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Reviewer: jenar Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/10 07:58 am Title: "Congratulations, Mommy"

such a beautiful story :) please update soon

Author's Response: thank you!

Reviewer: Creatrix13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/04/10 08:01 pm Title: "I'm Not Letting You Do This Alone"

This is a great story! And I'm really good with names-er, I like exotic ones, so don't shoot me-so here's boys and girls:
Boy: Logan, Wesley
Girl: Victory, Cassia
Sorry, I gave you two! XD Told ya I'm a name freak! Haha keep going!

Author's Response: I am the exact same way! If I were a celebrity, I'd totally have one of those weird names (not like Coco, or Apple, haha) but cute, pretty unusual names. I love the ones you suggested, so thanks! I'm gonna update tomorrow, so stay tuned!

Reviewer: Cynnn Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/04/10 02:09 am Title: "I'm Not Letting You Do This Alone"

girl middle names: Dea
boy middle names: shaun, jasper

Okay I love this story. Its really good. Post more soon. :D

Author's Response: Thank you for the suggestions & for reviewing!

Reviewer: mamare Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/03/10 10:31 pm Title: "I'm Not Letting You Do This Alone"

Wow! Absolutely amazing! I'm dyeing to read the rest!!! :D

Author's Response: thank you! and i'm dying for you to read it too! haha ;D

Reviewer: crymsonangel Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/03/10 02:30 am Title: "I'm Not Letting You Do This Alone"

aww why is Tom being like that and I feel so bad for her but it is so sweet that Bill is going to help her that's so nice of him, ooh for a boy christopher, and for a girl elizabeth '

I love it!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the name suggestions! And thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: talyntokiohotel Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/03/10 12:28 am Title: "I'm Not Letting You Do This Alone"

damn tom. i hope bill and her fall in love

Author's Response: :-) wouldn't that be cute? Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: midnightangell19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/02/10 09:39 pm Title: "I'm Not Letting You Do This Alone"

Emma Grace? I have a list of baby boy & girl names for when I have lil ones. I'm a twin and hope that ill have twins!! weeee....

Author's Response: You know, that's funny you said Grace. I was thinking if I was doing a girl, I was going to name the baby after Grayson, except make it Gracie. I don't know if I'm still going to do that, but thank you for the suggestion! And I know what you mean, I have lists of names too! :D

Reviewer: Nora Morales Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/02/10 08:57 pm Title: "I'm Not Letting You Do This Alone"

Boy: Simon James
Girl: Kara Ellen
the story is great! I love it!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the suggestions! Thank you so much for reviewing, Nora! :)

Reviewer: MilitaryMulisha Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/01/10 10:04 pm Title: "How Are You Even Pregnant?"

Awww!
I want Livie to have a girllllllllll! :D
And Tom better come around, or I'll kick him in the kneecaps! x]
& your banner is fine. =]

Author's Response: BAHAH that was cute :P Thanks for reviewing! And thanks about the banner too :D

Reviewer: mr_ious Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/01/10 10:41 am Title: "How Are You Even Pregnant?"

I LOVE IT!!

Bill is going to be the "father" of Liv's baby!

I just wanted Tom to snap back to reality. His actions made me really sad. :(

GOOD STORY THOUGH! Keep writing and update faster, bitte.

Author's Response: Thank you! And yes, that essentially is the plan, that Bill is going to take over. Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: Jea Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/28/10 11:51 pm Title: "How Are You Even Pregnant?"

This was a good chapter. Like I said, it's real interesting that Bill want's to be the one to step in. I'm looking frward to reading more.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you think so; I find that as it's going on, the chapters are getting harder and harder to write. T_T But nevertheless, I will carry on :D Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: talyntokiohotel Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/28/10 10:28 pm Title: "How Are You Even Pregnant?"

... cant wait for the next update

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: crymsonangel Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/28/10 06:38 pm Title: "How Are You Even Pregnant?"

I think it's so sweet that Bill is wanting to Help her, I hope Tom comes around but I love it, it's getting better

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: devilcanday Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/28/10 02:38 pm Title: "How Are You Even Pregnant?"

i really like it!
i really hope livie is haveing a little girl it would make my day!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you & you'll have to wait to find out! :D

Reviewer: Emo_NinjA Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/28/10 11:55 am Title: "And I'm Trying To Tell You That I'm Pregnant!"

I absolutely love this! I cant wait to see what happens when Bill steps up to be a father more than Tom

Author's Response: Thank you! I can't wait for you read it either! :D

Reviewer: mr_ious Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/10 02:25 pm Title: "Are You Okay, Liv?"

The story is really good. I'm a big fan of Tokio Hotel but this story, among other fanfictions, really caught my heart. I mean, there are lots of great fanfictions in this site but this fiction made me more alert of what's happening. What is reality. It's really great that I'm enjoying reading a fanfiction and learning life's lesson about pregnancy.

It's really interesting and heartwarming at the same time.

I'm looking forward in encountering Bill in the next chapters! :)

LOVELY story! Keep writing and update fast.

mr_ious

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm really glad you appreciate the fact that not only am I writing a fic about Tokio Hotel, but I'm also trying to make people alert and aware of pregnancy. I'm glad you're enjoying the fic, and I hope you stick around; I'm going to be running with it for a while :)rn

Reviewer: Jea Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/25/10 09:59 am Title: "You're Pregnant"

I think this story has great potential. I bet it will be even better once she tells Bill about it (which I hope is soon!) There aren't any other pregnancy stories that I know of where Bill steps in instead of Tom, so the conflict between the two of them should be very interesting. And it's a good idea to use the show as inspiration. It isn't always easy to make this story line realistic. I'm gonna track this.

Author's Response: It's funny- I'm actually in the midst of writing the chapter when Bill finds out right now =) I wanted this story to be unique; most pregnancy stories are either mpreg or just mary-sue; I really don't want this story to be like that. So I thank you for your compliments and I hope that I don't disappoint you with how this story goes :D Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Jea Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/25/10 09:56 am Title: "You're Pregnant"

I think this story has great potential. I bet it will be even better once she tells Bill about it (which I hope is soon!) There aren't any other pregnancy stories that I know of where Bill steps in instead of Tom, so the conflict between the two of them should be very interesting. And it's a good idea to use the show as inspiration. It isn't always easy to make this story line realistic. I'm gonna track this.

Reviewer: crymsonangel Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/24/10 01:18 pm Title: "Are You Okay, Liv?"

I love it!!! really good

Reviewer: talyntokiohotel Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/24/10 12:00 am Title: "Are You Okay, Liv?"

come on tell billa

Author's Response: I'm getting there ;D

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