Date: 02/17/10 09:27 pm Title: "...is a little later on"
Really, the only time I can read a top!Bill is when you write it! Your sex scenes are so steamy and sensual, I can't help but be mesmerized and drool all over. Loved this chapter!
Author's Response: That is such a lovely compliment, thank you! I'm very glad you'll read my top!Bill. (Back to Bill trying to get Tom in him in the next chapter. ^_-) Thanks for your review!
Date: 02/17/10 02:08 am Title: "...whatever lies beyond this morning..."
Mmmm, the angst. Twin-angst from you is always of the really good delicious kind, and I can't wait to see how they get from here to a better place. b29;
Author's Response: Very much with the twin-angst! Thank you. I don't do it often, at least not with the non-au stuff, but this story demanded it. ;_; Thanks for your review, next chapter is up!
Date: 02/17/10 12:53 am Title: "...whatever lies beyond this morning..."
ouch :( come on tom you know you want to! D:
i'm loving this so far!
Author's Response: Oh, he wants to! He wants to! ...We'll see why he thinks he can't in Friday's update.
Thanks for your review, I'm glad you're loving it!
Date: 02/16/10 10:53 pm Title: "...whatever lies beyond this morning..."
"Giving Tom a scalp wound with a picture frame sounded murderously appealing."
When I'm angry at someone, this is going to be the thought running through my head from now on.:)
I love how you started with 'now' in the first chapter and then went back to the beginning. Very interesting.
Yay for every other day!! Tomorrow can't come soon enough. :)
Author's Response: *snickers* ...Thank you? Glad it was so vivid. It's a bit of an odd story construction, I know, but it's the way it wanted to be written. :) Thanks for your review! Next chapter is up.
Date: 02/16/10 10:24 pm Title: "...whatever lies beyond this morning..."
aaaaw. poor bill D: and poor tom. lol.
loved it though. update soon ^^
Author's Response: Poor both of them! Thank you, the next chapter is up!
Date: 02/16/10 03:55 pm Title: "...whatever lies beyond this morning..."
Oh, this one hurts. *hugs them so hard*
Author's Response: It does, and it's gonna get worse before it gets better. D:
Date: 02/16/10 12:19 pm Title: "...whatever lies beyond this morning..."
"Then" seems to have been quite an angsty place to be. But in all seriousness, what else is there to be expected with such conflicting emotions and a bit of bitterness and confusion and denial. It's nice to have the background of how the twins get to the now part of this story. And I'm sure the fact that in the beginning everything wasn't all hunky-dory is going to make Bill's wish coming true all that much better. :)
" It was so satisfying he thought about opening it for the sole purpose of slamming it again."
Oh Bill. I know that feeling. :D
Author's Response: "Then" was very angsty, poor boys. Difficult times for them, and in "now" they keep dreaming about it, remembering it. Thank you for your review!rn
I think most of us have been there. ;)
Date: 02/16/10 09:29 am Title: "hold me..."
Amazing!
I love that we got a "then"-chapther so soon. I feel sad for Bill though. Can't be easy for Tom either. All the tension between them...
Thanks for the guick update! I'm looking forward to the next one :)
Author's Response: Thank you! Yep, the chapters are alternating. And it's very difficult for each of them; we'll get to see Tom's POV soon. Glad you enjoyed the update, and the next chapter is up - hope you like that too!
Date: 02/16/10 08:58 am Title: "...whatever lies beyond this morning..."
Love it. More soon please (8 :*
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so glad you love it! More is up. :)
Date: 02/16/10 08:55 am Title: "...whatever lies beyond this morning..."
Always interesting to read about their struggle, denial since it's often forgotten in fics. I like to read them hesitating, it makes them feel like human even if it's always painful to read as well. I can't wait to read of how things got from "then" to "now". It makes me happy to know that even after all the struggle and denial there will be happy end :).
Author's Response: These two definitely struggled. Dang, I could've written a SERIES about how they struggled, but I am not good at writing angst, so I didn't want to go there. ...We'll get there, it's a process! ;) Thanks so much for your review.
Date: 02/16/10 07:17 am Title: "...whatever lies beyond this morning..."
Oh God I'm so sad for Bill... =( All this frustration and LOVE in him... Sad chapter
Author's Response: Bill's in a very tough situation, poor boy, but so is Tom! Just wait 'til you see his POV - your heart will break! More is up. ;)
Date: 02/16/10 06:08 am Title: "...whatever lies beyond this morning..."
argh Tom ,u brat
give in cuz Bill needs it
more?
Author's Response: He's got his reasons! :P Thank you, more is posted. :D
Date: 02/16/10 05:39 am Title: "...whatever lies beyond this morning..."
I love this so far.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! ♥
Date: 02/16/10 02:21 am Title: "...whatever lies beyond this morning..."
Ouch. So much hurt and feelings of incompleteness and sorrow and desperation! It's breaking my heart, seeing them like this, trying to resist what is meant to be - but thank goodness I know there'll be a happy end. You write emotions so vividly.
Author's Response: Very much, it's awful for both of them. ;_; I had to keep the angsty chapters short; they were breaking my heart too! Thank you so much for the compliment.
Date: 02/16/10 02:10 am Title: "hold me..."
Whee! I'm so delighted to see a new story from you. And bam! what a start, so sexy and sensual and very, very good :)
Author's Response: I'm so pleased to hear it. :) Thank you! It's fun to start them with a bang and work up to plot. XD Thanks for your review!
Date: 02/16/10 01:47 am Title: "...whatever lies beyond this morning..."
Noo I didnt know that every day was an option, lol, I wouldve opted for that.
I guess every other day isnt AWFUL..but Im an impatient girl. Dang it.
Im really getting into the drama. I wanna know what happens, its so addictive!
Author's Response: *grins* Not every day, sorry. Special post-Valentine's day treat because I was off work. ;) Thank you, though! Glad you're so into it! More is up now, and more to come!
Date: 02/16/10 12:30 am Title: "...whatever lies beyond this morning..."
I feel bad for poor bill ;(
Author's Response: Bill had a really hard time of it. :(
Date: 02/16/10 12:22 am Title: "...whatever lies beyond this morning..."
aww, hugs them both. while Bill is showing the hurt, I bet Tom is hurting just as much and Im sure its hard on him to keep telling Bill no.
Author's Response: Definitely hugs are in order, poor boys. And we're going to get a look at Tom's POV in the next chapter - on Friday! :)
Date: 02/16/10 12:21 am Title: "...whatever lies beyond this morning..."
Omg they were so unhappy! It's sad to see them like that, but at least now they are ok :) Oh, and I think I forgot to say it on the last chap but I really, really like the banner for this story, probably one of my favorite !
Author's Response: Very, very unhappy, and it's gonna get worse before it gets better. ;) That's why it's good to get the glimpses of "now," you know? Jen did a fantastic job on the banner and deserves all the praise!
Date: 02/16/10 12:04 am Title: "...whatever lies beyond this morning..."
D'awww.. I wanted to start this review with one of those little hearts, but alas, I could not. :( This is rather heart-wrenching.. I do believe I've mentioned multiple times how much I enjoy how you write the twins, and this is no exception. Beautifully emotional, and I love the contrast between past and future. :) Just lovely.
Author's Response: You can do it! Not the less than three, but the HTML heart, like so: ♥ Poor boys, they went through hard times before they could find their happiness. It's definitely something I see both of them struggling with - this is only a taste. Thank you, I'm so glad you like the way I write the twins, and I really appreciate you saying so. Thanks for your review!