Date: 02/28/10 01:31 am Title: "...that you're making me feel tonight"
"Did I find your special place?"
"Oh god, don't call it that," Bill whined.
"Love button?" Tom suggested.
"I will hit you, Tom Kaulitz," Bill threatened. "Whether you're in me or not."
lmao..that had me rolling
"So what's the verdict?" Tom wanted to know, and almost held his breath.
Bill's grin was all sharp mischief, but his eyes were wondering and soft. "You love me an awful lot," he replied.
"With everything I am," Tom replied, stroking Bill's cooling flesh and knowing he could always, always count on the same from Bill.
aww!!
totally loved the hot tub scene
Author's Response: They do that even in the middle of intimacy, I love them so much. ;) Thank you! And so glad you enjoyed that hot tub scene. ;D
Date: 02/28/10 12:41 am Title: "...that you're making me feel tonight"
I have a weakness for shower scenes in the first place, but...Tom cleaned Bill's ass...
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/ Pretty much desribes my brain from that point on. This was amazing...perfect... Hot and sexy but full of pure love and passion. You did a fantastic job, love. They sooo deserved that. ;)
Author's Response: He did, he cleaned him good. ;D ♥ ♥ ♥
...It's weirdly sexy, huh? Thank you! I'm so incredibly pleased that you found it to be all of those things...and they very much deserved it.
Date: 02/28/10 12:14 am Title: "...that you're making me feel tonight"
aw, perfect, believable first time :)
Author's Response: I'm so glad. ♥ Thank you!
Date: 02/28/10 12:14 am Title: "...that you're making me feel tonight"
What a perfect first time for the twins! You really showed just how much they loved each other, as well as kept everything very real. I love how you had them use a condom until getting tested, by the way. It not only shows just how concerned Tom is for Bill's safety, but it's also just a smart thing to do. I'm going to be sad to see this end! ;__;
Author's Response: I'm so glad you thought it was perfect. ♥ They definitely do; there's always, always love. And Tom is very committed to keeping Bill safe - but as we can see in "now," they definitely get past the point of using condoms. ;) I was sad to see it end too...thanks for your review!
Date: 02/27/10 10:57 pm Title: "...that you're making me feel tonight"
awwwwwwwwww so cute :)
Author's Response: Yaaay thank you. :D
Date: 02/27/10 07:21 pm Title: "...that you're making me feel tonight"
Alright, so i usually read a HORRIBLE lot and never comment, which is selfish, i know, but you totally got me with that "whipped cream on your pie" thing...i was like "..WTF?! ok, this deserves a comment", lol, you're cracked D___D haha, in a good way XD i like this story, it's really...graphic and hysterical. Ok, seriously, it's very cute and also somewhat human-feelings-realistic. Humbly waiting for the next chap, muuah! *heart*
Author's Response: I'm very glad you commented on my fic, it's quite an honor! ...I do like to encourage people to review with funny and out-there things, now and then. ;) See, it worked!
Glad you enjoyed the story, and thank you!
Date: 02/27/10 06:58 pm Title: "...that you're making me feel tonight"
that was hot and sweet...their first time..i'm happy XD
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it, thank you so much. ♥ It makes me happy that it made you happy!
Date: 02/27/10 06:55 pm Title: "...that you're making me feel tonight"
I don't know how I got 3 chapters behind, but I just caught up and I've got the biggest smile on my face :) You really are an amazing writer! There were so many good one-liners and I was laughing out loud the whole time I was reading. Plus the way you describe their bond is just perfect. I don't want this to end
Author's Response: I'm glad you caught up and enjoyed them! ♥ It is utterly pleasing to know that it put a big smile on your face. Thank you so much, you're too good to me. ♥ I just love to write them with bits of humor mixed in with the bittersweet. Thanks for your review...I think I didn't want to end it, either.
Date: 02/27/10 06:50 pm Title: "...that you're making me feel tonight"
Yayy! I really love long chapters ! You're right, they earned it !
This was sexy and very cute ! I like that their first didn't go perfectly at first, seems much more realistic!
I think this line was totally adorable : `` He'd woken that morning with Bill drooling on his shoulder, sure that he'd never been happier in his life.``
Author's Response: They definitely earned it. ;) Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed! And very pleased that it was sexy and cute and realistic. Thanks for your review! (I picture Tom as pretty much charmed by EVERYTHING that Bill does.)
Date: 02/27/10 04:42 pm Title: "simple and clean is the way..."
:) aww tomi and billa
Author's Response: Woohoo, Tom and Bill. ;D Thanks!
Date: 02/27/10 04:08 pm Title: "simple and clean is the way..."
