Date: 03/13/10 06:06 pm Title: Death destroys a man: the idea of Death saves him
Pleasepleasepleaseplease post soon.
Because as much as I love things that make me go "wtf", I'm like... GAH!
This is such a good story ^-^
Like... the sushi that they make with the potatoes instead of seaweed. That kind of good.
I'm hooked.
And now I want more xD
Five stars.
Author's Response: XD you're cool. I like you
Date: 03/13/10 03:02 pm Title: Death destroys a man: the idea of Death saves him
I'm indeed a little bit confused after reading this chapter. I'm looking forward to some explanations,but loved this chapter nonetheless!
Author's Response: thank you. they'll come as soon as I can get my ideas in an organized form, but that won't take long
Date: 03/13/10 02:34 pm Title: Death destroys a man: the idea of Death saves him
Yeah wtf! This was good but did they use protection?! Im so confused. Bill is with Gustav but likes Tom? I cant wait until the next chapter!
Author's Response: yeah, they did. Bill, Tom, Gusti and definately I wouldn't have it any other way.rnHe doesn't like Tom...I mean he likes Tom, but not LIKE like...hard to explain. Wait for the next chapter and it will be easier to understand
Date: 03/13/10 02:31 pm Title: Death destroys a man: the idea of Death saves him
r bill & tom together or was that a one time thing???
Author's Response: not together, but still not sure if it will be a one time thing or if it will happen again.
Date: 03/13/10 02:30 pm Title: Death destroys a man: the idea of Death saves him
WTF? Gustav knew that bill was going to sleep with tom????? WTF I'm so confused now
Author's Response: oh, if i had a dollar for every wtf i got out of this chapter I would donate a shitload of cash to the site...
Date: 03/13/10 02:29 pm Title: Death destroys a man: the idea of Death saves him
here is your expected wtf: WTF? :p
I really love your story ^^ but now i'm confused to death :p But I still love what is does to me :p LOL
xx
Author's Response: i'll deconfuse you as soon as i can, dear. It's all quite understandable
Date: 03/10/10 06:56 pm Title: A virus in invisible to the eye
O-oh! That's bold move, Bill!
Still stuck in the mddle, poor Tom. It's like a flame waiting to burst into a full fire. I see situation which can't go on forever and now we are just waiting for the next move. I somehow feel sorry for Gustav too. iT looks like he is trying to hold on Bill, but Bill is slowly slipping away between his fingers to unreachable. Should I feel good, should I feel bad? I don't really know...
Author's Response: You should feel good, because ultimately what Bill does is what he needs to get over his anger with Gustav and be able to have a decent life with him again. Tom, sadly, I see no way of full emotional recovery for him.
Date: 03/10/10 06:46 pm Title: Off with his health!
Finally back from my "Humanoid tour" and time to catch up all the fics. You chapter end notes kind of distacted me, but I think it was in a good way. The book (and the idsea behind it) sounds interesting and that skill, that listening and seeing beyond the obvious is a challenge I want to meet over and over again in life, because I'm far from perfect in it.
Anyway, the chapter... I can somehow relate to Bill. I've been in situation reminding of that and even if the solutions sound easy, they rarely are. Needs are rarely simple and the way they will be fulfilled, sometimes confusing and "wrong". That's why I try to avoid using term wrong. Wrong is very often dependent on your point of view. I wonder if Tom's character is showing some kind of... humanly weakness at some point. Anger, I may say.
However the describtion of communication here was beautiful and simple, but at the same time saying so much. Talented way to write.
Author's Response: Thank you So much for the review. Really, you don't know how much it means to mernAnd damn you for going to see them :P
Date: 03/10/10 02:57 pm Title: A virus in invisible to the eye
Oh My gosh! I can't wait to see what happens next, the path of this story is very interesting.
Author's Response: thank you for liking it :)rnI'll update in the weekend i think
Date: 03/08/10 12:25 pm Title: A virus in invisible to the eye
I just started to read/follow this story and I love it so much.
Author's Response: thank you very much :) I'm glad you enjoy it
Date: 03/08/10 10:32 am Title: A virus in invisible to the eye
More! I'm in love with this story! I cant believe Bill but Im also smiling like a mad person here in the school Library!
Author's Response: lol. well I'd want to see your face when you read the next one. I'd want to see everybody's face when they read the next one, really
Date: 03/08/10 05:47 am Title: A virus in invisible to the eye
The part of Georg in the hospital scared me at first.
Gustav asking Tom to take Bill home was a surprise to me. I think Gustav has a feeling of what is going on.
The very last part where Bill asks for a box of condoms, I was shocked and Tom's reaction made me laugh.
I am looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: you kinda will found out more in the next chapter about why Gustav did what he did.
Date: 03/08/10 03:49 am Title: A virus in invisible to the eye
oh my goodness!! thanks for the update, i can't wait for the next one!!
Author's Response: :D
Date: 03/07/10 10:30 pm Title: Off with his health!
Your use of dialogue was intriguing there were some good lines in there. Also, I like your take on the psychology behind true communication and both the simplicity/complexity of it.
Author's Response: thank you very much :)
Date: 03/07/10 05:19 pm Title: A virus in invisible to the eye
Poor Georg! That last bit cracked me up :) Can't wait till the next chapter!
Author's Response: I'd say more along the lines of poor Gustav. The guy freaked out more than Georg ever did
Date: 03/07/10 03:54 pm Title: A virus in invisible to the eye
Well, I can't hardly blame Tom for choking on air, I wasn't expecting that either, or Gustav asking him to take Bill home. O_o Surprising developments indeed. I'm really enjoying this story so much, sorry I didn't review the last chapter, I wanted to finish reading both before I get back to my thesis corrections. :)
Author's Response: no problems whatsoever dear :) rnYeah, Gustav's being a bit too... well, I lack a word so you'll have to see for yourself in the next chapter. Gustav's picking up hints, you know. He's not stupid, nor is he afraid in the way one would be under these circumstances.
Date: 03/06/10 03:03 am Title: Off with his health!
I took a course in non-violent communication and found it very interesting. i have not read that book though, thanks for the recommendation. =)
Author's Response: i am here to spread the word. That book could save lives, literally.
Date: 03/06/10 02:59 am Title: Couldn't put healthy cells back together again
oh geez, tom's story is absolutely awful.
Author's Response: i know...
Date: 03/06/10 02:01 am Title: Off with his health!
Wow, that's amazing that you can speak so many languages!
I really love how you're evolving Bill and Tom's relationship slowly, while not demonizing Gustav or his relationship with Bill.
Author's Response: ::blink:: lol at your first sentence.rnWell, Gustav's the real deal, Tom's just someone who is in Bill's life for a short(but intense)period of time. When Tom will be gone (not dead, just out of Bill's life) Gustav will still be there
Date: 03/05/10 08:06 pm Title: ...until it's as plain as the virus in your blood
:x i didn't see that coming so soon...
Author's Response: soon in the story, you mean? cause timeframe wise a fair amount of time passed. I'm not writing the whole story, so to speak, just fractions of what's important to them in getting out of the shithole they're all in right now.