Date: 02/25/10 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 10 - You Have My Heart Now
is was short but hot... aw bill is so cute
Author's Response: I promise the next smut part will be longer =)
Date: 02/25/10 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 10 - You Have My Heart Now
omg i love this chapter sooooo much
Author's Response: haha thank you =) i'm really glad you liked it =)
Date: 02/25/10 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 1 - A Strange Boy
2 or 3 more?? yes!! can't wait
Author's Response: Haha I'll do my best to have at 3, hopefully I'll be able to get as much as I can up today <3 I'm in a serious writing mood =D
Date: 02/25/10 09:28 am Title: Chapter 1 - A Strange Boy
No problem. ^ ^
Author's Response: <333333
Date: 02/25/10 03:50 am Title: Chapter 9 - Like Them
yayyy smut! i really like this :)
Date: 02/25/10 02:56 am Title: Chapter 8 - Trustworthy
yay for the chapter, but the picture scared me! haha yayyy thank you *bing turn the page* XD i will, thank you
Author's Response: haha thank you <3
Date: 02/25/10 01:56 am Title: Chapter 9 - Like Them
Yes, please! ;)
I like this, very nice. I just read it from the beginning, I couldn't stop. I like your Bill and Tom, especially Bill.
Can't wait to know what will happen. Will the come and try to get Bill back.
xx
Date: 02/24/10 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Like Them
YES haha
Date: 02/24/10 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Like Them
aww love chapter!... so romantic! xd
i'm getting addicted to this fic..
Author's Response: I love that you're getting so addicted I promise to feed your addiction ;) I should have 2 or 3 more chapters tomorrow (depending on how numb my face is after the dentist lol) but i'll have at least 2 new chapters tomorrow =)
Date: 02/24/10 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Like Them
YES! Smut in the next chapter for sure!
You're writing this really well.
Judging from that shower scene a few chapters back,
It's gonna be hotttt :D
Author's Response: Haha thank you so so much <3 I really hope I don't disappoint ;)
Date: 02/24/10 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Like Them
smut smut smut!
Author's Response: one order of really steamy smut coming right up
Date: 02/24/10 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Like Them
So many fast updates, thank you so much! And yes, I think smut is an excellent idea.
Author's Response: lol i just love writing for you guys <3 thanks for reading =) ill definitely get some smut up next
Date: 02/24/10 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Like Them
aWWWWWWWWWWWW and smut smut smut next next next
Author's Response: haha right away <3
Date: 02/24/10 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Like Them
Awwwwww, such a sweet chapter! It's lovely to see them falling in love even more with each passing chapter. I just love the way they fit together, despite their differences. And yes, please, to smut in the next chapter. *bats eyelashes*
And before I forget, sorry for your loss with your friend, as well.
Author's Response: Smut will definitely be coming up next <3 Maybe not till tomorrow though and thank you so much<3
Date: 02/24/10 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Like Them
awwwww....so cute... *pinches tom's cheeks this time both sets lol ;D
Author's Response: haha he is cute isn't he =)
Date: 02/24/10 03:45 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Like Them
Great! I'm in love with this story and the character of Bill! Soft and sweet! ;) Keep on moving foward! ~ Gabi Tailorson
Author's Response: Thanks so much Gabi! I'm glad you like it =)
Date: 02/24/10 09:14 am Title: Chapter 8 - Trustworthy
love that movie i just recent saw it....umm...poor bill he just can't get a freakin break.... :'(
Author's Response: it's a really good movie <3 yeah, but thankfully he has tom to make everything better =D
Date: 02/24/10 08:18 am Title: Chapter 8 - Trustworthy
Awww, I just love how Tom treats Bill, how happy it makes him to make Bill happy. And I just can imagine how excited Bill must have been in that store!
I so didn't like Georg, bad Georg! I'm glad Bill managed to escape him.
Lovely update! Looking forward to more!
*careful hugs* Hope the swelling goes down fast, hon.
Author's Response: Haha I love making cute things but then I had to just had to add another bad guy. rnrnand *huugssss* thank you =) it's down now but tomorrow i have to go get 3 more fillings, then monday 3 more lol i'm pretty much going in every other day till march 10th =/
Date: 02/24/10 07:41 am Title: Chapter 8 - Trustworthy
Hmmm, I don't know what to make of this story. I started reading it as a fluke really, and I skipped most of the first chapter cuz the bit about Tom's job seemed irrelivant (sorry), and some other parts of this story seem pretty unbelievable (even for sci-fi), I mean to say that the way the part is narrated they don't fit so well. Like Bill laughing and falling asleep in a meadow after having killed the supreme leader.
ANYWAY, now that I'm done with all the negative stuff (sorry about that, its not how I meant to start off this review)....I also wanna say that this story is pretty captivating. Like, all the things Bill doesnt understand are humerous, and there are smutty parts that keep u hooked, and there were a few parts that were actually very touching- the bit about love seemed genuine and I liked that.
So yeah, keep writing this story, cuz I'm gonna keep reading it. Well done. :)
Author's Response: Sorry if it bored you I promise I'll try harder to make some of the filler more interesting and stuff, I really do appreciate your honesty though. Without constructive criticism I'd never get better <3 I hope you keep reading it though and that I can be better in the future <3
Date: 02/24/10 04:20 am Title: Chapter 8 - Trustworthy
i now love this story
Author's Response: Thanks so much =) I hope I can keep you happy <3