Date: 04/13/18 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 5 'Magical moments'
this was a good story!!
there should be a sequel to this
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you. It's nice you've read my stories lately ;)
Date: 07/14/13 02:49 pm Title: Chapter 5 'Magical moments'
Very nice tale. I very much enjoyed reading it.
Author's Response: A bit different than the norm :) Thanks.
Date: 06/16/13 07:08 am Title: Chapter 5 'Magical moments'
I just wanted to let you know, that I liked this story so much. I really enjoyed reading this one.
Author's Response: Thank you very much :) I'm very happy you enjoyed the story. love Maria
Date: 12/20/10 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 1 'The conception of Tom and Bill'
I really like your story.
But it's actually WeißeR Mondschein, without an s.
:)
Author's Response: Oh, damn! I actually managed to copy the wrong sentence from 'Träumer'. It was supposed to be Weißes Mondlicht, and that's with an 's' - at least in the booklet from 'Humanoid'. I'll keep the typo, though. Would seem wrong to change it after a year. But thanks a lot for the review :) *Maria
Date: 10/21/10 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 5 'Magical moments'
That was brilliant. So original and interesting! Thank you so much for sharing this with us, it was an incredible journey! I really enjoyed it, you're a very talented author!
Author's Response: Thanks :) Some weren't 'that thrilled about the magic stuff, so I'm really happy that in general you liked this story. And thanks for the kind words ;) *Maria
Date: 10/21/10 11:24 am Title: Chapter 1 'The conception of Tom and Bill'
Wow, this is very different from everything I've read! Really good first chapter, interesting and intriguing!
Author's Response: :) Yeah, it is probably rather unique. Thanks, Jumbie *Maria
Date: 09/22/10 01:44 pm Title: Chapter 1 'The conception of Tom and Bill'
THANK YOU SO MUCH! GOING TO NOW! :)
Date: 09/21/10 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 1 'The conception of Tom and Bill'
Actually it does. Got to go find it to see if it is the story. I don't know if I'm still part of any Yahoo groups that deal with those threee. But yes, probably where I've seen it is because of Orlando/Karl/Viggo. Hmm...Now I want to read this again. Going to go look.
Author's Response: http://www.ofelvesandmen.com/Stories/M/Myr/AlphaBeta/_ChapterList.htm Happy reading :D
Date: 09/13/10 01:01 am Title: Chapter 5 'Magical moments'
I swear I read this before. If i did I'm so glad to find it again. So good, so harsh in some places, beautifully done.
Author's Response: You have??? Well, it's an old plot that I'm very fond of. I rewrote it for this fandom. It used to be called 'Alpha Beta' pairing Orlando Bloom with Karl Urban and later Viggo Mortensen. Ring any bells? I posted the original version on various Yahoo groups around 2005 :) *Maria
Date: 03/09/10 05:52 am Title: Chapter 5 'Magical moments'
Wow, this is so original and I'm so glad it's finally finished! Great job, and I can't wait to see what else you have for us!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the lovely words. I'm currently working on a new story of which the first chapter has been posted.vlju777777t666666
Date: 02/22/10 03:12 pm Title: Chapter 5 'Magical moments'
Hellooo^^
First of all, I really wanna thank you for this excellent story !!enjoyed it so much and I had a really good time by reading it. It was original and, even if i'm not a big fan of the AU's, I felt in love with your fiction :)
This last chapter was good, even if it wasn't my favorite. Maybe too mystical, I dunno. It was hard to deal with Bill being with Tom(i) without him knowing it was Tom. Anyway, my brain wasn't willing to cooperate tonight ;d
Because I don't wanna finish my comment on a bad note, I wanna tell you this fiction was brilliant and riveting^^ The idea of a prehistoric context was bold but genuine !!
Thanx again Maria and see you maybe on ur future fiction^^
Kisses.
Vic.
Author's Response: Hello, Vic :) You're such a sweetheart and thanks for the review. I'm incredibly happy you liked the story so much. I look forward to being able to post another story some other time (Writing goes slow but I am typing away!) *love* Maria
Date: 02/20/10 11:39 pm Title: Chapter 5 'Magical moments'
this was very different from what I usually read here but I enjoyed it very much. looking forward to more stories by you!
Author's Response: Thanks so much :) I hope to be able to return with something else at some point. *Maria
Date: 02/20/10 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 5 'Magical moments'
I really enjoyed this story for its frankness and the harsh reality of early human life that it presented. But the last chapter got a little too mystical and unealistic for my tastes, as well as it seeming like many things were smooshed into one chapter, in a kind of hurried way. But good job overall.
Author's Response: I know the last part was different and confusing, but Tom had changed and poor Bill would have suffered and possibly died with out the spiritual guidance, I suppose. Anyway, that's how I saw it :) Thanks for the review. I'm happy you enjoyed it over all. *Maria
Date: 02/20/10 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 5 'Magical moments'
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww i love this story
Author's Response: Thanks so much :) *Maria
Date: 02/20/10 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 5 'Magical moments'
Wow. I really enjoyed this story. Thank you, Maria. :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm really happy you liked this one :) *Maria
Date: 02/20/10 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 5 'Magical moments'
I loved this story.
This last chapter was a bit confusing, with Bill not recognizing Tom, but it worked out in the end and they got their son back. All is good in the world.
I'm such a sucker for happy ending.
Thanks you for this story, it was great!
Author's Response: I'm sorry about the confusion, Winry. But I'm glad you enjoyed this story and I love happy endings, too *Maria
Date: 02/20/10 01:49 pm Title: Chapter 5 'Magical moments'
That was entirely too confusing. I didn't expect this to be the last chapter, and to be honest, I don't like how it ended. But I still like to story and everything up until now. It just felt like it just suddenly veered off into an entirely different story. Well, can't wait to see what you've got next.
Author's Response: Sorry about the confusion, but I'm glad that you enjoyed it overall. I'll come back with something more contemporary at some point. Thanks for your support :) * Maria
Date: 02/20/10 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 5 'Magical moments'
it cant be over whaT?????
Author's Response: I fucked up the edit, but the entire chapter is now posted. But if you read past the bog experience then yes. It's done :) Sorry sweetie. Thanks for reading anyway. * Maria
Date: 02/20/10 01:01 am Title: Chapter 4 ‘The birth of Till’
I just finally caught up on this and I really need more! I'm very much enjoying the way you tell this story. :)
Author's Response: Hello sweetie,rnrnIt's lovely you're still with me :) There is one chapter left and I will post it very soon. Thanks for your review *Maria
Date: 02/19/10 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 4 ‘The birth of Till’
plz more
Author's Response: Of course - soon :) *Maria