Date: 04/18/10 04:16 am Title: Fell Down A Hole
i like this so far. it sort of seems like a bunch of one shots put together though, so far. so i'm still kind of waiting to figure out what the story is about, in some way. keep up the good work!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it, and it's supposed to be like that, TRUST me. xD It'll all come together soon. Actually it's starting to come together in the chapter I just posted xD
Date: 04/18/10 03:17 am Title: Fell Down A Hole
This is great...seriously, very Criminal Mind-ish...love it!!
Author's Response: yay, that's a great compliment for me ^_^
Date: 04/17/10 12:03 pm Title: Fell Down A Hole
this is one of my favorite fics of yours! I Just Love agent fics and bitchy angry bill..SO freakin Hot
Author's Response: Lol, awwww *blushes* your words mean A LOT to me. I'm glad it's a fav, am always worried that the agent-ness of the fic is too much
Date: 04/17/10 10:33 am Title: Catch Me If You Can
I'm not gonna kill you, but I might want to kiss you! I love to read about BAU XD This is great, it's like my two passions combined!
Thanks so much!,
-Loves
Author's Response: Lol, yay for kisses then. xD And I love to read about the BAU too, so I KNOW your level of excitement. xD thanks for reading!!!
Date: 04/16/10 11:03 pm Title: Fell Down A Hole
i love you! *coughs and grins sheepishly*
American McGee's Alice was like my favorite game ever,... now that i think about it I really was a creepy child...anyway mucho amor and praise on to your fic!
Author's Response: lol awww *heart flutters rapidly*. xD
I'M SO GLAD other people know this game! I was obnoxiously addicted to it as a teen. xD And Thank you for the praise!
Date: 04/16/10 10:58 pm Title: The Blame Game
But hey long chapters are nice! I don't mind waiting a while if that means I get a good looooong chapter XD :D
Date: 04/16/10 06:36 pm Title: The Blame Game
Oh God. This is awesome, I'm not the only one totally addicted to Criminal Minds. Yay! For a Bill that looks so much like my baby boy in the BAU (Tsk... I'm in love with the actor, he is my platonic love XD)
Anyway, I'm gonna keep reading!
Kisses
Date: 04/16/10 05:47 pm Title: Fell Down A Hole
Babe, I don't know what direction you were going with this, but THIS direction--whoa. I'm fucking BLOWN AWAY.
THAT is one fucked up girl and even more of a fucked up game, but ANYWAY.
Holy SHITS, I can't believe Bill knew her! >.> And I can definitely see him beating himself over this as it all started to fall into place and just gah. I'm glad Tom kept his mouth shut, even if it was to make him feel better because to Bill, that wouldn't matter. People are dead because he didn't recognize the signs before more people died.
And why am I not surprised that Tom WOULD concentrate on THOSE SPECIFIC WORDS from Bill's sentence???
He needs to get laid, seriously, or he's gonna keep fucking up and get in shit with Bill, lol.
AT THE EDGE OF MY SEAT AGAIN, because I don't know if that game is real or not, but shit, that's one scary thing and the fact that along the way something inside her head went all weird and suddenly her life became the game...yeah, creepy as all fuck!
BUT THAT ENDING. DID YOU JUST GIVE ME MY FIRST TO BE CONTINUED?? D:
Author's Response: LOL, YAY, I like Blown away! xD (ps I MISS YOU). xD And I love the game! It's amazing to play xD
And mhmmmmm, Bill knew her, which is KILLING him inside.
And because Tom'd an idiot. xD
YAY FOR BEING AT THE EDGE OF YOUR SEAT THEN. xD
Date: 04/16/10 05:29 pm Title: Fell Down A Hole
Lalalalala I didn't read any of this >.> I'll send you my review when I beat LOL
Author's Response: lololololol. I think I'm laughing because I don't get what you mean by 'beat' xD Email me? xD
Date: 04/05/10 02:08 am Title: Catch Me If You Can
. . . . .
Please keep going... i really really like
this story.. I rarely find stories i like.
Author's Response: Awww, yay I'm glad that you like it. ^_^
Date: 03/31/10 01:26 pm Title: Catch Me If You Can
wow so much action in only the second chapter! awesomeeee.
now i shall wait patiently for you to update. =]
Author's Response: LOl YAY, I love action, I really do. xD
And it's updated now. ^_^
Date: 03/28/10 07:10 pm Title: Catch Me If You Can
Hmmm was there a reason u names his mom kathy perry? XD
this is interesting but I want bill to be the damsel in distress now xp
Author's Response: LMFAO, idek, I asked around for a name, and that was the one that was given xD.
And OOOOOOOO Bill = damsel in distress is happening NOW in chappie 4 xD
Date: 03/28/10 12:26 pm Title: Catch Me If You Can
amaaaazing o_o love those kind of stories
Author's Response: Lol, YAY, I'm glad you love them. ^_^ I hope that you continue reading <333
Date: 03/28/10 11:59 am Title: Catch Me If You Can
no threats XD i loves it soo much i think i got goosebumps XD so keep up the good work it is like an actual episode so yay you!!!!!
