Date: 03/28/10 12:34 am Title: Catch Me If You Can
Seeing as how I'm observing National Day of Indifference, and your to far away for me to actually carry out any threats, I think I just stick with my thoughts on this chapter.
I adore it. I admire it. I WISH I could writing something literarily akin to it. And I shall list the reasons why. Firstly, Bill as a child genius... how can you not love it? I enjoy reading a story with smart characters and a smarter plot line--more challenging than a regular, pointless story that is just about ...randomness (You know, the kind I fiction I always write *eye roll at self*). And secondly... You've "caught"... I suppose 'found' would be better... the killer in two chapters and it's not over yet... and all you can do is leave me wanting more... and I love that.
And so dear author, I bid you fairwell... at least until the next chapter --God, I can't wait!
PS I just love Bill's character as a whole. Just adore him. People should write him like this more often.
Author's Response: LOLOLOLOLOL. why are you threatening me???? xD I've done NOTHING xD
I'm glad that you adore it and admire it, and pshhhhhhhh. I love your fics and wish I could write stuff the way you do. I always finds 35283043 faults with my stuff. xD I'm really happy that you like this, because this fic is sooooooo hard to crank out sometimes. xD
Date: 03/27/10 11:45 pm Title: The Blame Game
Uber welcome!
Author's Response: <3333
Date: 03/27/10 11:34 pm Title: The Blame Game
I'm reading it now and so far it's pretty good :3 I defiantly review when i done :3
Author's Response: awww YAY *flutterclaps and giggles* THANK YOU so very much!
Date: 03/27/10 11:31 pm Title: The Blame Game
I just saw i'm so happy!!
Author's Response: lol, woot woot! I hope you like it. let me know if you like the new chappie when you're done! I'm worried about it ;___;
Date: 03/27/10 10:39 pm Title: Catch Me If You Can
eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeh!!! I already told you that I loved this chapter already, but I'm going to say it again. I LOVE this chapter, actually, I love this story period. It's so so SO well detailed, you must have poured hours into writing just one chapter, and not just because of the length. It is so realistic, and the characters are absolutely lovely.
Author's Response: Lololol, I'm REALLY happy that you liked the chapter. Well loved the chapter. I'm happy you think it's so well detailed, cause I try, I REALLY do try to put in a lot of information, without it becoming too stifled, and becoming too unrealistic. ^_^
Date: 02/21/10 04:31 pm Title: The Blame Game
Yay, I'm jumping in to this wagon too!
Interesting start. I'm pretty tired and because the language you used, the precise descriobtion of situiations etc. made this a bit hard to follow for me, but that was just me and the fact that I really should be sleeping already. However, I'm curious to see where this goes...
And noooo, don't make them stab Tom! :D
Author's Response: LOL YAY! You know I always love when you read my stiff xD.
I'm not sure what it is actually, I'm constantly worrying about how things will sound here, because there's so much information to put it, but I hope that you continue to like it as you read on ^_^
and...it has to happen xD
Date: 02/20/10 11:55 am Title: The Blame Game
yes I diddddd!!!!!!!
Author's Response: woooooot! you go girl! xD
Date: 02/20/10 03:09 am Title: The Blame Game
Totally boss!! I love CM and adding TH is pure epic love. Can't wait for more :)
Author's Response: lol YAY glad you think so, and I'm happy to keep finding so many people that like TH <333
Date: 02/19/10 07:53 pm Title: The Blame Game
interesting =p!
Author's Response: yay! <3333
Date: 02/19/10 01:02 pm Title: The Blame Game
"He's twenty-five, Gus! It's like babysitting!"
Hahaha. xD. Probably he's right, I can understand his position.
I'm sorry I didn't review this yesterday night but it was very late and my parents kept telling me to switch the computer, go to bed and the usual stuff, so I had to put it off. I'm sorry.
Sooooo. Okay I like it. At the moment, I can't exactly tell which I like the best, if this one or Lunacy. I already miss Lunacy so bad, and I know that it will be forever the very first one I've read with Bill and Tom being such criminals, so, well... it has a special place in my heart. But that doesn't mean that I'm not enjoying this one. Indeed, I think that this is a genre I love, only, I didn't know, xD. Then again, I'm glad I found out reading your fictions. :)
Ooooohh I don't know if this is just me being still in love with Lunacy, but I like Bill a lot in here, too. :) He's so professional, so clever and yeah, so young as well. I hope that this won't cause him too much trouble with Tom, though. xD. Tom doesn't seem too happy to have Bill around for the moment, so... WHEN will he change his mind? xD.
(I saw the pairing BB. I DO KNOW he will change his mind... won't he?).
Then again, I'm sure I've already told you, though I can't properly remember WHEN, but I think you're really improving a lot your writing style and the way you make up characters - don't get me wrong, not that I didn't like your earliest fictions, in fact I did like them. As well as I like your newest ones, but I guess that practicing all this much is helping you a lot, isn't it? :)
Nice quotes, btw ;) I always like it when an author manages to insert them, they make me shiver in pleasure. xD.
(I don't know why; I know I'm weird).
Other than that, I'm really sorry you're in the hospital, what happened?
I hope that it's nothing too bad and that you will get better soon.
And oh, don't make me blush saying you... wrote about me on LJ? XD.
One last thing, don't worry over the responses, I don't mind if you don't feel too well and don't find the energy to type. Seriously, take your time, and do whatever you wish. :)
I wouldn't want to be a bother, you know...
I'm waiting for the 2nd!
