Date: 02/16/10 02:03 am Title: Chapter 1 'The conception of Tom and Bill'
This is really interesting! At first, I thought it was very "Clan of the Cave Bear" but now it's gone in a whole different direction. Very original. :)
Author's Response: Oh, I was in spired by that in certain aspects of course :) but you're correct I'm directing the towards other predicaments from here on.rnrnThank you so much for reviewing rnrn*rnMaria
Date: 02/15/10 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 2 ‘Growing up and mating’
I like how you don't make Tom super sensative towards Bill, even though he loves him. He is a cave man after all.
Author's Response: He is a cave man, yes :) But also brought up in a spiritual family which you'll realise later on.rnrnThanks for reviewing :)rnrn*rnMaria
Date: 02/15/10 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 1 'The conception of Tom and Bill'
i loveeee....itttttt. please update soon. i hate mellany or whatever her name is. i hope bill has a pretty baby boy. tom's future has be worried though.
Author's Response: Melanie is not a very nice person no :) but at least Bill is aware of her hostility although he focuses on his own marriage.rnrnI'm happy you liked the update :) More to come.rnrn*rnMariarnrn
Date: 02/13/10 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 1 'The conception of Tom and Bill'
I'm interested. Can't wait for more chapters.
Author's Response: Thank you.rnI'm happy you're enjoying this :)