Date: 10/23/10 11:21 am Title: Chapter 24
Oh noes! Tom! :(
More soon!
XD
Date: 10/23/10 10:41 am Title: Chapter 24
Poor bill. He must by traumatized knowing what he did to tom. It's so sad he was still hoping for playing housewife for tom.
Date: 10/23/10 09:57 am Title: Chapter 1
Sounds cool already!
Date: 10/23/10 12:11 am Title: Chapter 24
....what the fuck just happened??
Date: 10/22/10 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 24
HO MY SHIT MERRICK.... That's EXACTLY what i yelled out into the room. just sayin.
Date: 10/22/10 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 24
You merciful being, you. XD Double update! My gosh~
I don't have much to say... other than it will kill me until Tom and Bill are reunited. *faints* Very awesome mate, loving it, as always. ♥
Date: 10/22/10 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 24
dun dun duuuun??...might i say very nice update. Totally did NOT see the Tom thing coming. But then it does make sense that Bill couldnt switch gears too swiftly in that situation. I hope Tom finds out what happened wtih Bill, it wasnt really his fault after all.I cant wait to see more!!
Date: 10/22/10 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 23
Oh no! :o I bet Bill's probably back at Tom's house, afraid of what he did >_-
Date: 10/22/10 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 23
In the beginning I was just wondering what gave Tom such a big blow, breaking his bones and everything.
Some how, bill losing control and attacked tom made his humanoid nature more convincing.
Date: 10/22/10 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 23
omfg BILLA!!!...and tomi but BILLA!!!
Date: 10/22/10 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 23
*gasp* Holy crap. And oh no! :(
Date: 10/12/10 02:35 pm Title: Chapter 22
New reader! I'm normally not into Sci-Fi stories, but after taking a look at the summary I gave it a try and now I don't regret it :) It's quite interesting! :) I'll wait for the next update :P
Date: 10/12/10 07:22 am Title: Chapter 22
Alright. I read this in one go, and read the last chapter at school(I laughed so hard when Bill bit the guy's cock, that I had to invent an excuse for my classmates to prevent thm from peaking at what I was reading.)
I am a bit sad that I didn't get to follow this story sooner. I was offline too long.
I really like the characterization. You created an universe with its own laws and logic. And I will never tire to say this to authors who manage to make anything credible in what they create. Not contradict themselves.
Tom is my favorite so far. Your Andreas is a bit er...Special, but I accept that he's meant to be that way. I frankly didn't like him too much. I guess he's too obnoxious and seems so selfish and a control freak, but not the cute kind. Something he did, or said immediately put me off, I don't know.
About your Bill. The first chapters, I fell directly under his charms. I had hard time imagining him small though. Okay, I could boost my imagination and go with it, but Bill in a dress and heels...That was a major turn off. I still like his character though, and continue to do so (until you make Tom call him "Billa", that would be meh for me. Some people like it though, maybe you do too, and I don't mean any offence but "Billa" just ticks me off.)
The way you put snippets of the past, adds a mysterious atmosphere to the story, it's intriguing and full of suspense. I was on the edge of my seat some times. You manage to keep me very very interested and made me attached to the characters.
And ou write the hottest sex scenes, girl, my ears were burning and I couldn't stop squirming in class XD. Gosh, if the teacher caugnt me and confiscated my ipod, I think I'd die of embarassment lol. Not an examplary attitude for someone in third year of university. Not my fault my own mother language bores me to tears XD
I think I'll cut this review short before I get into trouble. But yeah, great story and great writing, and great characters. I am looking forward to read more and see where this is going. The new vision of humanoids , and all the great details you put in this left the detai freak in me demand more.
Date: 10/10/10 01:56 am Title: Chapter 22
THAT WAS THE BEST FIGHT SCENE EVER!
Date: 10/09/10 09:57 am Title: Chapter 22
Omg, I'm sooooooo happy you updated! This story is my favorite here on THF, and this chapter was great! Thank you!
Date: 10/07/10 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 22
Wow. I'm surprised but not so much. Bill isn't human so the fact that he went all Terminator on them doesn't surprise me. Tom on the other hand....well he won't be all that comfortable with Bill's lips near Tomi Jr.
Date: 10/07/10 01:07 am Title: Chapter 22
oh my goodness! What a huge chapter! God they are so hot together. and super bill is pretty hot too. Tom must be horrified by all that is going on. i would love to see tom's thoughts during these events. thanks for the update!!
Date: 10/06/10 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 22
Wow!! That's amazing! You're totally forgiven for the long hiatus. I hope Tom won't be too much traumatized after that. I think Bill's mouth won't be anywhere near Tom's cock for a while.
Date: 10/05/10 01:08 am Title: Chapter 22
Holy crap!
GO BILL!
Glad you finally updated, I missed this story!
LOVED this, can't wait for more!
XD