Date: 03/17/10 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 22: Torture (part 2)
So...When Does Tom lose it? XD He shouldn;t be so hard on Bill though. Even if he does torture him. Pretty good. My fav story here. :)
Author's Response: thank you, I'm flattered...I'm sure he can't control himself too much longer...
Date: 03/17/10 03:49 pm Title: Chapter 22: Torture (part 2)
THIS_CHAPTER_WAS_SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO AMAZING! you have such a talent, really.I totally dig the way that tom is breaking down piece bye piece. So awesome. and I love it each time Tom loose control, haha, so funny: ') I NEEEEED THE NEXT CHAPTER!
Author's Response: it's coming it's coming...haha, thanks for the review!
Date: 03/17/10 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 22: Torture (part 2)
Hee, I guess there's something to be said to pushing Tom's buttons... yumm! I love how Bill's teasing drove him to that angry-passionate moment and still he manages to hold back because he loves Bill. Awesome chapter!
Author's Response: Yeah...He's just so afraid of going to far, and yet he wants him so bad..hehe...so much fun to write it, and I'm loving the reviews, thank you:)
Date: 03/17/10 02:54 pm Title: Chapter 22: Torture (part 2)
hehe tom is losing it
Author's Response: yep...:)
Date: 03/17/10 05:37 am Title: Chapter 1: Death and the afterlife.
Noo, it never moved too fast, tbh, the speed made it more believable. Things are more likely to happen on the spur of the moment that they are after a long drawn out conversation, and with the twins having like...two lifetimes of built up feelings of course it was going to go fast. You shouldn't worry ^.^
Author's Response: exactly...hmm...lovely then...I'll try to get the next part up tonight.
Date: 03/17/10 02:00 am Title: Chapter 16:A new reason
Is it weird that I'm still crying over their past lives? *wails*
Wow, I can almost feel David's pain.
Author's Response: yeah, while writing these chapters I was close to tears myself, but I hope you like the way it all plays out.
Date: 03/17/10 01:10 am Title: Chapter 12: The decision
EEEEE! Even though I knew it was coming, I spazzed out anyway when they said, "1989".
Lol, I suppose they're fond of that year?
This is such a wonderful, wonderful story. Extremely unique and creative.
Author's Response: fond I suppose...but it's also the real birthday of the tokiohotel twins..
Date: 03/16/10 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 21: Torture on a tour
Fiiiiiiinally, after like, over nine thousand chapters of pain the finally admit it.
Squeee.
It better be better now =.=
Guh, who cares, let there be fluff yeah?
:DI'm so happy.
Author's Response: haha...of course there's fluff, but not everything will be perfect right...anyway...glad your liking it..I always get scared when i read your reviews, cause I respect your opinion and I was afraid you would say this chapter was childish and moved to fast, which it did, but I was very tired at the time...
Date: 03/16/10 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 21: Torture on a tour
FREAKIN HELL :O!!!!!!!
This is sooooooooooooooooo goooooood.... xD
Your a really good writer!!
I want your talent!! XD
PLEASE MAKE MORE.. cant wait lol..
Author's Response: Thaaaaaaank you! well I try my best and I'm so glad you like it...and more is on the way
Date: 03/16/10 10:10 am Title: Chapter 21: Torture on a tour
aw, I LOVE YOU! and I love teasing Bill. And I love sensetiv Tom:') This chapter is so beautiful. I dunno hvow many times I have said this already, but your writing is amazing. And I can't wait for the next chappie!
Author's Response: I love you too...haha...thank you again for your review.
Date: 03/16/10 02:20 am Title: Chapter 21: Torture on a tour
awww how sweet...in an odd way lol
Author's Response: yeah.. little odd..hehe
Date: 03/16/10 12:35 am Title: Chapter 21: Torture on a tour
awwwww yay
Author's Response: haha, hope it made you smile...
Date: 03/16/10 12:22 am Title: Chapter 21: Torture on a tour
Awwww, progress, and very good progress at that! Poor Tomi, Bill sure knows which buttons to push and yay for Tom finally admitting to his feelings and Bill sort of doing the same. Looking forward to more.
Good luck on your trip and I hope you feel better soon! *hugs*
Author's Response: yeah, sorry i didn't finish it. I had a great trip and feel much better, thank you:)
Date: 03/15/10 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 19: Chasing Tom
(you want to) make a memory by bon jovie and everything we had by the academy is... are 2 really good songs for this chapter for some reason. great chapter [& story in general] & hope you write more!!! :]
Author's Response: thank you, I will write more. I update nearly every day.
Date: 03/15/10 07:22 pm Title: Chapter 20: Attempted resistance
ah!! they are getting closer to realization and acceptance, thank goodness! keep up the great work!
Author's Response: thanks!
Date: 03/14/10 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 20: Attempted resistance
Awww, poor Tomi. It's harder on him than on Bill. He's fighting against it with all he has, thinking it's wrong and wanting it all the same. Loving this, it's good angst and I love that Tom, even when thinking it's not the right thing, can't stop himself from kissing Bill. :D
Author's Response: thank you:)
Date: 03/14/10 02:25 pm Title: Chapter 8: For I have gone to find you
Aww, you didn't have to go into details because that was perfect. Sometimes too much smut is really unrealistic and less is actually more.
Author's Response: thank you:) I'm not a big fan of smut, because it's not like in real like if you're in love you're gonna fuck every second right...you gotta have a reason to, you gotta have the in-between. thanks for the review
Date: 03/14/10 07:18 am Title: Chapter 20: Attempted resistance
TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM! stop fucking running awaaaay! stupid jackassmotherfucker. or whatever. argh.
*coughs*
That was soooooooooo good! Gave me chills, I swear. And they are finally admitting it! and yummy yummy smut is waiting for me to nom on it! yey!
PLE-EEHS, update soon! or... right now! YES! great idea, update RIGHT NOW! uhh, I'm addicted, sorry:')
Author's Response: this story isn't really about smut but I'm adding a little more then I planned..for your sake...:)
Date: 03/14/10 06:35 am Title: Chapter 20: Attempted resistance
Your are a genious!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Love this
Author's Response: thank you!!
Date: 03/14/10 04:36 am Title: Chapter 20: Attempted resistance
sweet update.. update again
Author's Response: sorry I'm trying to keep up...:) glad your enjoying it.