Date: 02/24/10 04:03 am Title: Chapter 1 - A Strange Boy
ohh i love this.. can't wait for next chapter!
hope you continue
Author's Response: thanks so much =) i'll have more later today <3
Date: 02/23/10 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 7 - As The World Falls Down
yayyyyy!! so cute, i like it. ooh what will tom do when he sees what bill likes? haaha
Author's Response: Thanks so much! =) haha well the next chapter will be up tonight and you'll find out =D <3
Date: 02/23/10 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 7 - As The World Falls Down
Like it? No, I actually loved it! I love the way you're interweaving Bill's past into the story. It's really quite interesting to find out why and how he got there. And of course, seeing how the relationship between Tom and Bill evolves is lovely as well. They're so taken with each other already. :D Can't wait to read how the shopping trip goes.
*hugs* Thanks for the update and good luck at the Dentist.
Author's Response: Aww thank you so much! The dentist was terrible and I can't feel my face but he let me listen to my headphones, so Bill's sweet voice got me through it lol. I'm so glad that you're liking it, I'm working on the next chapter now <3rnrn
Date: 02/23/10 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 7 - As The World Falls Down
:) THERE CUTE :)
Author's Response: thank you so so much <3
Date: 02/23/10 08:10 pm Title: Chapter 7 - As The World Falls Down
sweet and awesome twist for bill dealing with bushido it was really good i can totes see a fake seductive bill!!!
Author's Response: =D Thanks so much <3 haha it was fun to visualize this version of bill seeking revenge in such a seductive way =)
Date: 02/23/10 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Teach Me
cute!!!!!!!!!! and now i continue onward~
Author's Response: Thank you so much =) and I hope you enjoy it <3
Date: 02/23/10 03:47 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Cleaning Up
can bill so me how to shower... ilike his way better than mine lol ;)
Author's Response: hahaha totally the wish i had while writing it <3
Date: 02/23/10 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Cleaning Up
oh my so naughty :) i like haha
Author's Response: haha i'm glad you like it <3
Date: 02/23/10 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Cleaning Up
awwwwww......... that's all I can say))) more))
Author's Response: thank you so much <3 i promise there will be another chapter (maybe 2) tonight
Date: 02/23/10 01:22 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Cleaning Up
First of all, you're too kind for dedicating this chapter to little moi. *huggles* I'm very honored by that. *beams*
Second, Bill's first shower was damn hot! His innocence and the trust he's placed on Tom make every scene between them more meaningful. I love how delighted he is with every new thing he discovers. It's endearing.
Loved the chapter, thanks again!
Mari
Author's Response: *big hugs!* thanks so much for reviewing i really love reading your reviews they help make me want to keep writing <3 and i'm super super glad you enjoyed it <3
Date: 02/23/10 06:45 am Title: Chapter 5 - Torturing Memories
its awsome plssss continueee
Author's Response: Thank you so much! =) I promise I'm workin on the next 2 chapters for today =)
Date: 02/23/10 03:56 am Title: Chapter 5 - Torturing Memories
add more i need something good to think about when i sleep... ps your becoming my bedtime story teller. hugs
Author's Response: Aw that makes me really happy <3 I promise I'll have more for you today <3
Date: 02/23/10 01:10 am Title: Chapter 5 - Torturing Memories
I loved it! Wonderful and I enjoyed the flash back. Can't wait for more
Author's Response: Thank you so much =)
Date: 02/23/10 12:55 am Title: Chapter 5 - Torturing Memories
I really like this so far. Hope you continue soon! I really like Bill; his alien-ness I guess you would call it? But this chapter was really sad, so I can’t wait till you continue it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I promise the next chapter will be happier. =)
Date: 02/23/10 12:44 am Title: Chapter 5 - Torturing Memories
I've fallen in love with this story rather quickly.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I promise to have at least 2 more chapters up today =)
Date: 02/22/10 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Torturing Memories
Oh Bill. Tom won't hurt you. He's so scared i hope that Tom can make him feel safe again.
Author's Response: =) I think he will <3 I'm working on the next chapter <3
Date: 02/22/10 10:41 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Torturing Memories
awww...poor bill tell me he wasnt raped???
Author's Response: yeah he was =( but Tom's going to make it all better <3
Date: 02/22/10 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Torturing Memories
Whoa! That I didn't expect, poor Bill. :( I feel so bad for what he had to go through, I'm glad he knows Tom is different, but I imagine it won't be easy for him anyway. Still loving this, honey! You're doing great and boy, if you're not spoiling us with the frequent updates. Not that I'm complaining, mind you. :D
*hugs* Mari
Author's Response: It makes me so happy that you like this =) I love reading your reviews <3 I might have to dedicate a chapter to you <3 But it'll be a happy chapter.. this one was kinda sad lol.
Date: 02/22/10 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Torturing Memories
YYESS more now plz :)
Author's Response: I promise I'm workin on the next chapter <3
Date: 02/22/10 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Come Closer
i really d like this, i wonder whts going to happen next
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it =) and I'm working on the next chapter right now <3 Thanks so much <3
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it =) and I'm working on the next chapter right now <3 Thanks so much <3