And STAY WELL!!! Kiss, :)
Author's Response: LOLOLOL don't agree with Tom! He's an asshole xDDDD
It's alright about not reviewing right away, I ALWAYS take forever to reply to review. -.- I'm slow and there's always so many i get overwhelmed.
I miss Lunacy too, but I'm glad that you're still enjoying this, because I'm have WAYYY too much fun writing this for you guys. xD
I'm glad you like Bill in this, he's an utter doll to write about, and YES he'll change his mind about Tom, once Tom actually stops being a douche xD
And I'm really really happy you think my writing is improving. This is one of those stories that I freak out over, and criticize every line, because I'm constantly worrying about how things will sound, but again, I'm really happy that you like it. xD
and dude, I have books and books of quotes, technically they're my mom's, but she doesn't read them, so I adopted them, and whenever I need a quote I scour the books looking for the perfect one xD
Date: 02/19/10 03:08 am Title: The Blame Game
This is awesome. I knew I was going to like this story because this is my kind of thing, I enjoy watching shows like Criminal Minds, Snapped, The First 48,... it is so interesting, but this is even better because it has Tokio Hotel in it.
Author's Response: WOOT WOOR. Am glad you like it, and OMG CRIMINAL MINDS AND THE FIRST 48 are amazing. never watched Snapped though. I should right? I need a new American TV addiction xD
Date: 02/18/10 11:25 pm Title: The Blame Game
This seems really interesting! Can't wait till you continue! :)
Author's Response: YAY for interesting! Am glad you like ^_^
Date: 02/18/10 11:23 pm Title: The Blame Game
I like it...I don't really understand...but we'll see :)
Author's Response: lolol, awwww, if you tell me what you don't understand, I'll do my best to explain in the coming chapters!
Date: 02/18/10 10:44 pm Title: The Blame Game
AHAHA! Poor Tom, getting kneed in the cahonas. Tsk tsk, Bill stop being defensive for a moment to think about what would happen if you did permanent damage to his eggs...no sex for you later on ;)
This IS SO GOOD. Its excellently well-written, actually the most well-written TH story I've EVER read, and thats a huuuge compliment!
Its quick, its witty, its intelligent, its funny, its realistic, and its exciting! And of course, the romance. WHERE WOULD WE BE IF TOM DIDNT HAVE HIS BILL? (Bill who's being a little snarky tiger right now, but he'll warm up to Tom. WHO CAN RESIST TOM?! No one, I swear to all penguins ^_^)
PLEASE TELL ME YOU WILL UPDATE THIS SOON, AKA, WITHIN A FEW DAYS? Stories like these shouldnt be delayed, theyre too amazing. I'd forget what happened if it took long, or who knows, lose interest ;P (as IF) But yeah. Fast updates are the best and will receive golden reviews :D
Author's Response: LOLOLOL. pshhhhhhhhh. I have guy friends I knee whenever we see each other. It's part of our 'bonding' xD
And awwwww *blushes* I'm glad you think so. I am always poking at the flaws in my writing skills, but I'm happy that you said that, because it means I've been improving like I hoped! xD
and i'm really happy you think it's all of those things, because I was worried about making it life-like, not just another crime story with characters you can't relate to. xD AND I FOR ONE CAN RESIST TOM. xD he doesn't do it for me, but he does it for my Bill. xD eventually xD
And bah, I'm sorry that I took so long between updating again, I was sick, and ended up being admitted to the hospital, and when I got out, I took two weeks off from posting...which really shouldn't be an excuse since my beta got this back to me like 3 weeks ago, but I'M SORRY BAH. Am going for weekly updates for this, now that I'm back. And i made the next chapter longer, so apologize for my suckyness.
Date: 02/18/10 09:54 pm Title: The Blame Game
glad you're feeling better and glad to see this posted! poor tom, but maybe he'll smarten up.
Author's Response: yep yep, and Tom rarely smartens up...when I/Bill want him to. It's a process.
Date: 02/18/10 09:46 pm Title: The Blame Game
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!
I ENJOYED ^_^
Author's Response: LOL YAY *flutterclaps* AM UBERLY GLAD YOU ENJOYED xD
Date: 02/18/10 09:45 pm Title: The Blame Game
Dude oh my Gott! This is freaking amazing! I love it! Post again soon please! :]
Author's Response: lol, glad you think so ^_^ and there's a new chappie up now!
Date: 02/18/10 09:38 pm Title: The Blame Game
YAY it's even better than i remember... oh i can't wait for more!
Author's Response: lolol, am STILL happy that you liked it. THERE'S MORE UP xD
Date: 02/18/10 09:34 pm Title: The Blame Game
Amazing, I'm practically speechless lol :D
I was a little sad to see that Lunacy was at the last chapter, but then I saw this! And I love it. I can't wait to see where this fic is going in future chapters. I love Criminal Minds btw, that show is awesome xD
Author's Response: *grins* Aww I'm glad you're speechless if it means that you like it xD And omg, YES I was prolonging writing the last chapter of Lunacy cause I didn't want it to end, and my best friend was like WRITE IT ALREADY xD
Date: 02/18/10 08:27 pm Title: The Blame Game
LOL Love the end of the chapter ^_^ This is turning out to be a great fic--I'm already wondering what you have planned >:D
I finished watching the movie with a record (low) of only getting startled 2-3 times xD
I like how Bill knew at least one person when he started, so it wasn't as if he was thrown to the wolves. ^_^
My reviews are SO unorganized xDD
Author's Response: LOLOLOL, I'm glad you think so, and YOU'LL see what's planned earlier than anyone else, since you're my beta xD....and yea, your reviews are always unorganized, but I love you anyways xD