Author's Response: lol yay, i don't like being threatened. xD But I AM glad you got goosebumps. That's my goal with this. xD
Date: 03/28/10 11:05 am Title: Catch Me If You Can
I will not threaten you, because I think the no sex rule doesn't have as much impact on you as it does me. HOWEVER, WE ARE TWO CHAPTERS IN WOMAN AND YOU CAN'T BE KILLING MY BABIES YET. ;_______________________________;
And Bill punching that asshole in the face has got to be the hottest thing EVER. NGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHH!!!
Author's Response: Lololol. I'm not, I'm not. xD And I know. Bill punching anyone is generally really hot.
Date: 03/28/10 10:39 am Title: Catch Me If You Can
...
Excuse me a sec.
*goes to bathroom, wanks to thoughts of hot Bill in charge, comes back all refreshed*
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SICK SICK fucker, that was definitely WAY too mouthy and do you THINK you are entitled to run a game, you sicko? GUESS WHAT, YOU LOST, YOU SICK SON OF A BITCH. The agents played your game, but they got tired of you and that's why you lose. THE END.
But omg! Is this gonna be another chapter where they are indebted to each other again?! You can't leave me this frantic, babe. I'M GONNA DIE WAITING AND I HATE COMMERCIAL BREAKS. ;___;
FUCK T.V. This shit is better than! ^^
EVERYONE was on in this chapter and I fucking love this team! You've managed to make them read each other without words and I love how far they will go to cover each other's back. THIS is a family, THIS is a true team that is definitely on the side of good and omg, I can't wait for more!
You nailed it with this fic, my love. NAILED IT.
And Tom? Bow, bitch. XD
And babe? DON'T THINK I DIDN'T NOTICE BILL'S LITTLE ORAL FIXATION THERE. THAT'S HOT HOT HOT.
Author's Response: Lolololololol. xD I love your reactions to the bad guys. xD I imagine that's how you are when you watch TV. xD
I'm glad you think it's better than TV, that makes me SQUEEEEE xD
Ps. the Tom, Bow bitch makes me CACKLE. and oral fixations make the world go round xD
Date: 03/28/10 09:41 am Title: The Blame Game
I like this story a lot because it makes you think. There's only one thing in this story that made me sick to my stomach, and i'm not sure if you did it on purpose or what, but...you said one of the girls was found floating in a river. and one of the girls missing/dead is named Stacy Peterson. Did you happen to do this on purpose? Because Lacey Peterson was found dead, murdered in the river with her unborn baby cut out of her, and the similarities between the name and place of body was just a little too familiar for me to like... i feel like i'm going to throw up right now. If it wasn't on purpose then that was one HELL of a coincidence.
Author's Response: awwww ;___; while I'm glad you like it because it makes you think, I'm sorry that the whole name/murder made you think of the Lacey Peterson case. Actually, when I read your review, I was like *is confused* what is she talking about? Sorry, I rarely watch the news (too depressing for me), especially during high profile murder cases, because the media can get a little too crazy, so I actually didn't know Lacey Peterson's cause of death. Hell, I didn't remember her until you reviewed. That probably sounds extremely shallow, or just sucky, but, I avoid the news like the plague if I can. ;___; *hands you crackers* Don't throw up, love, this is just fiction. I'll ~try~ not to have anymore similarities to other cases -- aka, I'll try to actually think of names, and not just put the first thing that comes to my mind. Thank you for reading still!
Date: 03/28/10 06:58 am Title: Catch Me If You Can
Sunday?! *flails*
So about how I'm in Ireland, and the Wifi at the hostel is begin dumb and now I'm at an internet cafe and yeaaahhhh >.>
So yes, I'm just gonna reread the chapter again after I submit this review ♥
Author's Response: Lol. I should learn not to set personal goals. My muses have no respect for personal deadlines xD
Date: 03/28/10 03:07 am Title: Catch Me If You Can
I love this so much. Reading the dialogue between all the agents makes me feel like I'm an agent myself discussing the case, it is so exciting.
Another thing I like about this is that the chapters are so long. They are long, but I get so sucked into the story that the next thing I know I've reached the end of the chapter pretty quick.
I am really looking forward to the next chapter and hoping that since we are in chapter two that Tom, Bill, and Georg are fine.
Author's Response: Lolol. YAY, I want the dialogue to draw you in, and make you feel like you're right then, cause that's why I love watching Criminal Minds. xD
And dudeee the long chapters KILL me, cause with the next chapter I just posted, I half half of it written, and could've posted it weeks ago, but my muses changed course, and I was like OH HELL. I GOTTA WAIT UNTIL I REIGN THIS IN, SO IT'S NICE AND LONG. xD
Date: 03/28/10 12:38 am Title: Catch Me If You Can
WHAT!?!?! WHY MUST YOU END IT THERE! XD But really this chapter was great. The first half was a little slow but the ending totally made up for it! -dies-
Author's Response: Lol, cause it was reaching 7100 words, and it needed to end there? xD