Date: 02/18/10 07:31 pm Title: The Blame Game
I love being able to see how this chapter turned out! xD I really like how you wrote the action scene for this. You were able to explain everything enough for me to get a clear picture of what was happening in my head, but didn't go so overboard things got boring. Awesome first chapter!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. It was a challenge balancing everything out, because I never want to give too much information, but I don't want it to come out sounding like a criminology textbook either. Glad you liked it.
Date: 02/18/10 07:27 pm Title: The Blame Game
i love you like seriously LOVE you like I wanna marry you and all that good stuff because I have been waiting for a story like this FOREVER!!!!! I LOVE criminal minds with such a passion it should be made illegal really there is something about psychopahts that just makes me all giggly XD and even though they arent psychopaths the fact that they (especially Reed) can talk about them like that makes me all melty on the inside!!! I love love love love LOVE your Bill reminds me of Reed!! and we should totally get a gag fo Tom's mouth I mean "babysitting" seriously? He's not that much older than Bill and if it wasn't for Bill he wouldve been watching that conversation from heaven so he better STFU! And I have a feeling Bill is hiding something even though I always have that feeling...
anyway great beginning I was sad to see Lunacy go (and i knew it was Bill such a smexy psychopath) but am more excited about this story so yay you!!!!
Author's Response: lololol *blushes* I'M SO FUCKING ECSTATIC that I could write something that you were waiting for. I ADORE Criminal Minds, and this definitely was fun writing, if not challenging. xD I'm glad you like it, and that you liked Lunacy as well, and I hope that you'll keep reading ^_^
Date: 02/18/10 06:49 pm Title: The Blame Game
my love for criminal minds + this story = OH GOD YES.
Author's Response: LOLOLOLOL *grins uncontrollably* your review made me giggle NICE AND HARD xD
Date: 02/18/10 06:42 pm Title: The Blame Game
sure i'll email you. i need a good beta cuz literally i emailed about 10 people and only one helped me out (probably cuz my writing sucks)
Author's Response: awesomeness. my email is parallelheartz@gmail.com SORRY I didn't msg you until now, I was really sick & in the hospital, and life was simply sucking, BUT it's fine, just email me love ^_^
Date: 02/18/10 06:33 pm Title: The Blame Game
HOT DAMN!
Look at this dynamic first chapter and it's like a full TV episode WITHOUT COMMERCIALS!!! DUDE! I'll have your babies, I swear, as many as you want, just continue this because I can't WAIT for Bill's adventures with this division. And lookie that, Tom got kneed in the balls, AFTER BILL SAVES HIS LIFE! HAHAHAHAHAHA
BB, I am all over this story like twins on the Maldives honeymooning!
Author's Response: LOLOLOL, I'm SO FUCKING HAPPY that you like it. ^_^ You know you're my dearest critic baby! and...don't kill me if the fun and games don't happen RIGHT AWAY, kay? xD rnrnAnd yea, Tom got kneed. I swear it's a common occurrence in RL xD
Date: 02/18/10 06:32 pm Title: The Blame Game
yeah, it had a flow definitely. hopefullyyy my story can turn out as good as this but i doubt it
Author's Response: lol, that's good then, cause i'm always angsting over flow xD and dude, i'm one of those ppl that things a person can have an amazing fic as long as they have an amazing beta LOL, so if you want, you're welcome to email me whenever you need help with something or someone to look over your fic, cause I'm always making time for people when they need help ^_^
Date: 02/18/10 06:23 pm Title: The Blame Game
this was gooood :] & i like your fanfic banner
Author's Response: *flutterclaps* yay, i'm glad you think so ^_^ I tried to write it so that it flowed well. lol. And aww coolbeans, the amazing girl that made it is Lrigrl! she's amazing at banners AND at writing ^_^