Though I love everything you write, this is my favorite kind of story. Non-AU, set in the now, as it were. I love when Tom is like this, so in tune and in love with Bill. Sweet and romantic in private. keep up the great work, as always!! =)
Author's Response: Non-AU is good, too. I used to be a bit weirded out when writing it, but I think I've found my own take on them and I feel good about it. I'm really pleased you think they're sweet and romantic and in tune - thank you so much! :D Next chapter is up.
Date: 02/27/10 09:16 am Title: "simple and clean is the way..."
Awesome. Cant wait for next chappie :*
Author's Response: It is up, and I really really hope you enjoy! ♥ Thanks.
Date: 02/26/10 08:04 am Title: "simple and clean is the way..."
Aww. Angst+fluff=perfection!
Author's Response: So very pleased you think so - thank you!
Date: 02/26/10 06:37 am Title: "simple and clean is the way..."
Aw, angst...it makes me sad to think about them having such serious conversations during all their vacation frolicking.
Author's Response: I was kind of surprised it crept into my fic! It was intended to be unadulterated fluff with a dash of sex, for this chapter. *shakes head* Thanks for reading, next chapter is up. :D
Date: 02/26/10 06:21 am Title: "regardless of warnings..."
god. this is so good. everything you post just tops whatever you posted last. i love the symmetry of the endings. though i loved the part in the middle about maybe bill will want a house full of dogs. =)
Author's Response: Aw, thank you. ♥ That's such a sweet thing to say, I really appreciate it. Glad you liked the endings and definitely, they have a house full of dogs. Sweet boys.
Date: 02/26/10 04:50 am Title: "simple and clean is the way..."
♥ ♥
Author's Response: Thank you. ;)
Date: 02/26/10 03:21 am Title: "simple and clean is the way..."
FLUFFFF. Tow is terribly cute. And Biu is terribly bossy. I think in RL Bill would be terrified of parachuting. I still remember that episode where he whined about the huge truck they had to stand on to get to the EMA's, "I kept thinking I'd fall & smash my face!" LOL so cute. Methinks Tom knew how he felt, which is why he grabbed his arm silently...ohh and I was watching the CoC dvd bonus disk, and it was soo adorable how Bill and Tom would always gang up on the G's when it came to competition, like who was better at driving, rock-climbing, paintballing...and after every single activity, Bill would crow that him and Tom were the bestest, and no one could beat the brothers, and if they were racing, him and Tom would be 1rst and 2nd...and then someone told him he got 3rd place and he deflated for a moment, lmao. But then he quickly pulled Tom aside and began whispering frantically in his ear, so.
I dunno, I just found that EXTREMELY amusing and ADORABLE :3 And I like that Bill says that Tom is the shrewdest person he knows. Tom is a wise man, despite his flailing ;)
Author's Response: Very pleased you found it to be overly fluffy. These are truths; Tom IS adorable, and Bill rules all. I do remember Bill saying in an interview that he wanted to go skydiving, but none of the others would go with him, not even Tom. ...Bill and Tom TOTALLY gang up against all comers. ;D And I still have to watch the whole CoC disk! Thanks so much for your review - next chapter is up and I really really hope you like it!
Date: 02/26/10 02:42 am Title: "simple and clean is the way..."
A correction for you. Tom does NOT wear a shower cap. Tom wears a "Doo Rag" over his braids. A doo rag is an ethnic (read:Black people's) head cloth usually made of satin or some non snagging material. Usualy worn by Black guys. It's purpose is to keep your braids/cornrows/brush waves/process/or whatever flat hair style the guy is wearing, to remain flat, frizz free or just keep it in order. It's original use was for guys with brush waves to keep them perfect. It can be worn day or night. It's not water resistant but it does keep cornrows from frizzing so fast too.
Author's Response: I called it a swim cap, initially, because I've worn swim caps that look like that - and no, they're not completely waterproof. I could not bring myself to call it a doo-rag. Thank you for reading!
Date: 02/26/10 02:05 am Title: "simple and clean is the way..."
I love the little ups and downs of their relationship, because it's just more realistic and kinda cute, too. ;) I like the "no-fault list". Darcy and I have one of those... she gets Tom and I get Timo. :P
Anyway! Yay for the next chapter. :D
Author's Response: I'm glad it makes it a bit more realistic - yet also more cute! :D ...For some reason, becki keeps laughing at me when I try to put the Kaulitz twins on my no-fault list. D: It's like she doesn't take me seriously. ;_;
Yay for the next chapter indeed! >:D Thank you so much. ♥
Date: 02/26/10 01:57 am Title: "simple and clean is the way..."
Aw, that last sentence. :/ Probably true. Angst, fluff, it's all good. I'm thinking next chapter is going to be hugely intense. :D
Author's Response: Kind of how I feel it is. Every vacation a bit bittersweet, simply because they know it's not for long. But they enjoy the fame too - at least, Bill certainly does, I think Tom's feelings may be a bit more mixed. Next chapter is up and I hope you enjoy it! *_*