Date: 12/18/10 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 9: September 29 to November 6
This story was just horrible. Too real, I mean. You write really well English, I didn't notice any mistakes at all, really. :D
Date: 12/12/10 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 9: September 29 to November 6
Woah, just woah!
This story was really intense. I read this in one go, and it made me feel so many things. I felt Tom's pain, Bill's distress, and I kinda felt hatred towards Georg as well.
I think I need a happy story now to recover.
You did a great job.
I can't believe you were able to write something so emotionally charged at the age of 14, and in a language that isn't your native no less.
This story truly amazed me. Thanks for putting all your effort and time in this, it must've been hard.
Thank you.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! This comment was really heartwarming. This was the very first story I wrote completely in English, and I'm really proud to see that people like it! :)
Date: 10/10/10 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 9: September 29 to November 6
Thank you so much for such ending, it feels so right!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading it till the end. :)
Date: 09/28/10 08:43 am Title: Chapter 9: September 29 to November 6
Möchten Sie mehr über das Geschehen wissen.
Wenn mein Deutsch ist ein bisschen schlecht, so dass Sie zu mir in Englisch, Schwedisch, Norwegisch, Dänisch zu schreiben.
Date: 08/15/10 10:42 am Title: Chapter 9: September 29 to November 6
I'm speechless. I read this all in one sitting, because it's one of those things you can't put down and continue later. This had me wondering what would happen next, you know?
I also really loved the form of writing you used, it's different.
I think, the only thing, I'd have wanted to see more/read more about the "aftermath" of it all.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review, the kind words, and for reading it at all. And yes, I know I could've had another chapter, or even another story, about the aftermath of it all, but I felt so done with the plot, that I was afraid I would ruin anything.
Date: 07/05/10 02:13 am Title: Chapter 9: September 29 to November 6
dear, you write in English much better than a lot of American teens.
this was an amazing story.
so creepy-you're good at that, making creepy stories that you just can't stop reading x]
I enjoyed it ^_^
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm very insecure when it comes to my English, so writing and putting up this story was quite a big step for me to take. I'm very glad you liked it. Seems like creepy is the only thing that works for me these days, so I'm glad you enjoy the read. Thank you for reading and reviewing. :D
Date: 05/01/10 01:47 am Title: Chapter 9: September 29 to November 6
That was great for a first whole story in English! I could tell you probably weren't a native speaker, but only once in awhile and your writing was pretty clear. I'd say you have a good handle on it and you should definitely write more. You've got some good ideas for fics, so keep working on them! :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I guess the best way of getting better at a language, is to use it, which I never do, since we're all communicating in the same language where I'm from. Thanks again for reviewing!
Date: 04/30/10 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 9: September 29 to November 6
It was very good.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. :)
Date: 04/29/10 09:35 pm Title: Chapter 9: September 29 to November 6
It was really, really good! =]
Author's Response: Thank you very much! :)
Date: 04/29/10 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 1: September 23
is there any chance you write a sequel? i meaan it was a great story, u write beautifuullly, can't believe ur only 14 and not english native speaking. it would e interessting to read about how tom will heal , and everythng, even few chapters...
Author's Response: The chances are very slim. I've on purpose made it possible, because entering the world after five months can't be easy. But I doubt it, because I'm working on so much already.
Date: 04/29/10 08:10 pm Title: Chapter 9: September 29 to November 6
That was great.
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 04/29/10 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 9: September 29 to November 6
so dad thats its over. this is the first story i ever read on this site :( i loved it though
Author's Response: I'm really glad this is the first story you read on here. And that you liked it. But you know what they say, nothing lasts forever.
Date: 04/18/10 11:53 am Title: Chapter 8: September 29
I realy love your fic! Love the way you write from both Tom and Georgs perspective, make their actions logical from their on point of wiev.
Author's Response: Thank you very much, for your words, for reviewing and for reading. (:
Date: 04/17/10 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 8: September 29
Finally! Tom does something! Not much, but it's a start at least.
Author's Response: I don't even think he quite understands just how much he might have done right now.
Date: 04/17/10 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 8: September 29
Argh, Tom! skjdvndbsjvds
I'm like, totally incoherent.
But yay! Update! And I'm sorry your computer was the flu :) Mine has AIDS, I'm pretty sure, if that makes you feel any better XD
I'm so utterly excited and anxious for the next chapter.... it's so suspenseful! Gah, the wait will be torture, but worth it :)
Author's Response: Well, I'm lucky to have three computers to choose from, and still my favourite for writing had to be the one to get the flu! Oh, well. I'm making the wait as short as possible. (:
Date: 04/17/10 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 8: September 29
Just curious...how much longer is this going to go on for? How long before Bill gets a clue sa to where Tom is and with who?
Author's Response: Let's just say we're moving towards the end now. I think there's one chapter left, and an epilogue.
Date: 03/30/10 03:33 am Title: Chapter 7: September 28
Yep, definitely answered my questions. :D Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 03/29/10 06:44 am Title: Chapter 7: September 28
I actually started shaking with giggles I was so excited this was updated. Amazing as always, and good luck writing alone now! This was the perfect timing too, I just finished my essay and wanted a treat! Treat achieved with this bad boy!
Author's Response: Aww, I'm very glad to hear so. Thank you very much for the review. :)
Date: 03/28/10 10:56 pm Title: Chapter 7: September 28
I wanna kill Georg...well, maybe not kill, maim possibly...can I? Oh please, please? Anyways, update soon please.
Author's Response: Any time! Or, well... Wait a little. Hopefully, He'll get what he deserves. And I'm really sorry the update has taken me so long.
Date: 03/28/10 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 7: September 28
Awh poor Bill.
Great chapter, this is my new fav story.
Author's Response: Aww, that really makes me happy!