Date: 03/08/10 12:56 pm Title: Chapter 16:A new reason
There's a frikking ache inside of me reading this, it's almost too painful, I really wasn't expecting it to be more painful now than when they actually died. But it is. So much more so.
Yet that's brilliant, that you're able to do that so easily.
Again, Tom has to be the most adorable thing ever. I just want to hug the poor child. Or better yet, I want Bill to hug him, with his adorable spindly arms that he had at that age.
You keep apologising for skipping, but, in my opinion it makes the story better, as we're not going to be bored with tedious little things.
Mint chapter, as always.
Author's Response: I'm good at making people cry...it's the same with my music..yeah, the characters are pitiful in a way, too young to know what they're feeling...rnthat's how I see the skipping too, you just get the highlights and people don't get bored...I'm just hoping everyone can read between the lines the way you do...
Date: 03/08/10 07:52 am Title: Chapter 16:A new reason
Hee, that's awesome that David has met them, I suppose that will help the twins in some form. I just love how Bill gravitates towards Tom, seeking his approval, even when the other boy can't really tell him all he wants. Loved this chapter!
Author's Response: yeah it's their own unique ways of expressing a love they don't understand...thanks for the review...and meeting David does help them...look at them now...because of him, they are tokiohotel...right?
Date: 03/07/10 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 1: Death and the afterlife.
wow you're a genius your story is really so good. love it
Author's Response: thank you so much!
Date: 03/06/10 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 6: Not a crush
This part was sad. But it's been a really great sorry so far and I love it. :)
Author's Response: thank you so much! I'm glad you did.
Date: 03/06/10 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 15:Ready, set, go!
this is a very good story i like it
Author's Response: thank you!
Date: 03/06/10 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 15:Ready, set, go!
ugh, this is my third time trying to review. :(
Love your Tom and how protective and loving he's with Bill already. Love that they're still the same and yet so different. I'll definitely be looking forward to more.
Author's Response: thanks always! I really appreciate the reviews.:)
Date: 03/06/10 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 15:Ready, set, go!
Oh my God, I love this story so much! I think it's awsome how Bill and Tom's previous life is overlapping with the twins current one too - can't wait for more!! :D
Author's Response: thanks!
Date: 03/06/10 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 15:Ready, set, go!
I love this!! I think its ok that it is skips forward a lot. I loved the section with Bill and Tom as they were. How their lives overlap and how Simone is drawn to them. My only concern with skipping is i don't want this to end any time soon. I suggested your fic for featuring today, thats how much i love it. =) Keep up the great work!!
Author's Response: thank you so much..I'm going to be grinning all day. their lives are overlapping, but it won't end too soon... no worries :)
Date: 03/06/10 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 15:Ready, set, go!
yeah, they are pretty tall! and amazingly beautiful. ahhh *smiles with dreamy look on face* so if you don't live in Europe or the states, where do you live? : - D AAAANNND, the chapter was awesome, as always. I love the part with the newspaper, and simone noticed the little things, you know? It was great, and also as always, I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: ahhh! read my bio, I beg you...thanks for the reviews, and yeah, she's a cool mom...
Date: 03/06/10 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 15:Ready, set, go!
Guuh, were you trying to break some hearts mentioning the other, older Bill and Tom, and talking about their love. It was painful...yet lovely.
I'm quite adoring Tom's personality in this. Though I can't help but feel that the twins aren't as close to one another as they could me? Or am I just reading inside the lines instead of outside?
Either way, it was still a wonderful chapter that has left me with a weight pressing down upon my chest.
Author's Response: you are so clever...I honestly love your reviews, you always catch what I was trying to put in between everything, like the underlying idea...no on quite ever catches it...but you did...yes I was trying to break a heart or two, but more wanted to show eachother that the twins were really so much like the older tom and bill even though different, and yes they are not very close to eachother. mainly due to their personalities difference but also because they both feel a strong attachment to eachother that they can't explain, and they don't know how to express it, especially Tom, so he just hides from it...,does it make sense?
Date: 03/06/10 09:07 am Title: Chapter 14:Fond farewells and new beginnings.
Orrrrr, I don't know if I like that they've been born again, or if I hate it. Well, hate it's not the right word, but you know what I mean. They're not technically the same, nothing will be the same, and that truly saddens me, but the fact that they've got to live their lives over again and spend even more time with one another is wonderful.
Beyond wonderful.
The part with Simone was probably the oddest I've ever read. It's strange to think about two band new babies with so much history, I've never thought about how it'd turn out when you wrote this. But I greatly enjoyed it.
