definitely awesome in the end. I was so shocked for the twist, the turn of events if you will - when Bill approached the men seemingly willingly, all naughty smiles included, I was like, 'seriously? Bill, seriously?', but it wasn't long before I was certain he hand a plan, even as he moved to blow one off unlike I thought he would. The whole... yeah no, everything from there on out, the complete snap into a seeming OOC personality, the blowing off the heads, the chopping off the guy's dick (mm, tasty. *cough*), all of it made me just... O___O. I suppose we'll understand in the upcoming chapter, and while I'm almost as frustrated as I imagine Bill/Tom to be for being interrupted (I feel as if -I- got all worked up and couldn't come, sheesh!), I'm doubly excited to find out the meaning behind all this craziness! ò.ó
It was a bit of a wait, but after reading a nice, healthy sized chapter, full of no less many questions and gear turners, who can even think to complain? You've really outdone yourself, and if you can't tell, this is the best of any chapter of any story I've read in gee, a very long time. Brilliant job, please, accept myself utmost appreciation for this incredible update. I look froward to future chapters, as I always have. *cookies*
Date: 10/03/10 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 22
GAH!! Of COURSE there's going to be a cliffhanger!! Grrr.... Please continue soon. I would love to know what happens next! This is becoming one of my all time favorites on this site. :)