Date: 04/11/10 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 30: 'Finding' each other
Aww, I am truly going to miss this story too.
LOL at last couple lines XDD
I found this chapter to be like a calm happiness. I can feel it winding down.
Author's Response: Thank you.
Date: 04/11/10 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 30: 'Finding' each other
As always GREAT work! :D
Author's Response: (takes little bow of gratitude)thank you!
Date: 04/11/10 02:08 pm Title: Chapter 30: 'Finding' each other
So cute. I'm gonna miss this story. Bill and Tom are SO CUTE!
Author's Response: Yeah, I'm gonna miss writing about them...thank you
Date: 04/08/10 10:57 pm Title: Chapter 29: Colored my world
In all seriousness, I absolutely think this story needs to be featured... this instant. I grow speechless everytime I read a chapter. Not because I have nothing to say but because there's so much new emotions that my brain just freezes... I mean it in a good way, by the way so don't worry XD. I absolutely love this story and I hope that when I start writing my first fic, I'd be at least half as good as you are :)
By the way, I just want to ask if I may use your poem from Chapter 22 for my English class. You see, we were supposed to bring our favorite poems to class and I totally, definitely, in all respect love your poem there.. I promise to give you credit for it and praise your genius mind. I understand if I can't... I just want to see if you will allow me.. thank you :)
I will be waiting eagerly for the next update!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm very very flattered that you feel that way about the story. I just came back from a show, all exhausted, and really, I feel great now, so thanks for that. You may use the poem if you wish, although it's actually a song. just make sure people know that although it is not copywrited in the united states, it's not to be coppied, or you know all that...rnI'll try to update as soon as I can. meanwhile, you should know, and I'll be posting a note about it when it's ready, but I am starting a new story which is called Diamonds are forever. you might like it too...thanks again for the review
Date: 04/08/10 08:49 am Title: Chapter 1: Death and the afterlife.
Yeah... sorry about the last words. I was not on my pc but in one of my U's. So yeah... i tend to type everything with some letters that are not suppoused to be in there :P
Author's Response: that's fine...it made sense...so much love
Date: 04/08/10 01:05 am Title: Chapter 29: Colored my world
awwwwwwwwwwwwww~
Author's Response: haha...mmm...
Date: 04/07/10 09:07 pm Title: Chapter 29: Colored my world
thanks for the update! i've been noticing a few more grammar and spelling mistakes, just something to keep an eye on. i can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Yeah, I've noticed them too...sorry, it's mainly the morphine and exhaustion...but I'm recovering so hopefully the story will too:)
Date: 04/07/10 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 29: Colored my world
SO... another chapter. I hope you don need any more morphine :)
As I have said I lñove yopur story
Author's Response: nope, I'm off the morphine:) yippee...I've got my voice back so I'm really happy...thanks so much for the review, although I have to ask what language those last words were in...
Date: 04/07/10 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 29: Colored my world
You know what I'd love to see? The old Bill and Tom's pov on how the twins have grown up, with their souls but different environments.
I know it's not possible, because of how the story is, but I just think it'd be really cool.
And damn, this chapter had me choking up a little.
Not a lot, but when Kevin and David were talking it was a little hard to read.
It makes me quite jealous, there aren't many people in the world who would be missed so much once they were gone and by so many people.
I know, everyone is grieved over, but with the old Bill and Tom it just seems so much more.
Loved the chapter, surprise surprise.
Author's Response: Yeah...I don't think i can put that in the story, simply because I can't kill the tokiohotel twins when they are still alive..I'm a bit superstitious :) I feel like it's bad luck to kill them...so yeah...and i don't think that's true, that there aren't many people who would be missed...I think everybody would be really surprised if they knew just how many people love them or care about them and just never told them...anyways, thanks so much for the review...have a delightful weekend...wait, I have to mope to you for a second...I'm so mad cause Paul Van Dyke is in my city this weekend, and LambofGod, and I wanted to see them both, but I have shows on those days...I'm sad...sorry had to tell someone about it:)...(okay, you can hit me now)
Date: 04/07/10 01:55 pm Title: Chapter 29: Colored my world
i like the end with the lyrics...or was it a poem? anywho good chapter
Author's Response: that was a poem...there is a song of it, but the song is written to a girl so yeah, I edited it for the story and made it a poem.
Date: 04/07/10 01:43 pm Title: Chapter 29: Colored my world
Was? Am I the first to review ch29? lol
Lol, I don't mind the sometimes less fluff and no smut. Each chapter in this story is like a gem.
And wow, this has got to be the first time I actually truly care about characters who aren't the four of TH :D
Good writing as always.
Author's Response: yes the first, thank you so much! I'm glad you don't mind the lack of somethings, I'll try to put in more, but I have to get the whole story done sometime before christmas right :) I'm glad you care about the other characters too.
Date: 04/05/10 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 28: Bedtime
Awww! I love how every chapter is chock-full of real, genuine love. *is giddy and warm*
Beautiful lyrics again! :D
Author's Response: thank you!
Date: 04/05/10 07:35 pm Title: Chapter 28: Bedtime
Loved the chapter, as always! I love their growing intimacy, love how both of them are so into this now, not just Bill. Love that we had a bit of angst between them so they could have the very hot not quite make up sex. ;) I'll be looking forward to more and I hope you feel better soon.
Author's Response: haha, thank you, and I do feel better!
Date: 04/04/10 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 28: Bedtime
awwwwww~
Author's Response: hahaha...
Date: 04/04/10 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 28: Bedtime
yay! another wonderful chapter, thank you!
Author's Response: thank you again:)
Date: 04/04/10 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 1: Death and the afterlife.
This truly is the most beautiful fan fic I've ever read. In any fandom.
Author's Response: Thank you, that is truly flattering.
Date: 04/04/10 03:30 pm Title: Chapter 28: Bedtime
I hope you are better now. Morphine? Wow, you should have been in a lot of pain.
I love your story, thanks for uploading.
Author's Response: not really better...medicine of almost any kind has never worked on me, so my boss thought I should try that at least so I could sleep, because the cough is terrorising my throat...annyways:) thank you for the review, I'm glad you love it.
Date: 03/31/10 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 27: The Rhythm
So... I've read the story on my ipaq and I loved it. I'm sorry for no posting anymore reviews, but in the time I couldn't
Thanks for writting such a lovely story.
Author's Response: It's ok, I'm happy you reviewed at all, and even happier that you liked it:)
Date: 03/31/10 01:55 am Title: Chapter 27: The Rhythm
*_* truly beautiful. This is such a moving and meaningful story that extends far beyond being a narrative. It affects me and my view of life and i'm sure it did so too for many other people. One of the best stories on the site. Your updates are ALWAYS worth the wait. I will be tuning in for the next one.
Author's Response: Thank you so much...I really did want peoople to get more out of it then just a few laughs or you know...So I'm really glad you enjoy it and can feel something from it, I will try to update soon:)
Date: 03/30/10 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 27: The Rhythm
I love this so much
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so happy that you do.