Author's Response: well, actually I don't like the idea so much either. but every story has it's plot and this one just happens to be odd. but don't worry. I'm already starting on another story, and you might find more of the fun characters in it. this one is meant to be more of a deep kind that makes you think and feel things that you don't normally feel. thank you for the review. I still hope you find something good in the story's progression.
Date: 03/05/10 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 14:Fond farewells and new beginnings.
wonderful!! I can't wait for the next section of this. To see if you write them as kids, or jump to teenagers, or whatever you do. keep up the great work!!
Author's Response: I'll skip around a lot...hope you like it anyways.
Date: 03/05/10 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 14:Fond farewells and new beginnings.
Awwwwww, this was lovely! I love the way Simone felt how her sons were or would be and because of that she named them. I'm looking forward to more! Loved the lyrics as well, very appropriate. :D
Author's Response: you mean the spell? thank you.I thought it up on a whim for the story...hope it makes sense...thanks for the review :)
Date: 03/05/10 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 14:Fond farewells and new beginnings.
and I was like OHMIGOSH YOU WORK FOR TOKIO HOTEL! CAN WE PLEEEEAAAASE TOUCH YOU! and they were like 'yeah, sure, we kiss the guys all the time' haha, they were just joking with us. so we just stood there chatting about them for about 20 minutes, and then they said 'sorry girls, but we're meeting bill, tom, georg and gustav in ten, so we have to go. but tom here (one of them was named tom) is the camera man for tonight, so he can get you on the big screen'! IHHHHH! it was so exciting! and then, when the guards tried to check my ticket and my bag,m i figured that if I wanted to stand not far from the stage, then I had no time for that. so I was like 'Hell no!' and pushed him, and me and my friend just ran over to the stage! so we were like 4-5 meters away from them under the concert! AND THEN, when bill was singing he turned to look at Nora(my friend) and me, and we went crazy, started to wave at him like a madman and stuff! AND THEN HE WAVED BACK! it was sooooo cool! and later, they drank from water bottles, and then they threw them out, and BOTH me Nora cauth one! OH MY GOD BEST NIGHT OF MY LIFE! creds to you if you had the patiens to read all that hun xD
Author's Response: I did read it, you stuck so many capital letters in it I couldn't help it...it's funny, you made me laugh..so are they really tall and all? anyways...I'm planning to work hard enough that in a few years I'll be big enough to travel to the states and europe for concerts...I'll meet them one day I'm sure...I just have to find out what makes people so crazy about them...what is it about Bill that just totally makes people insane...
Date: 03/05/10 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 14:Fond farewells and new beginnings.
AND HELL YEAH, they look even better in real life! okay, since i know that everyone thinks it's super exciting to hear me ramble on about stuff *cough* then i shall be so nice and tell you! haha, but seriously, it was sooooo exciting! so we got to the arena about 12 hours before the concert started, and me and my supercool new friend figured that we might as well have a little look at the backside and maaaybe try to sneak in and stuff. but, unfortunately, we were caught with our hands in the cookie jar, right when we where trying to sneak through the backdoor! but, the guys that saw us turned out to be like really nice, and then i remembered seeing one of them in a video on youtube,
Author's Response: hahahaha....it's so cute when people try to sneak backstage...
Date: 03/05/10 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 14:Fond farewells and new beginnings.
wow, I think this is becoming my new favourite story! really, it's so good, and I absolutely LOVE that you update as often as you do. can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: thank you!
Date: 03/05/10 05:09 pm Title: Chapter 14:Fond farewells and new beginnings.
all i can say is, awwwwwwwwwwwwwww
Date: 03/05/10 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 14:Fond farewells and new beginnings.
*sighs and melts*
Author's Response: haha...don't melt...:)
Date: 03/04/10 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 13:Agreed
Heartbreaking chapter. It was weird reading the part about cupid and dawn, since that's my name *laughs* but meh, I should get over it -_-
Oh, and the last bit, the poem or song or whatever, is it original, or a song? and if it's a song, which one?
Author's Response: haha...sorry about that. I edited the story notes, and you will find that they now say for clarification, all poems or song lyrics unless otherwise specified are written by me. thank you for the review:)
Date: 03/03/10 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 13:Agreed
that is so beautiful! AND I HAVE TO TELL YOU GUYS, GUESS WHO WAS AT THE MOST AWESOME TH CONCERT EVER TODAY! AND GUESS WHO GOT BILL'S WATERBOTTLE! muahahahahah, THATS ME, ohhhhhh yeaaa!
Author's Response: haha, you always make me smile, so much contagious excitment. So, how did you get his water bottle? does he look as good in real life? by the way, if you ever find out who does his makeup or what products he uses I would very much like to know..:)