Date: 02/26/10 04:44 am Title: Chapter 8: For I have gone to find you
wow. this is so freaking romantic, i love it!!
Author's Response: thank you :)
Date: 02/25/10 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 8: For I have gone to find you
Aww, that's sweet as!
Way to make me jealous ¬¬.
It never even crossed my mind tat there was a lack of detail.
It was just wonderful.
I did love it. :D
Author's Response: thank you, thank you, I'm so flattered:)
Date: 02/25/10 06:18 pm Title: Chapter 8: For I have gone to find you
What a wonderful surprise for Bill! I loved all the detail and thought you put into this chapter. It was such an amazing idea to reunite them like this. And hey, maybe you didn't go into detail with the smut, but you did with all the rest and that made me a happy girl. :) Thanks for the awesome update! And good luck with your shows!
Author's Response: glad you liked it, it was a lot of fun to write it. I wrote my first song in Chinese last night, it would go so well with the story but, yeah, it would sound retarded translated back...
Date: 02/24/10 07:51 am Title: Chapter 7: An offer you couldn't refuse
awwww, sooooo sweet, cute, and all the adorable words i know... ^^
Author's Response: haha, glad you like it.
Date: 02/23/10 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 6: Not a crush
"Little did they know that that love would grow to be a love that would bring even the angels to tears."- OMG i absolutely loved this bit...
Author's Response: thank you :)
Date: 02/23/10 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 7: An offer you couldn't refuse
Guh, I've finally gotten around to reading all of this, and I wish I had done so earlier. It's wonderful. I can't wait to see how you develop all this further.
To be honest, I hadn't expected you to so into how they got together so deeply, but I'm beyond happy that you did, since it's so cute and wonderful.
Brilliant work :D
Author's Response: thank you very much. I love details, without them we couldn't understand why the angels make such a huge exception in their case...let me know if you like how it plays out. thank you once again for the review
Date: 02/23/10 01:02 pm Title: Chapter 7: An offer you couldn't refuse
Oh wow, definitely not an offer he can refuse. Not with as empty he's realized his life would be without Bill in it. Loved the letters, very heartfelt and loving. And Bill definitely knows how to make an enticing offer, covering all his bases to ensure an acceptance. :D
Fantastic chapter, hon! Looking forward to more!
*hugs* Mari
Author's Response: yeah, he had four years to plan it all out...I'll be busy flying to different shows in the coming months, but I'll try to keep it up. thank you for the review :)
Date: 02/22/10 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 6: Not a crush
I want love like that. Actually...scratch that, I want the one I love close so I can love them like that.
I see you figured how to use the italics :D
Author's Response: well, I'll be hoping that the one you love can be near you soon. rnI looked up how to do italics online, let's all give a round of applause to Google. rnthank you for the reviews. :)
Date: 02/22/10 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 6: Not a crush
Awwww, this chapter is my favorite so far! So much love and emotion, so many revelations, no wonder it trascended life and death. Really, really loving this story so very much and I can't wait for more of it. :D
Author's Response: thank you so much. I hope the story will continue to touch you, or make you smile, or laugh. laughing is healthy. thank you for the review. I will be flying out for a few shows in the next days but I'll be trying to keep up the story and coninue to upload chapters whenever I have internet.
Date: 02/21/10 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 5: Until you wish me away
Ok, first things first. I meant the 'Tom dead and bloody' when I said that I didn't want to know how Bill felt when he saw Tom like that.
Second, the italics...it sometimes happens, ask the admins how the html codes work in this site. I know how I use them, but it's hard to explain here, because it'd end up just showing some text in italics -_-
I think, when you post something, there's a bit of text where it says what are the codes allowed in the site.
Anyway, I loved this chapter :D
Author's Response: thanks so much, I'm no good with computers. My assistants usually do everything computer related for me so this is the first time I'm actually getting online and doing something for myself. I hope I figure it out, I'm sure the story's Tom and Bill will feel better when their thoughts are being expressed clearly:) thank you once again for the reviews.
Date: 02/20/10 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 5: Until you wish me away
Definitely loving the story so far! Love the way their love story is developing. *happy sigh* Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: thank you so much. the story will be quite long, I hope you continue to enjoy it.
Date: 02/19/10 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 4:Tom, just let go.
Ok, this one is...quite emotional. It felt real, which is good. I could feel the shift from the 'heaven'ish place to this one, in the reality of it, like the other was ethereal, untouchable and impossible to a point, yet this is so real you can almost breath it.
Keep it coming, this is good stuff :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm very touched that you feel that way about it. I will be editing it, to make things clearer but I upload chapters as I write it, and my schedule does not always allow time for perfection. I hope you enjoy it anyways. :)
Date: 02/19/10 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 2: Tom, Bill, and the pool of life
Yup, I like the way this story is going. Poor Bill...I don't want to think what he must have felt when he saw Tom like that.
Author's Response: when he saw tom like what? btw thanks so much for the reviews!
Date: 02/19/10 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 1: Death and the afterlife.
Okay, first things first. This story has a very very interesting plot, and it's written in a nice style, though I'd change some things here and there, use italics or something like that to show when Tom's thinking and all, to make a difference.
Also, I'd put a bit more of feeling, but then again, he's in heaven feeling nothing, and it's the first chapter, so...Anyway, it's an opinion and you can do what you want with this.
I don't think this is receiving the attention it should, because the plot in itself is interesting. *runs to read next chapter*
Author's Response: thank you so much. i do put ittalics, however they don't appear on the site...I don't know how to fix that...maybe you know?
Date: 02/19/10 09:11 am Title: Chapter 3: Memory of His Irresistible Charm
i loves it!!! *grins* very aweish i laughed alot though Tom doesnt need to give himself a pep talk until he has bill alone in a room then what is he going to do? Knock himself unconcious?
*giggles*
its always more fun to mix work and play XD
Author's Response: thank you..well I wrote this in a way to entertain myself, as my work does not allow me to date publicly, nor marry, and I'm very proffessional, so I do this whole self-control stuff every day...thank you for the review.
Date: 02/19/10 02:30 am Title: Chapter 2: Tom, Bill, and the pool of life
Wow I really like this. The in between is sorta like from the movie 'The Lovely Bones'. Great fic. I totally can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: haha, thank you, I had the movie 'heaven can wait' in mind when designing the plot, but a lot has contributed to it. I hope you enjoy the rest:)
Date: 02/18/10 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 1: Death and the afterlife.
hmm im liken so far
Author's Response: thank you, I'm glad you like it.
Date: 02/18/10 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 1: Death and the afterlife.
i like it
Author's Response: thank you, it means a lot.
Date: 02/18/10 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 1: Death and the afterlife.
This might sound weird, but I'll live. I've not read this yet, but I will, a few chapters in, I promise. It's just a rule I've had since coming to this site. Sorry :/
But, I think I've fallen in love with the premise. It sounds like it's going to be incredible! Sorry I didn't leave a review on the chapter, but I just wanted to tell you how mint it seemed to be. (y)
Author's Response: no that's fine. I generally only read if there's at least six chapters. I hope you will not be disappointed, and I'm very glad you are interested.