Date: 11/05/11 08:31 am Title: Chapter 7
Please don't leave this story hanging like this. Keep the chapters coming, I really want to know what happens next! :)
Date: 10/14/11 08:58 am Title: Chapter 1
where are you ? plz update
Date: 08/21/11 02:51 pm Title: Chapter 7
Melissa, I love your little story ^^. It`s so cute and realistic and cute and whoaa. It`s about twincest. Well, they aren`t twins here, but only the through of Bill and Tom doing...stuff, make me so proud that I`m human and know to read. And see.
I have no problem with the normal view. It doesn`t have to be Bill`s *^* as long as it exist
Date: 06/30/11 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 7
awesome story, too bad you haven't update for so long, I don't think you plan on to finish this story?
Date: 06/23/11 09:47 am Title: Chapter 1
I totally LOVED it. Earlier this day, when I were reading this, my internet went gone, and I couldn't find the fanfic. I almost cried because I loved it that much. And you got to know, I usually don't read English fanfics, because I suck in reading, and writing in that language.
But, again, you really got to know that this is the best fanfic I've ever read in my whole entire life.
Write some more, please? (A)
Date: 05/20/11 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 7
Hey I really like this so far!! I can't wait for you to update =)
Date: 05/01/11 12:41 am Title: Chapter 7
i missss this storyy soooo muuuchh *criesss* pleeease updaate! its an excellent storyy! =]
Date: 03/22/11 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 7
dun dun dun!! sexuality problems oooooh boy! very cute. i like it =]
Date: 03/01/11 07:02 am Title: Chapter 7
Really great story!
Date: 02/07/11 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 7
well this is awesome if you dont write moreee i will die plizz write to the end i am sick of what will hapend and tnx if you do it :DDDDDDDDDDDD damn great storyyyy !
Date: 01/03/11 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 7
Amazing story! Keep it coming!
Date: 01/03/11 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 7
Oh my gosh! I love it! It get's so suspenseful in some parts for some reason haha(: It get's better and better during each chapter. I love it! I hope you continue it because it is getting really good so far(:
Date: 12/01/10 08:38 am Title: Chapter 7
I just fell in love with this story and the way you write it. I''m really looking forward next update!
Date: 11/28/10 10:10 am Title: Chapter 7
Love it can't wait for next chapter
Date: 11/25/10 07:53 am Title: Chapter 7
MORE! *twitch* MOOOOOOORRREE!!!
Date: 11/25/10 05:33 am Title: Chapter 7
great story great !! il like it the "pov" so much i want you really to keep writting in the same way
waiting for the next ^^
Date: 11/24/10 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 7
LOVED this chapter! The best thing about this story has got to be how realistic it is! It's not all lovey dovey from the beginning...its like real life! Can't wait for more!
Date: 11/23/10 03:49 pm Title: Chapter 7
Okay, I started reading this today and this is really good! I like the idea in this and I find it good that even when Tom kissed Bill, this is not going straight to the crazy love between these two. Instead Tom is very confused about what is happening and I´m pretty sure that there will be some more awkward or hateful (is that a real word?) situations ; )
Date: 11/23/10 11:42 am Title: Chapter 7
OMG! I LOVE IT SOOOOO MUCH! WRITE BACK QUICKLY!I NEED TO READ MORE OF THIS!
about the pov as well...i think if it switched to toms pov for a little while it would be okay but then it would have to switch back to bills again