Date: 03/25/10 06:02 pm Title: Chapter 26: Boys will be boys.
Oh, that was just about perfect! And I can fill in the blanks well enough, so no problem with me. I love that Tom is so possessive, I kinda have a thing for that. *blushes*
Author's Response: Thanks I love people with good imaginations:)
Date: 03/25/10 12:35 am Title: Chapter 25: Haven and home
I'm so happy with this chapter. I've been in love with this story and I wait every day for an update. Fantastic work as usual.
Author's Response: Thank you, I hope you enjoy the next one too:)
Date: 03/25/10 12:30 am Title: Chapter 25: Haven and home
this story is.. stupendous, magnificent, amazing.. it's 2 independent stories bound together in the most perfect of ways. the way you brought tom and bill (as twins) to bill kyle's and tom trommler's restaurant was perfect. i could see everything play right in front of my eyes. one of the best stories in the site. i will be eagerly waiting for the update!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm glad you can see it that way, I'm glad you like it!
Date: 03/24/10 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 25: Haven and home
the restraunt part was really good well actually it was all really good
Author's Response: thank you...I'm sure you notice I'm not good at writing explicit sex scenes...me and boys never really got along you see...and on top of that I find getting too detailed takes away from the mood and the emotion of the story..besides all you wonderful readers have divine imaginations, I'm sure. :)
Date: 03/24/10 03:33 pm Title: Chapter 25: Haven and home
Orrr, I know I've said other parts of this were painful, but nothing has come close as the garden scene did!
Orr, there were almost tears in my eyes.
And the scene after that, nom :D.
I had been expecting sex for a moment, but then I realised how bad that would've been for them right now, considering they're not ready for it.
Still, it was exceptionally gooood.
:D
Author's Response: Oh I'm sorry...I always make people cry a little without totally meaning to...if you like sad stories you should read this one called 'all it takes is time'...ah...I was depressed for weeks...ok (Jadis needs to shut up)I didn't think they(Tom Bill) were ready for it (sex)at all, not for a while, there's still half of them that doesn't know what the heck is going on..I think it takes time to deal with these things. anyways, thanks!
Date: 03/24/10 03:13 pm Title: Chapter 25: Haven and home
Oh wow, this was amazing! From them meeting Mr. Mack and him seeing something in them he recognized, to the twins reactions to seeing the pics in which past Bill and Tom interacted, to the awesome scene at the end. I think I agree with Tom, it's impossible for them not to let this get out of hand, it's simply too strong for them to resist.
Author's Response: thanks!!
Date: 03/24/10 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 25: Haven and home
Ah! They finally did something. The way you detailed the photos made me want to cry really bad! I can't believe it! More please!
Author's Response: Yeah...they did...I'm glad you like it.
Date: 03/24/10 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 24:Home and Haven.
so sweet!
Author's Response: thank you!
Date: 03/23/10 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 24:Home and Haven.
how sweet i luv the end
Author's Response: thanks...I'm glad you do.
Date: 03/23/10 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 24:Home and Haven.
Ah! Cutenes overload! :D SO SWEET! I LOVE the building they're in. They probably need one for other people to yeah? Bill and Tom need to come back and see that garden again. ;)
Author's Response: haha...what do you mean need one for other people? the garden, I mean the cafe/restaurant was also their favorite in their previous life..it was the place tom took Bill to when he first arrived in Germany. anyways, new tom and Bill will definitely need to go back
Date: 03/23/10 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 24:Home and Haven.
*squee* Yay, that was very beautiful. I completely adored the detailed description of the restaurant. Sounds like heaven.
And poetic parallelism is wonderful :D
Author's Response: thank you! It sounds amazing to me too..I was in a restaurant somewhat like it, withing a green house, just without the privacy :)
Date: 03/23/10 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 24:Home and Haven.
You know, this chapter has made me really worried. They're not going to follow in the same path as Bill and Tom before them, are they? If they die, I swear, so will you.
Ugh, what a dreadful thought.
On the other hand, I adored that you've had them repeat what the other Bill and Tom did, it ties everything in so nicely and makes what they do have more layers.
Brilliant job :D
Author's Response: No of course not, I can't kill the tokio hotel twins when they are still alive. I didn't follow their true lives exactly to the perfect months and show dates, but it is following their literal existence as they are now, or were when they were seventeen. ming bai ma? anyways, I don't really want to die...yeah so I'm glad you caught the fact that they were in the same restaurant...I'm blowing you a kiss for that, and I never give kisses...
Date: 03/23/10 02:13 pm Title: Chapter 24:Home and Haven.
Awwww, lovely chapter! I had to go back to chapter 8 and check, but I was pretty sure this was the same restaurant Tom and Bill met again when Tom flew to Germany and I was bloody right! *bounces* It's awesome that they can be there again and make new memories. Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Yep it's the same place, I'm glad you caught that...cause I think some people didn't...doesn't matter, it will become clearer...anyways, I'm glad you like it :)
Date: 03/23/10 05:41 am Title: Chapter 23:Fulfillment of a fantasy.
yay!!! thanks for the updates, i can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: thanks:) I'm sorry cause recently I had a couple of shows and lots of practices...your reviews always make me smile even after a long tough day, thanks.
Date: 03/22/10 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 23:Fulfillment of a fantasy.
I love this story, such a fantastic concept. I forget sometimes that this is the same story as the beginning chapters and when it hits me the realization really makes it that much more enjoyable. You are doing a wonderful job.
Author's Response: Thank you very much...there are small refferences here and there to their previous life...but anyways in the end it all plays out...I'm glad you like it so far:)
Date: 03/21/10 11:40 am Title: Chapter 23:Fulfillment of a fantasy.
That last part sounds a little bit like foreboding. But I loved the rest, at least Tomi isn't fighting Bill all that much now, giving in a bit into what he's feeling and wants. Even more so than I expected, too. He's quite headstrong. *giggles* Fantastic chapter, hon!
Author's Response: well of course it did...nothing good comes easy...thanks for the review
Date: 03/21/10 08:45 am Title: Chapter 23:Fulfillment of a fantasy.
I love how Tom seemed to go from insecure to secure and in control by the drop of a hat. It worked well for the situation.
It fitted his character to a T.
I can't tell you how wonderful it is to see them like this after about ten chapters of pain.
And Bill, being his little bashful, eager self, you had him down too.
I could comment on your characterization for paragraphs, but I won't, because it gets boring, for you and me.
While I'd have adored it if they cuddled and snuggled afterwards, the fact they didn't, made the whole thing more believable. Which is something the majority of fics on this site fail to manage.
:D Can't wait for the next chapter, especially now.
Author's Response: thank you, i love the way you catch everything, I'm very flattered..
Date: 03/21/10 06:44 am Title: Chapter 23:Fulfillment of a fantasy.
OH MY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOD
I LOVE THIS
Author's Response: :) thanks
Date: 03/21/10 03:37 am Title: Chapter 22: Torture (part 2)
so sweet and touching! great update that left me speechless! i'm craving for the next chapter!
Author's Response: thank you so much, I'm very flattered.
Date: 03/18/10 02:42 pm Title: Chapter 22: Torture (part 2)
Haave I told you how much i love this? No?
I LOVE THIIIIIIIIIIIIIS
Author's Response: You just made review number 100 for this story...which means I officially love you...I'm just gonna shower you with kisses and take you out for a nice meal and coffee...hmm...wherever you are in the world...thank you, I'm so glad you like it:)