Date: 03/30/10 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 27: The Rhythm
awwww, this is so sweet~ im hooked~~~ love you!
Author's Response: Haha, thank you, I'm glad...I love you too:0
Date: 03/30/10 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 27: The Rhythm
I think this chapter makes total sense and I love it. Its beautifully well written. great job, thanks so much for the update!!
Author's Response: Thank you!:)
Date: 03/30/10 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 27: The Rhythm
Soo, I had this long review all written and ready to post and when I hit submit the site had kicked me out and i got the "you are not allowed to use this function" message. I was devastated. I'm not a fan of twincest however, I end up reading it because it is what is mostly here so I put up with it. This chapter however, moved me in a way that I cannot express. I sometimes look at Bill in real life when he says he feels alone and what to tell him " look in the mirror, not the one that hangs on the wall but the one that stands next to you every day. Look into it and look deep and hard and then ask yourself if you are really alone" "It may not be the same as having a wife of husband but you already have a life companion" Everyone feels isolated and alone at some point what ever the reason I don't know but I find myself not worrying so much about Bill. I know that when he feels crushed Tom will keep him, It would be nice to have that for myself but like Bill I have not found my one. In time maybe but until then I have my music as well. The lyrics unknown for now. it is true... Life is like a pice of music :)
Author's Response: Kicked out? Why did they kick you out...? Does Bill Kaulitz in real life say that he is alone?(A lot of stuff is blocked in China, so I'm actually not amazingly familiar with tokiohotels personal details) hmm...well, I guess it's like that for most young celebrities...I'm glad you found the chapter moving, and yes, I wish I had a 'mirror' of myself sometimes...I still haven't come across anyone who gets me, except my manager...because we're almost the same...I'm sure you will find someone though, I know it does become clear at some point, I didn't just write this story hapazardly, as I wrote in my bio, most of this stuff has actually occured in people's lives, either mine or friends of mine, and I wanted it to actually be a real story and not just a casual fic, or sex story you know...thank you for the review, I really liked it.
Date: 03/30/10 01:51 pm Title: Chapter 27: The Rhythm
That last part was amazing, loved David's conversation with Bill, loved that he told him all those things of Bill and Tom, I think that'll help him immensely while he tries to balance both parts of his life... public and private. I think David might become instrumental for both Tom and Bill when he finds out about them. Loving this very much, honey!
Author's Response: thank you thank you thank you! although I'm not so sure David will find out about them...but then he might have a feeling here or there...
Date: 03/30/10 01:44 pm Title: Chapter 27: The Rhythm
wow. this was deep man. amazingly beautifull.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you see it that way, thank you very much:)
Date: 03/30/10 01:41 pm Title: Chapter 27: The Rhythm
This was somewhat eerie, and very cool.
I ties together and intertwines with everything else. And because of that you can really tell that you've put time into the fic and haven't written it offhandedly.
I've been waiting for you to mention Jason for so long, but I do have to wonder, what about Kevin? He just seemed to drop off the map one chapter.
Maybe a sentence about him somewhere too?
Though that's not needed.
Wonderful, as usual.
Btw, I started beta'ing the other night when I had an hour or two of spare time and I've got up to chapter, ten, how would you like me to send you them?
Author's Response: Haha, see I'm smiling now cause I was really worried you'd all think this chapter was way too 'out there', but now I'm just really happy. Yes most of the characters that existed previously will be mentioned, or will pop up here and there...already up to chapter ten? amazing...you could email them to me? lifelike_sylence@hotmail.com
Date: 03/30/10 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 27: The Rhythm
this is like the best chapter uv written so far(i luv the others but this one was wow)
Author's Response: I'm so happy, I was very afraid a lot of you wouldn't agree with this chapter, or you'd find it boring or whatever, but I'm really glad you liked it.
Date: 03/30/10 10:44 am Title: Chapter 27: The Rhythm
*nods* I see the deeper meaning. It's not lost on me. I can't say anything else...
Also, have Bill and Tom already accomplished "finding each other", or do they need to go deeper?
Author's Response: Well, they have found eachother in a way, but yes, they sort of need to sort everything out, and accept what they have, and be able to move forward in a positive way...cause right now their still not sure how to deal with it all.
