Date: 09/08/10 02:23 pm Title: Givin' You All I Got - Part B
Can't wait for the next chapter!! This is sooooo exciting! I'm practically glued to the screen :D I've been waiting for this for so long THANK YOU
Date: 09/08/10 02:22 pm Title: The Blame Game
OMFG, UPDATEEEE!!
happychild :D
Date: 09/07/10 12:22 pm Title: Givin' You All I Got - Part B
This story is making me so much more addicted to Criminal Minds that it's almost sad. I hope I get to find out more before too long, I'm so caught up in this perfect read. I adore you for writing this...
Date: 09/05/10 10:47 pm Title: Givin' You All I Got - Part B
q nervios... ojalá Bill salga bien librado de esto... y Ebel no haga algo tonto y lo perjudique... es un odioso hablar asì de èl... vamos actualza pronto!! =) leì los 5 capis de corrido y me encanta la historia.. emocionante!!
Saluditos!! :D
Date: 09/05/10 08:31 pm Title: Givin' You All I Got - Part B
I forgot how much I absolutely loved this fic :3
Date: 09/05/10 03:30 pm Title: Givin' You All I Got - Part B
FU-
THIS STORY IS AMAZING.
OH MY FUCKING GOD I'M EXCITED.
Date: 09/05/10 12:38 pm Title: Givin' You All I Got - Part B
O.o
whoa! whoa! whoa! this is one sick dude.....
cannot wait or more!
Date: 09/05/10 08:26 am Title: Givin' You All I Got - Part B
Yay! you're back!
great chapter!
....seriously AMAZING & you are just a geniuis! i love this story a lot & thanks for the update X
Date: 09/05/10 03:11 am Title: Givin' You All I Got - Part B
So exciting!!
Lol of the few errors (most can be overlooked) you said: 'treatment was bread specifically'
Date: 09/05/10 03:11 am Title: Givin' You All I Got - Part B
yikes!! Thanks for the update though!!
Date: 09/05/10 02:29 am Title: Givin' You All I Got - Part B
More please?
Date: 09/05/10 01:55 am Title: Givin' You All I Got - Part B
Your alive! :p I was so happy to see this fic updated! I just love hiwvthe story is developing. Bill is very very mysterious and I want to know more about his character!!
Date: 09/05/10 01:29 am Title: Givin' You All I Got - Part B
you are back~~~~
Author's Response: yep! I'm back, and here to stay lolol xD I hope you liked this chapter ^_^
Date: 08/03/10 12:05 am Title: Givin' You All I Got - Part A
WOAHHHH this suddenly got a billion times more tense o.O (and it's a very good thing!) keep it up, and i can't wait for your next update! :D
Date: 07/23/10 07:32 am Title: Givin' You All I Got - Part A
i'm in love with this! cm is my favorite show, i'm personally very fond of matthew gray gubler. i'll marry him one day if i can't get one of the kaulitz twins or gustav. i truly feel that this story is in my top 5 favorite stories of all time. i'm addicted to alice in wonderland, use to own the game. i play survival horror games more so nowadays though, like the silent hill and clocktower series. you rock my world, and i hope you update this soon. i pray that Bill doesn't have any std's or that he is dying faster than he is suppose to. Tom being nice and standing up for Bill was refreshing for this story, i hope it happens more often. i adore you, sugar~
Date: 06/16/10 03:40 am Title: Givin' You All I Got - Part A
It's tabula rasa, not rosa.
And OMG no! Bill!! DX
Wow, that was some interesting information.
Date: 06/16/10 03:09 am Title: Fell Down A Hole
OMG!! I caught American McGee right at the beginning XDD I have never played that game. But I know enough.
And then it was just 100% confirmed with the butcher knife! Yay! I actually knew what was happening in a story for once! XD
Lol this is an absolutely fascinating fic.
Author's Response: LOL yay! I'm glad someone else caught it as well ^_^ and I'm glad that you find it fascinating.
Date: 06/08/10 09:20 pm Title: The Blame Game
I just checked my email and found this. I let my friend borrow my computer this afternoon while I was in class. I'm really sorry she left that review. I had your story in my tab list of fics to read and she wanted to look at the site before signing up for it. I really enjoyed the first chapter and am currently reading the second, but paused to say sorry for my friend with mental issues.
Author's Response: it's alright love, i didn't mean to get so snippy with her, i'm just extremely prickly when ppl attack things that I've extensively researched, but it's been a while now, and i've gotten over it, and i'm really happy that you liked it ^_^
Date: 06/08/10 02:33 pm Title: The Blame Game
The Branch Dividians were in Mt. Caramel. Same county as Waco, but not in Waco. Either say the Waco office had bad press or in Mt. Caramel near Waco. I'm from Waco and we get very insulted when everyone just assumes they were in Waco just because the Waco FBI office held their press conferences in Waco. The nearest still working town is Elk.
Author's Response: Not to be rude, but what does your explanation have to do with this fic? I understand where the siege had taken place, but it's still called the siege on Waco or the Waco Siege. -- I spent two months prior to writing this chapter, gathering an obnoxious amount of information on both sieges concerning Ruby Ridge and Waco (because they'll come up in later chapters), so I'm fairly certain that I'm correct in my wording of the sentence that mentioned both sieges. I think that, perhaps, you being from Waco is skewering your reception of my mention of that incident. When I said 'at Waco', I wasn't talking about the gun battle, but about the Waco office, AND the shitstorm that came from their agents fucking up so badly. -- Anyways, I'm sorry if my reply came off as being douchey, it's just that, I get really offensive, when people disregard the fact that I have researched what I'm writing about.
Date: 06/06/10 03:17 pm Title: Givin' You All I Got - Part A
Bill had (have?) a twin, who's NOT Tom? Now I'm pretty confused...