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Reviewer: THAngelSonja Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/27/12 01:59 pm Title: The Fourteen-Year-Old Virgin (And His Brother)

hahahaha u're funny and i like it thnx for the story :)

Reviewer: I_Love_The_Gutter Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/03/11 09:13 pm Title: The Fourteen-Year-Old Virgin (And His Brother)

I'm sorry you don't-they're delicious-but I'm immensely pleased you liked the story. :) Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: Ms Maril Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/29/10 09:38 pm Title: The Fourteen-Year-Old Virgin (And His Brother)

I don't like gummy snakes thanks but I love your story. It was very fun and sweet.

Reviewer: hihhihihihihihi Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/10 04:13 am Title: The Fourteen-Year-Old Virgin (And His Brother)

that....was...AWESOME!i love how it changed so quickly.keep up the good work :D

Author's Response: Thank you! STILL trying to write the freaking sequel! It just won't spit itself out. :(

Reviewer: Bill_Tom_1013 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/01/10 12:42 am Title: The Fourteen-Year-Old Virgin (And His Brother)

Soooo just so you know I pretty much love you and that was amazing *whatevers you for writing such hot twincest* I want a sequel! And I am your wife so you deny me what I want! That was sexy hexy but I agree with the one girl more deatil on the porch scene would of been great it would of been more intense if you dragged it out I looooooved it though :)

Author's Response: Yes, my pulcherrimus liebe! *whatevers you back* I shall write you a sequel, and hopefully a good one. :) I love you!

Reviewer: Ema21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/28/10 08:41 am Title: The Fourteen-Year-Old Virgin (And His Brother)

That was pretty good. :) Tom's forcefulnss on the front porch was sexy. The image of him cornering Bill like that is great, and the really forward questions- really hot. I wish it was longer, wish u had drawn out the porch scene till you could feel Bill's heart fluttering. So more description would have been nice but I still liked it. Thanks for writing. :)

Author's Response: Thank you! Hopefully, I will begin work on the sequel soon. . . :)

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/27/10 03:41 am Title: The Fourteen-Year-Old Virgin (And His Brother)

this was really good, i'd love to see it as more than a one shot. =)

Author's Response: Hmm. . . maybe. }:) Perhaps I shall write a sequel that can pick u right where they left off. *waggles eyebrows*

Reviewer: DaphneKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/10 11:51 pm Title: The Fourteen-Year-Old Virgin (And His Brother)

fucking sexy~ you should write more twc smut!

Author's Response: Why, thank you. I just didn't really know how far I wanted to take it before it just seemed to pass the point, and I'm not that good at writing slash sex just yet. . . But I will work on that and see if I can come up with a (nicely detailed) sequel.

Reviewer: tokio_hotel_luver Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/10 08:51 pm Title: The Fourteen-Year-Old Virgin (And His Brother)

Awe that was cute haha

Author's Response: You think so? Not too angsty?

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/10 08:38 pm Title: The Fourteen-Year-Old Virgin (And His Brother)

that was really good
i just wish tom had said "are you in love with me" instead of "do you want to fuck me"

Author's Response: You have no idea how much I wanted to make him say that, but it just didn't fit with how the story was going. *is sad-made* Love can come in the sequel, though. :)

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