Date: 03/18/10 07:09 am Title: Chapter 4
LOVED IT LOVED IT!!! don't keep us waiting for a new update!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! And I'm sorry! I'm feeling a little stuck on what the next chapter is gonna be!
Date: 03/17/10 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 4
wow I really like this story so far!! Updates soon? Please? :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much! And maybe in a few days?
Date: 03/17/10 04:17 pm Title: Chapter 4
aw, great chapter! and as you say, we are getting somewhere! yumm. can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 03/17/10 11:55 am Title: Chapter 4
Uuu.. Bill is planing ;D Continue soon, this story is great :)
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 03/17/10 03:58 am Title: Chapter 4
I still think Tom is a jerk even after this chapter. Hopefully he'll start being nice to Bill and not so much of an ass. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you! ;D
Date: 03/17/10 02:23 am Title: Chapter 4
This story has potential, and I find your use of first person interesting, but I did notice in the first chapter you started in third person, and then switched into first. My only real concern is that you keep the narration consistent. It makes your writing look better. But I do like that your telling it as Bill. Interested for more.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the advice! I really appreciate it :)I will work on making sure the story stays consistent. Thanks again :)
Date: 03/17/10 12:54 am Title: Chapter 4
Aww, Tom was so cute for a few paragraphs there. xD He needs to man up and stop being a dick. I can't wait for Bill to make Tom loooooove him. Please update soon! =D
Author's Response: I'm trying to gradually show that Tom isn't a total dick :P
Date: 03/16/10 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oh i'm really liking this-can't wait for the next chapter. Love when people fight their internal feeling's!
Author's Response: Great to hear that! :)
Date: 03/14/10 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 3
CONGRATULATIONS! You totally deserve this! Update soon :)
Author's Response: Thank you! ASAP!
Date: 03/14/10 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 2
Tom is an asshole! Maybe he'll change?
Author's Response: Ahaha, maybee :)
Date: 03/10/10 01:59 am Title: Chapter 3
CONGRATS on becoming a validated author!!! please updat ASAP one of the few stories i'm dying to read!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! That's great to hear! And I promise as soon as I can! :)
Date: 03/09/10 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 3
I like the way you're writing this and I'm looking forward to more. :D
Author's Response: Aweee, thanks so much! :)
Date: 03/09/10 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 3
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOW!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: As soon as I can :)
Date: 03/09/10 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 3
Just read all three chapter's and I really really like this so far-can't wait for an update!
Author's Response: Great to hear that! :)
Date: 03/09/10 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 3
GOSH I can't wait for their community service to start! They're totes gonna fall head-over-heels, right? *Looks hopeful.* :D :D
I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I'm not gonna spoil :P
Date: 03/09/10 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 2
Tom'd like for Bill to suck him off. ;)
But, sadly, he is an asshole. Hopefully not for long? :D
Author's Response: Hopefully ;)
Date: 03/09/10 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
Poor Bill. I hope things get better for him! :)
Author's Response: :)
Date: 03/03/10 04:56 am Title: Chapter 2
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE finish the story!!!!
Author's Response: I will. I just havent been able to update in a while. SORRY!
Date: 02/27/10 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 2
aww poor billa *gives him a very very big hug* ignore the dumb asses hunny ur better then them anyway. love u lots
Author's Response: :D
Date: 02/27/10 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 2
awesome, Im already on your waiting list n.n
Author's Response: thank you! that's so fantastic! :D