Date: 04/11/15 06:35 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh wow... that was too f*ing adorable. I swear, that took me by surprise, cuz I was starting to wonder wtf it was so cheesy.... but then Tom......... AWWWWWWWWWWW. So yeah, this wasn't the best writing in the world, but it was so freaking adorable. Cute. :)
Date: 05/25/11 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
Omg .... I wanted to cry :')
But like happy cry, that was really nice! No, more than nice ... it was splendidly beautiful! <3
Author's Response: Thank yournit means alot
Date: 10/29/10 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
*sniffles* that was just so sweet
Date: 07/14/10 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
awww its so sweet! i love the card!
Date: 07/13/10 04:44 am Title: Chapter 1
That was very fluffy. I recommend a different beta reader though.
Date: 07/02/10 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aww, this is so sweet :))
Date: 06/27/10 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
omfg, that totally touched me. I have got tears in my eyes. BEAUTIFULLY written
Author's Response: aww thanksrndid you read the sequel
Date: 06/23/10 04:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
sweet and short. i like it!!! sequel, yes?
--jlly
Date: 05/29/10 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was sweet :) Awwww. I can see Tom being that kind of romantic! Good job girl!!
Date: 05/28/10 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awwwwwwww soo cute!
Really awesome :3
xoxo
Date: 05/15/10 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
OH MY GOD!!!! SUCH A SWEET PROPOSAL! THE SWEETEST EVER (right after Chris's proposal to me. ^^) Oh this made me so warm inside, my heart is beating so fast! So cute and heart-warming! Would you please do a sequel? Proposals are sweet but weddings are sweeter :D
Date: 04/12/10 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
awwww I feel all warm and fluffy! Sieren it's so cute! I was not expecting that ending at all...it was like ninja-fluff! awesome job!
Author's Response: lol thanksrn
Date: 02/17/10 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
awh thats so cute :D
Date: 02/16/10 08:05 am Title: Chapter 1
um...this was really cute, but i'm a bit confused. if they're brothers how exactly are they going to get married? lol. i know as a fiction it doesnt necessarily have to make sence, and i do think it was really cute, but just...yeah.
Author's Response: lolrnja, its fanfiction, it wont be legal but ja, they will get married...sort of
Date: 02/15/10 02:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awwwwwww. That was so adorable! You should do a sequel of the wedding!
:D
Author's Response: Good idearnthanks
Date: 02/15/10 02:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
aww that was so cute :) x
Date: 02/14/10 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yes-i'm reading your other one-anxiously waiting for the update!!!
Author's Response: did you read the update
Date: 02/14/10 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awe i love it! its goin on my favs!
Author's Response: aww thanks
Date: 02/14/10 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awww-how adorably sweet and romantic!
A sweet treat for the reader's~thank you!
Author's Response: awww, thank yourndid you read my other one? Its called "We Love Each Other"
