Date: 02/15/10 11:55 pm Title: "...whatever lies beyond this morning..."
I like that you went back in time to let us see the twins when things weren't so good between them. I like how you built a little history between them and reveal it piece by piece.
Also, I hate dialog that tells everything, cause people don't really talk like that. In real life parts of things go unsaid since both parties already know what's going on. You let us (the readers) know the rest with the characters' thoughts. Good job.
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you like it - we're going to get little tastes of it, in between present times.
It's so true! In real life people break off what they're going to say or change their sentence halfway through all the time. I can often hear them in my head pretty clearly, and I'm glad that comes through naturally. Thanks for your review!
Date: 02/15/10 11:40 pm Title: "...whatever lies beyond this morning..."
Very beautiful and funny. I love how you throw comical elements in tense moments. : ]
Author's Response: Life is like that. Sometimes it's either cry or laugh. ;) Or both! Thank you for your review.
Date: 02/15/10 11:33 pm Title: "...whatever lies beyond this morning..."
As much as I love fluff, there's something about angst that I just can't get enough of (probably because I'm a closet masochist). I really like how the angst is there and almost palpable, but isn't overly dramatic or soap opera-esque. It's believable and just addicting...MOAR UPDATES! ;D
Author's Response: Ahh, thank you! I'm so pleased you found it to be the right amount of angst. And if you like that, there's more forthcoming. ;D Fluff and angst mixed in roughly equal parts!
Date: 02/15/10 11:33 pm Title: "...whatever lies beyond this morning..."
Aww. Twangst! If only teenagers would stop being so damn stubborn! And Bill has a point; I mean, Tom will fool around with him and let Bill suck his cock and vice versa, but he's afraid that actual sex will cross the line? Boys are so damn stupid!
Author's Response: THERE'S A LINE. In his head, there is a line, and...apparently actual penetrative sex is the line. >_> I never said boys made sense. Thank you for your review! More happy funtimes will be followed by more twangst. ;)
Date: 02/15/10 11:23 pm Title: "...whatever lies beyond this morning..."
Thank you for the insight to the turmoil both guy's dealt with before getting to where they are. It's sad, but at the same time needed to give the relationship the strength it has now.
Awesome update~thank's
Author's Response: They definitely went through tough times to get to the good ones. ;) Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter!
Date: 02/15/10 11:17 pm Title: "...whatever lies beyond this morning..."
It hurts..
awww so sad.
I love it though :0 great idea :)
Author's Response: I know, and it's gonna get worse before it gets better. :( Thank you for reading!
Date: 02/15/10 03:13 pm Title: "hold me..."
YES yes yes!!! I love this!
The first chapther is amazing, i'm hooked.
If i get to choose, then i want an update every other day ;P
I'm very impatient haha.
Author's Response: Awesome, thank you so much! ♥ I'm really pleased you're hooked - there's lots more to come! Updates will be quick. ;)
Date: 02/15/10 07:51 am Title: "hold me..."
Aw!Another fic from you ^_^
And this first chapter is really sweet already.I was hoping actually that you'd write a maledives-fic.Not kidding :)The pics we have this year are worth two years of twincest pic material XD
Author's Response: Yes indeedy! Been working on this one for a couple of weeks. :) I'm so pleased you hoped to see one of these from me! ♥ Oh man, we got so many gorgeous pics this year, and most importantly, THEY clearly had so much fun.
Date: 02/15/10 01:33 am Title: "hold me..."
This is exceptionally hot. I love the way you describe the beautiful scene.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm very glad you enjoyed it. ♥
Date: 02/15/10 12:40 am Title: "hold me..."
yes Bill, out in the middle on nowhere, you can scream as loud as you want/need to.
if every day isnt an option..then I pick every other day.
Author's Response: OMG yes. :D
I was thinking about every day...will see how quickly I can finish this chapter!
Date: 02/14/10 10:50 pm Title: "hold me..."
Everyother day would be a good schedule and I love this chapter
Author's Response: Sounds good - I'm so happy you liked it, thanks!
Date: 02/14/10 09:37 pm Title: "hold me..."
oh i believe it. yay!
Author's Response: Yes indeed, I'm becoming predictable. ;) Thanks!
Date: 02/14/10 09:07 pm Title: "hold me..."
He sucked Bill's fingers while they fucked...If I wasn't mentally dead before that, I certainly was after. ;) This is magnificent, love.
I vote for every other day. :)
Author's Response: I enjoyed that part, and it was fun and spontaneous. ♥ Glad to render you mentally dead? And every other day sounds pretty good to me.
Date: 02/14/10 07:30 pm Title: "hold me..."
Another fiction from you? What did I do to God to deserve such a treat? =D Nice! I love hot sex under the sun fictions lol I won't be here to see all the updates cause I'll be on TH tour starting from thursday (wel not thursday but I'm leaving home them) so I hope to read the more possible before leaving.
And then I'll know that in evey hotel where I'll have the internet I'll have something to look forward to before going to sleep ;)
Author's Response: I've been working on this for a while and I'm excited to share it! :D Aww, I hope it doesn't leave off on an angsty update before you leave, but damn, I'm so jealous because you get to see TH!! I really wish I could see the concert in Paris. *_* Have fun!
Date: 02/14/10 07:16 pm Title: "hold me..."
okay, fuck real life I read it anyway. So hot & so good. *_*
Author's Response: OMG I hope you didn't ditch anything. o_o I'm so happy you liked it though!
Date: 02/14/10 07:07 pm Title: "hold me..."
OWU@*(@!
I don't have time to read this now but I'm so excited I have tears in my eyes. TEARS.
;_;
*bookmarks for later*
Author's Response: *snerk* I have great timing, right? I'm just, I'm overwhelmed you've got tears in your eyes. *_*
Date: 02/14/10 06:45 pm Title: "hold me..."
"he can never feel anything but pleased when Tom bangs him that good."
^.^ Yes, please.
This is really nice, and I can't wait for more. I guess hourly updates are out of the question? ;)
Every couple of days would be nice. xoxo
Author's Response: ;D But of course.
Thank you! Ahaha, alas, hourly updates are not in the cards but I'm pleased that you want them! ;) I think I can manage every other day.
Date: 02/14/10 06:29 pm Title: "hold me..."
yaaay. awesome. loved it. :D
Author's Response: Hurrah, thank you! :)
Date: 02/14/10 06:18 pm Title: "hold me..."
I love this
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 02/14/10 05:58 pm Title: "hold me..."
Every other day. Because "immediately" is not an option :(
I'm in a hurry to get dressed and leave somewhere but THIS IS AWETHUM!!!
Author's Response: ;) Very sweet. I'm excited you liked it so much, thank you!