Date: 10/09/10 10:54 am Title: "You Look Kinda Green"
poor livie !!!!
love it !!!!
Date: 10/09/10 12:45 am Title: "You're Pregnant"
awww poor livie tom you are an asshole !!! love it =)
Date: 09/22/10 07:38 pm Title: "My Life Isn't About You Anymore"
Loved it!
Date: 09/22/10 07:38 pm Title: "My Life Isn't About You Anymore"
Loved it!
Date: 09/22/10 06:57 pm Title: "HOLY FUCK THIS FUCKING HURTS"
Loved it!
Date: 09/22/10 06:43 pm Title: "Your Water Broke!"
Loved it!
Date: 09/22/10 06:07 pm Title: "What Does A Pregnant Girl Have To Do To Get Some Ice Cream Around Here?"
Loved it!
Date: 09/22/10 05:58 pm Title: "He's With Someone Else Now, Okay?"
Loved it!
Date: 09/22/10 05:30 pm Title: "Congratulations, Mommy"
Loved it!
Date: 09/22/10 05:23 pm Title: "I'm Not Letting You Do This Alone"
Loved it!
Date: 09/22/10 05:13 pm Title: "How Are You Even Pregnant?"
Loved it!
Date: 09/22/10 04:22 pm Title: "How Are You Even Pregnant?"
Loved it!
Date: 09/22/10 01:59 pm Title: "And I'm Trying To Tell You That I'm Pregnant!"
Loved it!
Date: 09/22/10 01:04 pm Title: "Are You Okay, Liv?"
Loved it!
Date: 09/22/10 12:32 pm Title: "You Look Kinda Green"
Loved it!
Date: 09/22/10 11:56 am Title: "You're Pregnant"
Loved it!
Date: 09/02/10 12:58 pm Title: "You're Pregnant"
I like it so far. =]:
Date: 08/16/10 10:38 pm Title: "My Life Isn't About You Anymore"
(= Bill was perfect for her
Date: 07/29/10 01:26 pm Title: "You're Pregnant"
It was confusing how she went from forgiving Tom, wanting to be with him, saying it was all gonna be good, that she loved him, and Bill getting jealous. And then suddenly make it the other way around, yeah sure, he didn't show up when Bill did, but still. She suddenly, again, said she didn't love him, a week after she said she did. Tom actually were the dad and he showed up the day after. He told her he was scared, sure, that's not supposed to be an excuse, but still. It just didn't work, how would you feel if your boyfriend suddenly decided he liked your sister better?
No offense, just my opinion. But I think it would've been better if she stayed with Tom. That would've been the cutest thing. Thanks for the read.
Author's Response: And I totally respect your opinion. I knew from the very beginning of the story, before I even fully wrote the first chapter, that I wanted Liv to end up with Bill. Maybe when I wrote the last chapter, I rushed it a little just because I was excited that it was the very last chapter. I'm not sure, I can't remember- it was a few months ago lol but I appreciate your constructive criticism and your opinions- Maybe when my laptop is fixed, I'll go back and fix some things. Thanks for reviewing!