Ahh! this chapter was grrrreat :)I hope tom gets his act together :) although I think Bill is gonna be the ''father-figure'' eventually... especially since livie told him she loves him too :)

Poor Tomy will be hurt :(
I hope they get there in time for the birth...I bet Bill will burst through the doors :) and tom will come in 30 seconds later panting hahaha :) X

First thing’s first *hugs* thank you so much. I am smiling like a total retard right now. Oh! And HERE is your cake. Made it myself ;)

This chappy was perfect. PERFECT, I tell ya! Totes adoration. I mean, after this: “Why?” I asked. “Why- why do you want to do this to yourself?”

He shook his head. “I just want a kiss.” My heart goes out to Bill’s character. I love the guy more and more. How does that one saying go? If you truly love someone, let them go. And if it’s meant to be, they’ll come back to you…something like that. Well, sayings or not, getting together with Bill or not, this chapter was B-E-Autiful.

Again, Tommy-boy, I am sensing hesitance but I may just be reading into this a bit too much because of my favoritism. You hear what you wanna hear, right. I mean, read…see? Ahem, moving on… I mean, he kinda freaked when hearing Olivia was in labor, which is a normal reaction I suppose, but he didn’t even try to get the phone away from Bill! He let his brother take the call just like so much of what he should take responsibly of…for lately.

Again, loves and much much muchas gracias chica! *more hugs* xDD

Tell your sis I will try my best to get the next Cat Killer chappy out soon. It’s all outlined, I just need to finish typing it up.

Signed,
The girl who refers to but hasn’t actually had a poptart in years. lol

Author's Response: I'm SO glad you liked this chapter. I love my chocolate cake, thanks :D Happy Birthday again! :-* rnrnAnd it's not being biased, you're right, Tom was acting a little flaky. But it's for a reasonnnn :DrnrnAnd she said okay, really excitedly, then bounced up and down and left...She's a weird one.rnrnLove, the girl who is eating a poptart (brown cinnamon sugar) at this exact moment. :P

Another amazing chapter :) plz update soon!!

Author's Response: Thank you! <3

i lovee this storyy soo much! keep writingg (:

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm working on the next chapter right now :D

Feel free to use anything you like, I'd be honored ;)

Douche-Tom isn't a bad thing. But that does make him a bad boy, someone should teach him a lesson…On second thought, maybe not. He’d prolly like that. Bitch slap on the forehead should do the trick just fine.

I actually like his character especially after this chapter. I mean, sure he’s an ass for cheating on her…and basically abandoning her for the past eight months but he isn’t just a Douchy Mc Bitch Pants or whatever. He's an insecure idiot too. And he’s got a soft side with the tears and the admitting his love. And even though I am shipping for Billy-boy, I’m sure whichever twin Olivia does eventually stay/get together with, I’ll love this story all the same.

Plus there’s also that possibility of a sequel, no? (insert excited Bill-like hand clap here)

I’m glad you like my reviews, makes me feel all special xD Oh! Speaking of which, it’s my eighteenth birthday is tomorrow. And it would be amazetacular (it means amazing and spectacular. I've gotten use to making up words all the time. People tend to look at me like "wtf" for them too. Psh, they're just jealous that can't make up these awesome words...and I'm rambling, lol, sorry.) if you could post the next chappy as my b-day present. I’d totes love you forever. No pressure though.

I’ll give you birthday cake if you do it (insert eyebrow wiggling)

CJ

Author's Response: Well, first, seeing as it's 'tomorrow', Happy Birthday! -hugs- And I'm going to try like HELL to get this chapter up today. And there IS going to be a sequel- I think I put it in another chapter end note, but I probably didn't -facepalm- so, here's the deal: I was going to do MAYBE another two or three chapters, and then the sequel, which if you watch the show, is called Teen Mom, and basically goes through the woes of Olivia being a teen mother :D I'm so glad you like this story, and Oh, my sister is leaning over my shoulder and she wants me to ask you to please update Cat Killer...she likes that story haha.rnrnHappy Birthday again!! xx

siobhan, lucy, aine, niamh, stephenie, kimberly, chloe, emer, Sinead, Kyra.

Liam, Andrew, Jack, Sean, Aaron , Aedin..

haha I'm guessing you already have the name picked, but they are just a few suggestions. Some are Irish if your wondering why they look hard to pronounce.

Author's Response: I <3 irish names. Siobhan and Sinead are my favorites <3 Thank you for suggesting them!

I have only read up to this chapter, but so far I LOVE IT!! I will be reading the rest later, too. My mom had me at 17, too, so this story I can relate to and so can my sister, who is pregnant at 17. I love this and I am so glad she is keeping it! :D Amazing!

Author's Response: Thank you! And it's refreshing to find something you can relate to so easily, right? And I've come to realize that when someone comes from a mother who's had you at a young age, that person is so much more likelier to have a teen pregnancy too. Fun fact for the day. Thank you for reviewing!

update soon! :D

Author's Response: Will do :)

The shit has hit the fan.

Everybody DUCK!

Ok, so Tom is still a douche. Sure, he does have his reasons and I get why he’s acted the way he has. It is understandable that he’s terrified of the thought of becoming his father but that doesn’t make it any better. It’s no excuse for his actions. Just because his dad left that doesn’t mean he’s going to do it too. Tom is his own person. He makes his own decisions, no one else can do it for him.

So I say go on Billy-boy, give that forehead a real good bitch slappin’. Make it hard, quick, and painful. You know what? Maybe even record it and play it back in slow motion. That would be awesome!

For eight months, EIGHT MONTHS, Bill has been there for Olivia, supporting her, picking up the pieces. Meanwhile, his bro is off playing doctor and screwing around with other girls. And Livie just takes him back at the drop of a hat. What is that?! Don’t get me wrong, I understand that she wants him to be in the baby’s life and you never forget your first love. But after all the shit he put her through…man, that really grinds my gears. In a twisted kinda good way and, yes, that is my form of a compliment.

I don’t know what to think about the tour. If it does happen, major relationship strains would prolly follow suit. Bill and Tom, cramped in a bus for two months. It’s not like they can avoid each other. Well, they could try, but I doubt that’d work out too well. And then, Livie is stuck back home, preggers and about to pop like a poptart.

You need to update like now, chika. I am THIS close to spazzing out here. So next chappy, pweez? x3

Author's Response: I know, and I'm sorry. I'm making Tom seem like such an asshole, aren't I? *sigh* rnrnAnd would you actually mind if I did put that in there? Forehead meet fist kinda thing? Thinking about doing it, actually...rnrnThat's what Olivia's problem- she can't forget her first love. She doesn't want to, she's afraid. She doesn't want to be alone, and she thinks that she's only been loved by Tom, he's going to be the only one who will ever love her.rnrnI think it's funny that you all are thinking so much about the tour, because I haven't, even though I already know how it's going to go. I hope you're not disappointed with the way I turn it out. Pop like a pop-tart. I read that part in school and snorted so loudly, the teacher stopped teaching for a moment. So I thank you.rnrnCan I just say that I love reading your reviews? They make me smile and I really do take everything you say to heart and try to run with it. It's great inspiration and I really am thankful for everything you suggest. :)

I love it! I have to admit I'm very much cheering for Bill. I was actually yelling at Livie when she was taking Tom back, can't wait to read the next!

Author's Response: Keep cheering for him! And thanks for reviewing!