Date: 03/15/10 07:48 pm Title: "My Life Isn't About You Anymore"
I'm so excited for the sequel! I loved this story!
Author's Response: And I love you for reviewing! <3
Date: 03/15/10 06:27 pm Title: "My Life Isn't About You Anymore"
I love this story, so much. Can wait till the sequel is up. Very well written
Author's Response: Thankyou, thankyou, thankyou <3
Date: 03/15/10 06:18 pm Title: "My Life Isn't About You Anymore"
I'm so happy with how this ended! A very good story, I'm sorry to see it end.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you think so. And I'm sorry it's ended too ): Thank you so much for reading and reviewing the way you have, I loved reading your reviews! :D
Date: 03/15/10 05:52 pm Title: "My Life Isn't About You Anymore"
I SO CANT WAIT FOR THE SEQUEL!!!
Author's Response: ME NEITHER!!
Date: 03/15/10 05:22 pm Title: "My Life Isn't About You Anymore"
omg will u make a segueal? please ill love u forever
Author's Response: I am making a sequel :) It won't be up for about a week, but stay tuned! It'll be called Teen Mom.
Date: 03/15/10 10:57 am Title: "HOLY FUCK THIS FUCKING HURTS"
Love it!!
But who will win?
I think Tom will win this time. And in the sequel, Bill. But it can be the other way around!!!
Anyways, LOVELY STORY!!!
Can't wait for the sequel!!! *gasp*
Date: 03/15/10 08:52 am Title: "HOLY FUCK THIS FUCKING HURTS"
love it :D
Author's Response: I'm glad :D
Date: 03/15/10 04:40 am Title: "HOLY FUCK THIS FUCKING HURTS"
Dude, you cried and I got butterflies. How does that work?
You should be very proud. You’ve given birth to something so beautiful. And I not only mean this chapter but this entire story. Amazzazing. And sequel? Oh, hells yeah! Cannot wait! (Insert more excited Bill-like clapping here)
I am sooo freakin’ happy Bill was there, couldn’t have pictured it any other way. Well, I guess I could but I loved this so much I don’t want to xD When Billy-boy walked in through the door, my tummy started flipping like crazy. That’s never happened to me when reading something before. You totes get extra brownie points for that! Congrats, chica. =D
I think both bitch-flakes (Tom) and sparkly boy (like I need to say it) need a good whack upside the head. The whole not coming and telling Livie she was delirious. Bill should have sucked her face off and get to some more baby making, man. The boy’s got it in him somewhere under all that glitter - I just know it! xDD
Raegen Skye, I luh-luh-Love it! Yeah, with a capital L.
I’d love to write more but I actually have an important dentist appointment in the morning and it is now almost 2 am. Point is I very much love x)
Pweez update soon.
Author's Response: Ah, opposite ends of the world (country) I see; it's almost 5 am for me :D rnrnAnd I am proud, I'm proud of myself for finishing this story, and I'm proud of the way it turned out. rnrnI just want you to know that I'm counting all of the brownie points that I've scored and it's a lot of points. -danceofjoy- rnrnSomething that made me LOL so loud, I woke my six year old sister up- Bitch Flakes and Sparkly Boy together in once sentence. Normally, something like that wouldn't make me laugh, because one, that's how I think of Bill normally (glitter boy, sparkly boy, same difference) but I really LOL'd. Sorry. :PrnrnI'm glad you like her name :D Not entirely sure I like it so much, but...Livie likes it :DrnrnGet some sleep, girl, thanks for reviewing!!
Date: 03/15/10 01:19 am Title: "HOLY FUCK THIS FUCKING HURTS"
This was a great chapter. I loved it. The way the birth went seemed so real, good writing.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 03/15/10 01:11 am Title: "HOLY FUCK THIS FUCKING HURTS"
Whooo!!!...i freaking love this story!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!! <3
Date: 03/14/10 10:48 pm Title: "HOLY FUCK THIS FUCKING HURTS"
I read this from the internet on my cell phone during my lunch break at work because I just couldn't wait to read it! (And was late for getting off my break because I was so consumed by it. Thanks a lot! You owe me a cookie!) LOL!
Anyway, This chapter was another masterpiece. Your style of writting is wonderfully discriptive. Bill is still the one who is stepping in as the father, I see. I like it! It makes the plot of the story so much more interesting. Normally stories about drama have a main plot and then just a bunch of drama thrown in between to try to make it more interesting even though it's unneccessary. Like, one of them is wrongly accused of cheating and the others have to convince the accuser it was a misunderstanding, then one of them gets hit by a car, then on of their parents dies. XP It's all the same, but not this story. Everything that happens ties perfectly into the plot. Bill's character is such a jewel
Author's Response: LOL Oh, my, I am so sorry XD I baked you a cookie -handscookie- I hopes you likes it and it makes up for you being late. :P lolrnrnI'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter, and that you're glad Bill is stepping up to be the dad. And I know what you mean about that drama- it's so unnecessary sometimes, it just makes the story seem crowded. That's something that I'm learning as a writer, and trying not to do. I may still do it sometimes, lol, but I'm learning.rnrnThank you for reviewing!
