Date: 02/26/10 06:28 pm Title: This little piggy went to the hospital...
I loved this chapter. You make the characters very realistic and I just love how sweet Tom and Bill are together.
Author's Response: thank you very much. They are fluffy aren't they? X3
Date: 02/26/10 06:28 pm Title: This little piggy went to the hospital...
Who said "Forgive me?" It was a bit unclear there at the end. I don't think Bill needed to apologize in case it's him. And yeah, I'm a bit angry at Gustav right now. Two weeks is a long time. Looking forward to more. :)
Author's Response: I wanted it to be unclear, like the evil mastermind that i am XD. But I think of it as being Gustav.
Date: 02/21/10 10:56 pm Title: Baa, baa, white cell count
Really love the last part between Bill and Tom. With the last bit I can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: i'll update asap. school's started, so that'll probably mean tomorrow or something like that
Date: 02/21/10 05:18 pm Title: Baa, baa, white cell count
yikes.
Author's Response: Ginkeys!
Date: 02/21/10 05:11 pm Title: Twinkle twinkle EKG
haha! *on your chapter end Notes*
Author's Response: XP
Date: 02/21/10 04:56 pm Title: AZTD-EFG-HIJK-LMNOP
ohmygoodness.
Author's Response: indeed
Date: 02/21/10 04:43 pm Title: Once upon a CD4+
yay! :D
Author's Response: YAY!
Date: 02/21/10 04:40 pm Title: Baa, baa, white cell count
Sooooo, Gustav is with Georg? Why? And how he is going to react on a fact that Tom is spending time with Bill? Interesting... Btw, thanks for clearing up some backgrounds there. I'm still hoping to find out how Tom got it :). I don't know, why I'm so obsesed of it here since it's not important for the storyline (I think).
What goes around, comes around, I guess.
Author's Response: you'll find out, don't worry. All in due time, the story's got a long way to go still
Date: 02/20/10 10:46 pm Title: Baa, baa, white cell count
So Georg's helping Gustav hide huh? I guess Gustav feels really ashamed for hurting Bill.
Author's Response: he does. and at a loss regarding what to do next
Date: 02/20/10 06:44 pm Title: Baa, baa, white cell count
Whoa so Gustav is staying with Georg? I can't wait to find out what is going on, why did Gustav just leave Bill and is at Georg's? Does Gustav know Tom? So many questions that I can't wait to find out the answer to.
I really liked that Bill let Tom walk him home and they got to know each other a bit.
Author's Response: Yeah, Gusti's an idiot sometimes. Hope he'll whip himself into shape, Bill's too good of a catch to let him slip between your fingers.
Date: 02/20/10 04:26 pm Title: Baa, baa, white cell count
Oooh, interesting development. So now Gustav knows, I suppose Georg told him to elicit some kind of reaction from him?
I loved that Bill gave Tom a chance and invited him over for the next day. Looking forward to finding out how it will play out. :)
Author's Response: you supposed right. The man's nice but he needs a push every now and then just to react at the right time.
Date: 02/18/10 10:10 pm Title: Twinkle twinkle EKG
I'm loveing this story! I keep trying to figure out where its going but there are so many possabilities!
Author's Response: it's going in a good place, then a bad place, then a dangerous place, then a good place again XD
Date: 02/18/10 08:54 pm Title: AZTD-EFG-HIJK-LMNOP
Was Bill accusing Tom of being promiscuous and asking if that's how he got HIV?
Author's Response: yes, he was.
Date: 02/18/10 06:29 pm Title: Once upon a CD4+
Seriously this is one of the most natural and "real" feeling story i've read...keep it up :)
Author's Response: thank you very much :)
Date: 02/18/10 04:47 pm Title: Twinkle twinkle EKG
Woot! Houston, we got progress! ^^
Author's Response: lol. nice way of putting it.
Date: 02/18/10 04:23 pm Title: Twinkle twinkle EKG
Oh, we've all been there, the obsession I mean :D.
So nice to see Bill realising how much of a fool he has been. Tom didn't needed to be treated like that in a first place. Interesting how you create an actual love story (?) with this all hiv/AIDS-thing as only a background. It would be easy to concentrate on that, but you seem to take it into another direction. I like it even if I'm also very curious to read the way write their illness. Also you write it very natural, realistic way, which is nice. May I ask if you have any deeper knowledge of the disease, because you seem to know about it?
And hey, where's Gustav?
Author's Response: yes, love story. Just what I read from books, brochures and what my 7 or so med school friends have taught me. And Gustav'll come in it in about ummmm...2-3 chapters.
Date: 02/18/10 04:22 pm Title: Twinkle twinkle EKG
LOL, I don't blame you on the TH obsession, my daughters and I are quite obsessed ourselves. ;)
And yay, some progress was made by Tom! It was nice finding out a little more about the two of them. I wonder where Gustav is though. I'm looking forward to more!
Author's Response: he'll pop his pretty little head up soon enough, cause I love him too much not to :P.
Date: 02/17/10 08:10 pm Title: AZTD-EFG-HIJK-LMNOP
I love the persona's you give the boys. Very good characterization, I love it already!
Author's Response: thaks you :)
Date: 02/17/10 10:14 am Title: AZTD-EFG-HIJK-LMNOP
I am very intrigued by this story! I can't really tell what it is about yours, but they always leave me thinking. ;-)
I can never forget the characters or their stories once I'm done.
Great job, writer!
Author's Response: thank you very much :) I'm glad you like them
Date: 02/17/10 08:45 am Title: AZTD-EFG-HIJK-LMNOP
Very intriguing and well written story! I love the way you describe what they're both going through. Definitely will be looking forward to more!
Author's Response: thank you very much