Date: 03/29/10 05:15 am Title: Chapter 26: Boys will be boys.
awwwww, this is simply breathtaking! i truely hope you update this soon~ love you babe!
Author's Response: I'm trying as often as I can, but the story get's harder and harder to actually write, although it's all in my head it's just..complicated, but I'm so glad you like it:)
Date: 03/27/10 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 26: Boys will be boys.
Holy CRAP, that was hot. XD
Author's Response: Thank you...
Date: 03/27/10 03:59 am Title: Chapter 8: For I have gone to find you
I liked this chapter :) one suggestion for this story tho wud b to change bills last name to kaulitz and toms to trümper since those r both their real last names :)
Author's Response: Thank you but if you read the story summary and actually finish the story you will notice that those two boys, the original bill and Tom are not the tokiohotel bill and Tom, they are completely different people who exist in part of the tokiohotel twins' lifetime, if this does not make sense to you then just keep reading and it will become clear :)
Author's Response: Thank you but if you read the story summary and actually finish the story you will notice that those two boys, the original bill and Tom are not the tokiohotel bill and Tom, they are completely different people who exist in part of the tokiohotel twins' lifetime, if this does not make sense to you then just keep reading and it will become clear :)
Date: 03/27/10 03:01 am Title: Chapter 1: Death and the afterlife.
Whoa!! This is the wierdest story ever!! I luv it tho :):) I'm jelous of tht floor tho :) I wish floors were really like tht :)
Author's Response: yeah, I wish it too...I wouldn't have had as many scars...
Date: 03/26/10 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 1: Death and the afterlife.
Of course I'll help, I'll get started on the first chapter the next time I get a chance to. :)
Author's Response: great, you're wonderful, thank you. I'm off for another couple of shows in another city, I'll update when I get back :)
Date: 03/26/10 10:42 am Title: Chapter 26: Boys will be boys.
Usually I would be a bit disappointed with the lack of sex *blush* but you write so well and beautifully, I completely accept it.
It's perfect :heart:
Author's Response: Oh, you see that's what I love you for, thanks you:)
Date: 03/26/10 09:28 am Title: Chapter 26: Boys will be boys.
OH MY GOOOOOOD I LOVE THIS
Author's Response: OOOHH MY GOD! THANKS! I love the capital letters, they make me feel even better:)
Date: 03/26/10 06:05 am Title: Chapter 26: Boys will be boys.
ug, soo good! fantastic job with this!
Author's Response: thank you, I'm so flattered, I didn't know if people would like the way it was done, but I'm so glad you did.
Date: 03/26/10 04:24 am Title: Chapter 1: Death and the afterlife.
thank to god.I didn't miss this fic.this story make me cry .I love it so much.
Author's Response: oh thank you, I'm very happy that you like it:)
Date: 03/25/10 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 26: Boys will be boys.
mmm!!!! lovely scene
thanks
Author's Response: thank you, I'm so glad you liked it...
Date: 03/25/10 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 26: Boys will be boys.
It gives me great satisfaction to see Bill and Tom have really found one another again. I can't wait to see how this ends (not that I want it to end of course), will there come a point when their past memories return?
Author's Response: well..I'm afraid not, although they will feel certain things...it might allude to it...thank you for the review.:)
Date: 03/25/10 06:16 pm Title: Chapter 26: Boys will be boys.
This works really well.
The build up to it fit and again made it more believable.
However, Tom seems to go from one extreme to the other, even if it's not that bad that you've done it. It's just a bit odd, you know.
I honest to God worried that there was going to be rape then.
But then I thought about the characters and the story and my mind was put to rest.
Your descriptions are very good, better than most writers in fact. However, a bit of con crit. there are some typing errors and grammar errors that have remained throughout. Just things like capital letters and their and there and such. Nothing major, but maybe look into it?
Author's Response: Yeah, well it's him sort of trying to still have control, but losing it every once in a while...You sort of have to guess what he might be thinking all the time for it to seem reasonable...anyways...no rape, TOm loves him too much...and yes, I know about the grammar errors, you said once about you possibly being able to help me...if that's still possible, i want to start from the beginning of the story and go through all the chapters to edit them first...let me know if you want to help.:) thanks for the review