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Reviewer: m kaulitz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/27/07 01:49 pm Title: Chapter 1

awwww how cute

you're a good wrighter

Reviewer: TH4everbaby Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/26/07 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 1

o0o0o sexy make a sequel

Reviewer: kaytrubie Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/07 07:45 am Title: Chapter 1

the idea was (if its how you want to put it) great, but it went WAY WAY WAY too fast.

and if someone came 9 times they would end up in hospital.

and yeah, it was ok.

Reviewer: Silvia Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/07 05:16 am Title: Chapter 1

Well, in my opinion, all the story want too fast.. oh, maybe you should work more on the punctuation =P
But it was ok.. =)

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