Date: 11/07/15 02:07 pm Title: Show Me Your Teeth - Part A
Will this ever be completed?
Date: 03/19/13 05:58 pm Title: Show Me Your Teeth - Part A
Damn...knew I shouldn't have started this...fantastic story. I hope you continue it sometime.
Date: 02/26/12 11:50 pm Title: Show Me Your Teeth - Part A
What a place to just abandon the story for like 7 months! lol. Please tell me you have plans to come back to this.
Date: 02/26/12 08:04 am Title: Show Me Your Teeth - Part A
More please :-) You can't just leave it there. they haven't even gotten together yet :-) Even if you don't want to work on it any more, just write one finishing chapter :-) Please
Date: 06/15/11 07:38 pm Title: Show Me Your Teeth - Part A
Nice to finally get some information out of Bill. The transition between this chapter and the last one was a little rough, I was confused at first, it felt like I had missed a chapter. Thanks for the update, I can't wait to see where this goes next.
Date: 06/12/11 04:03 am Title: Show Me Your Teeth - Part A
Fantastic.... absolutely fantastic!!
great story, plot, background, characterisation, research... f**k it's just a amazing story you make here
so Thank You... thank you for writing this story and sharing it with us.
your whole world (in this fic) is very intriguing, and I fell like it's just the beginning of serious things to happen.
which means more chapters, so good luck in writing other awesome intrigue.
Bye and see soon
Date: 06/10/11 06:32 pm Title: The Blame Game
Somebody has been watching a lot of 'Criminal Minds'. Your version of Bill is a splice of Reid and Hotchner.
Date: 06/09/11 05:03 pm Title: Show Me Your Teeth - Part A
Lol, it's so incredibly weird to read about Bill having a twin and it's not Tom XD I'm not too fond of that.
But this continues to be amazing. I've even started watching Criminal Minds :D Into the fifth episode now.
Date: 06/09/11 12:41 pm Title: Show Me Your Teeth - Part A
Okay.... I just started reading this and I am SO happy that I have found another person who is like obsessed with Criminal Minds! Haha!
Date: 06/09/11 12:41 pm Title: Show Me Your Teeth - Part A
Okay.... I just started reading this and I am SO happy that I have found another person who is like obsessed with Criminal Minds! Haha!
Date: 06/09/11 07:49 am Title: Givin' You All I Got - Part B
My God, I love it! That's the best chapter so far, can't wait for more
Date: 06/09/11 06:00 am Title: Show Me Your Teeth - Part A
Thank you so much for updatein this! I really love the plot, it's very unique I haven't seen any other like it. I can't wait for the next up date :)
Date: 06/09/11 05:32 am Title: Show Me Your Teeth - Part A
Why did i not start reading this sooner???? I am loveing every moment.
Date: 06/09/11 01:54 am Title: Show Me Your Teeth - Part A
AWESOME!!
This story is great and I love the update, intriguing!
Date: 06/08/11 11:18 pm Title: The Blame Game
Omg omg!! Are you back? Ive missed you, you are seriously one of my favorite authors on this site and I'm so glad you're updating again. Im in love with this fic too being a huge law and order svu fan I can already tell you're going to have me
on the egde of my seat.
Date: 06/08/11 06:01 pm Title: Show Me Your Teeth - Part A
I don't care that I read this in advance, because this update just MADE MY LIFE RIGHT NOW and you know that now I'm feeling worried for Bill and this Calder character.
Also, BILL'S TWIN STILL ALIVE?!
YOU LEFT ME WITH A TBC!
This is sad, bb. LOOKIT MY SAD FACE. ;_____;
Date: 12/11/10 02:04 am Title: The Blame Game
Wow...just wow. I'm already in love, even though Criminal Minds drives me nutters most days (my parents watch it too much). But it reminds me of some other crime shows I watch. Like "Cold Case" (not sure how). Or the novels I read.
This probably wasn't intentional on your part, but it was just something I noticed. One of the victims names, "Stacy Peterson", hit for me. In California a few years back there was a huge fiasco because a pregnant teacher, Laci Peterson, went missing. I know that yours is Stacy and not Laci, but it brought back the memories of the searches, of her body being found in the river, and her husband being the killer, and of my close friend being a former student of Laci's. I found the connection to be slightly fascinating...then again I'm a morbid person. One of my favorite novel series is the Body Farm series by the very man that first started the Body Farm...and wrote one of his cases into his first book (and I absolutely loved/geeked when I saw that case on the telly after reading the book).
Anyways! Off to read the next chapter! This is absolute love!
Date: 12/05/10 07:27 pm Title: Givin' You All I Got - Part B
I would love to see this updated!
Date: 09/13/10 01:34 pm Title: Givin' You All I Got - Part B
OMG!
Why do you make all my reviews start like this? *ponders*
I'm still sitting here, mind working double time to see how this will all connect, but you're just as two steps ahead of me as the bad guy and short of reading your mind or flat out asking you, I'm totally in the dark!
However, shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit, Bill is caught, omg! And Tom is freaking out and that made me giddy for some reason, lol.
This guy needs to get caught before Bill gets hurt cause I don't think Tom will not do bad things to make *someone* pay for hurting him. But, you know, he doesn't think it's anything more than him just being a part of the team and not because Bill wormed his way into Tom's heart along the way and all that. >.>
I await anxiously for the next part, because omg, I haven't had TV in MONTHS and this sure beats TV by a long shot!
I love you, dearest and you know this story just goes to prove what your forte really is.
And I'm in love with it too. ._____.
Date: 09/13/10 05:59 am Title: Givin' You All I Got - Part B
Tell me that you won't take four months more to the next chap *.*