Date: 10/06/10 10:12 am Title: Prologue
I am attempting to write a review, even though it will sound awkward. Bear with me.
Is it bad of me to say that I am so happy this is slash, and not the original het romance? XD (I'm not totally against het, it's just...I'm more of a slasher, lol.)
Aside from that, and, as I already mentioned, the fact that you do not write anything remotely like a twelve-year-old, this is awesome. I want more more more info on Valdis and Kieran and Tillie.
I don't have anything really constructive to say...there's nothing I didn't like. XD I guess (general) you can always improve, though I couldn't point you in the right direction.
Um, what else to say than, love it, update, come onnnnn. :)
Date: 03/28/10 04:49 pm Title: Prologue
Ooh, I like this. It reminds me of the story Dogsbody, which I'm doing a story off of...eventually...once I finish up half my stories that are in the works xD
Anyway. I love the idea of Bill being a star *___* And I wonder how Tom's going to react to Bill :)
Author's Response: thank you for reviewing. i want you to know that i've never read or heard of that book, although after you mentioned it i did check out the summary on wikipedia, but clicked off quickly when i saw how interesting it was, afraid i might inadvertedly take an idea. XD