Date: 03/08/10 01:20 pm Title: Day One: A Sweet Treat
Oh, it was updated! My bad, I should've checked earlier.
Now this is the kind of story that makes me awkward, I never know what to say because if I say "Um, I liked it," then I'd sound like a perve, if I say "I loved it!", well, worse yet.
I can't wait to see what else Tom will think of, and what he'll do, I'm *secretly* hooked. But don't tell anyone *blushes* xD.
Author's Response: don't be embarrassed to be a perv! we all are! read some other reviews on this and you won't feel as embarrassed, promise;)
Date: 03/06/10 09:23 pm Title: Day One: A Sweet Treat
I REALLY REALLY LIKE THIS, HUN. KEEP WRITING DAMMIT. btw, strawberry ice cream is officially my favorite nau
Author's Response: can't blame you for that;D it's Bill's favorite too! well, at least in my mind. thanks, i'll keep going!
Date: 03/06/10 03:20 pm Title: Prologue
OMG, I totally love this, and slave Bill is SO hot!
I want more : DD
Author's Response: thanks! he's a sexy one.
Date: 03/01/10 11:10 pm Title: Day One: A Sweet Treat
:D naughty naughty.
Author's Response: ;DDDDD
Date: 03/01/10 08:56 pm Title: Prologue
Amazing chapter!!!
Author's Response: danke!
Date: 03/01/10 10:34 am Title: Day One: A Sweet Treat
o.... kinky... for some reason i assume bill is eventually going to get some paybcak for this???
Author's Response: *wiiiiiink* he might...that's actually quite a good idea.
Date: 03/01/10 12:20 am Title: Day One: A Sweet Treat
Oooooo, I LOVE this!!!! So, so good and hot. MOre of this, please! Wonderful how you use other things than just normal slapping and fucking here. The ice cream and spoon and all was perfect. I can't wait for the next chapter! :)
Author's Response: thank you! I should warn you, though, it's probably going to get darker from here...although I doubt you'll mind that:)
Date: 03/01/10 12:20 am Title: Day One: A Sweet Treat
Holy fucking christ. So...wrong. And so fucking perfectly fantastic. You, my dear, are sick. And I don't think I could love you more for it. This is sure to give me fun dreams tonight... ;)
I can't wait to see what you think of next...
Author's Response: :D it should just get sicker and darker from here! Tomi went easy on him for the first day;)
Date: 02/18/10 11:36 pm Title: Prologue
oh, oh! So good so far. Can't wait to read more. :)
Author's Response: danke!
Date: 02/18/10 08:40 pm Title: Prologue
Oooh I love this kind of stuff. More slave Bill please!
Author's Response: slave Bill is so... x__x hot. will update soon!
Date: 02/18/10 08:02 pm Title: Prologue
*HUMPS YOUR FACE VICIOUSLY*
YOU
IZ
MAKIN'
ME
HORNY.
OH, derr is tha blinky light on ma telephone, signifyin' da text.
From you.
Sexorz we HAVE! *spontaneous orgasm*
I cannot waits for more. You text meh when you update.
Author's Response: YOU KNOWS I WILL TELL YOU WHEN. I DO MAH BEST TO MAKE YOU JIZZ YOUR PANTS WHILE WE SEX UP DA GERMAN DUDES *HUMP HUMP* OH JA OH JA
Date: 02/18/10 07:03 pm Title: Prologue
Good, amazing, awesome. :D Keep going, and soon. :D
Author's Response: will do!
Date: 02/18/10 05:09 pm Title: Prologue
loveing it!!! Bill as Tom's personly slave is soooo HOT!!
keep them comming :)
Author's Response: thanks!
Date: 02/18/10 04:59 pm Title: Prologue
I love BDSM fics, so this really intrigues me! I so can't wait to see what Tom has in store for Bill!
Author's Response: thanks for reviewing! i hope you like what he has planned.
Date: 02/18/10 03:59 pm Title: Prologue
yeaah *-* me likes it! :D
Author's Response: gut! danke!
Date: 02/18/10 03:25 pm Title: Prologue
It had me hooked from the beginning, go on, it sounds interesting.
Author's Response: *pelvic thrust* yeaaaah. glad i got you interested!
Date: 02/18/10 03:20 pm Title: Prologue
Oooh, I'm so excited! This sounds really interesting... and sick and twisted just the way I like it! I'll be waiting for the upcoming updates for sure! Don't hesitate, make it really twisted, okay? :)
Author's Response: yesss. thank you! i love twisted *crazy eye twitch*