Date: 03/14/10 10:34 pm Title: "HOLY FUCK THIS FUCKING HURTS"
One thing to know is that they don't send mom's to recovery anymore unless you've had a c-section. Also, in pretty much all hospitals the labor room is the same room your stay in for the delivery unless it's a high risk delivery (twins, placenta previa, etc.) in which case the take you to an operating room. We have 2 daughters so I've been there and done that, the last time only being 2 1/2 months ago ;) So it's all still quite fresh in my memory. lol.
Author's Response: Lol thank you :) it must be different in all hospitals, because my stepmom had a baby about a year ago and everything that i wrote about came from that. she had a natural birth and they sent her to recovery amd she was in a different room and everything lol i try not to write about what i dont know because then i seem like a dumbass xD so i thank you for your suggestions, but yeah, i think it might be different in all hospitals. personally, i think its bs that they send you to recovery in the first place witj no vosoters! but thats just my opinion :P
Date: 03/14/10 07:33 pm Title: "HOLY FUCK THIS FUCKING HURTS"
bill should sign the birth c. tom is a ass for not coming.. so he loses his chance
Author's Response: That's right! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 03/14/10 07:11 pm Title: "HOLY FUCK THIS FUCKING HURTS"
aww I am so happy for Liv and Raegan's middle name I like it but I'm happy Bill was able to come for her, but I can't believe Tom did not come why? omg I can't wait for the sequel I mean I am a fan of the show and so incorporating the show with Tokio Hotel is awsome. I love it!!! your an awsome writer
Author's Response: I'm glad you like her middle name :) You'll find out why Tom didn't come in another chapter. I'm such a huge fan of the show too, are you watching this season? :D Thank you for the compliments and for reviewing!
Date: 03/14/10 04:36 pm Title: "Your Water Broke!"
You have such an amazing way with words! Everything flows so perfectly. Not to mention that you shocked me with a few turns here and there ;) I truly can't wait for the next chapter! I'm dying to find out what happens next!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! And I'm good for that, haha :) Next chapter is coming in a few minutes!
Date: 03/13/10 10:04 pm Title: "How Are You Even Pregnant?"
This reminds me of Paris, from your other story "Orphan" [:
Author's Response: Ahh, see but the difference between the Tom in this story and the Tom in that story is that Tom didnt know Paris was pregnant. Tom was a good guy in thay fic lol hes a douche in this one xD
Date: 03/12/10 10:45 pm Title: "Your Water Broke!"
My god I just love this story. I'm so sorry I haven't left a review in a while. I've been so busy and the only time I've had to read this was when I was really tired and wanted to head straight to bed after.
Anyway, this has to be one of my favorite TH fanfics that I've read. A big reason for that is because of this chapter.
"Can you do something for me?" he asked me suddenly, and held onto my hand tighter. "One thing for me and I'll never ask you to do anything for me ever again."
"Anything," I said.
I didn't know that one day those words would be the frosting on top; if I had never said these words, nothing would fall into place like they did.
"Kiss me," he whispered and pulling me closer. "Just once."
"Why?" I asked. "Why- why do you want to do this to yourself?"
He shook his head. "I just want a kiss."
That just touched my heart. Even though she is in love with Tom, you can feel the connection between her and Bill so well, but you can also feel his pain. Tat moment was so right. These characters are so beautifully written. That way Tom's charcter is acting fits very well into mix as well. Even though he is the father and the one she says she loves, Bill is the one who is more concerned for her. You should be very proud of this. I'm on the edge of my seat. I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: This review brought a tear to my eye, I'll have you know! I am so pleased, so flattered that you think that about this fic- and I AM extremely proud of the way this is going. I never thought it would take off like it has. I'm really glad that you like thay scene - it was really difficult to write, so I'm happy that you find it satisfactory :) nnThank you so much - your review put the biggest smile on my face and completely made my day! I'm updating (hopefully) sometime tomorrow, so stay tuned!
Date: 03/12/10 02:28 pm Title: "Your Water Broke!"
Sorry for not commenting on your previous posts. I just got really busy for all of the projects and examinations. Anyways, back to the story.
Bill told Olivia that he love her! That's good, almost. Because Livie is still in love with Tom. I mean, it's really painful to see the person you love loving somebody else in return. And to make matters worse, your brother. Your own twin brother.
I hope I would see more of the Tom/Bill competition. I really love them!
LOVELY STORY. PLEASE UPDATE FASTER AND WRITE MORE CHAPTERS.
I'm really craving for this story. A LOT.
Author's Response: That's okay, you're reviewing now :D That puts a smile on my facee ;DrnrnI'm so glad you like this story :3 I'll update this weekend!
Date: 03/12/10 01:28 pm Title: "Your Water Broke!"
So sad twins can't be with Livie... but I bet they are in labor with her despite the fact they in the other side ot the world :D ok, my english, sucks, so just continue. And besides, I'm tracking many stories, but you are the only one who updates regularly and readers don't have to wait months... love you :}
Author's Response: Haha your english is fine :D I'm glad you like my story, thanks for reviewing!
Date: 03/12/10 09:27 am Title: "Your Water Broke!"
-dies- Bill and Tom need to be there... Well esp. Bill. Poor thing! Have I told you I love this? I'm so so so excited for the next chapter! And I think I was your 100th reviewer! Hooray! Congrats on being AMAZING! :)
Author's Response: YOU ARE MY 100th REVIEWER! im so excited lmao thank you for reviewing and you're nice words.