Date: 03/19/10 09:45 pm Title: Running
ops i ment good not god lol sorry again lol,,, ps i'm your biggest fan on here :)
Author's Response: Thanks Nina :) I appreciate that!
Date: 03/19/10 09:40 pm Title: Running
yay thanks for the comment on my comment so when is the next chapter out i have been waiting for a long time? any way i love the story and yeah i really want the net part haha it's so good :) like really god i can see it happeing right in fount of me lol any way i dont like twc but i like when there writen really good like you and there not brothers lol :) it's cute but lot's of the storys on here are twc so yeah lol i can t read any thing i think :)haha i love this story so much and it's just the start :)ok i better stop all i would shound like a weirdo lol bye for now and i hope to talk to you on ning :)
Author's Response: Hehehe, I'm so happy that you are so in love with the story :) And of course, you are my biggest fan of this story. Thank you for that!rnI will have more soon. I'm just taking a little break from writing. Hopefully I will have more up in the meantime.rnOnce again, thank you for reading! :X Muah!
Date: 02/25/10 07:00 pm Title: Goodnight
oh wow i really loved the chapter so much your erighting is so well done it fellt like i was in the story and i was with tom saying to go to bed and not to sleep on the ground loltom's so shy when his with bill awww thats so sweet i think cos he does not know where to go jha ha.aww bill's aunt is so nice i was mine was that nice.ha ha i woder what tom looked like when he was sleeping next to bill and what was he thinking well he went to sleep to fast to know so he like it ha ha awww how cute bill said friend his so cute when he said that awww.i cant stop saying that but it's so cute i love the chappter it's the best yet .i love to wright comments for your happters cos you love them and read them thanks for being so nice for making me so happy with your wrighting your the best and i love your fanfic your great.cant wait intell the next chapter,,,,love Nina.c oh and my name on ning is Nina.c.loves th , http://tokiohotelofficial.ning.com/profile/nina601
lol just saying but i think you know that ha ah so i hope you love my comment bye bye omg love it he he
Author's Response: Hahahaha, you are so enthusiastic about my writing :) It makes me smile! Keep up the reading, and thank you for your awesome comments. There will be about chapter soon!...Soon as in, when I get my lazy butt to writing XD
Date: 02/22/10 09:35 am Title: Goodnight
This is a really cute story, i loved Tom's little save with Kelly :D
And i always, ALWAYS love medusa/Tom.
But omg, i can't help reading this story with a southern accent in my head. lmao, the twins are adorable as southern boys, and somehow you make it work. I can't believe i missed this update, but i so am looking forward to the next chapter!! rock on
Author's Response: I know, right? The Medusa ordeal completely popped into my head while writing. rnHaha, why thank you. I was wondering if I was pulling off the Southern accent well enough. Sometime's it seems forced, which I'm hoping isn't the case here.rnHaha, don't worry! There will be plenty more!
Date: 02/22/10 12:54 am Title: Goodnight
Aww!!! They're sleeping together! How nice!
It's actually good that Bill's aunt didn't get that mad... and Tom knows how to build up things in his mind pretty easily, i wonder: does he do that constantly?
oh! and what about Tom's parents? I mean, yeah, they'll call them on the morning, but aren't they worried right now? More soon please! Oh, I just noticed you said you were going to post it some time soon... anyway... i'll be waiting!
Author's Response: Ahhh, Tom is a mysterious one. There is plenty we don't know about his home life. You will all find out about that in dew time :) Thanks for reading!!
Date: 02/21/10 07:29 pm Title: Goodnight
Tom's so cute
Author's Response: Tom-nodnod- THANK YOU!!!
Date: 02/21/10 05:09 pm Title: Goodnight
d'awwwwwww x]
Author's Response: Haha, I'm taking that as a 'you like it' :)
Date: 02/21/10 04:42 pm Title: Goodnight
Ooohh I loved this chapter! Too cute at the end my love :)
I am so happy about all the reviews you've gotten! It makes me so happy for you :D
I love the story so far, but because you know how my mind works...I WANT SMUT! lmfaooo!
Love you and love this story xoxox
Author's Response: Yay! I was waiting for your review!! rnThank you! I couldn't have done it without you. I was really surprised with all the reviews i've gotten so far.rnOh Avery darling, you shall get your smut....eventually. But don't worry! It will be there!rnI LOVE YOU TOOOOO!!!! :3
Date: 02/21/10 04:24 pm Title: Goodnight
AWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SOOOOOOO CUTE!!!!!
LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE!!!!!!!
Gah, I'm so so so so sorry for not commenting earlier!!!! D: I'm such a bum, I know. xP I'm not going to bore you with excuses, but I will bore you with my ranting. . . xD Deal?
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I think this is your best series yet!!! Oh my God, the writing it so amazing, I don't see how you can read my crap called writing!!! xP *crouches in her emo corner and starts growing mushrooms. . . as in the fungus* UGH. Anyway, this is great, I love it. >///<
BWAAAAAAA. I really hope that Tom doesn't get in trouble with his parents when he calls. D: That would be sad!!! I don't want that to happen. . . >.< UGH!!!!!!
Ha ha... Tom looks like Medusa. . . WINNER!!! I can see it, it's in my head... xD *giggle giggle snort snort*
This is such a cute chapter though! love iiiit.... didn't I already say that? xD
post more soon!!!!!!!!
Oh, and you should continue Day Dreamer!!! It's one of my favorites by you!!! >.<
Oh yeah!!!! I GOT GRETCHEN!!!!! >:D
OH YEAH(again... xD) Thank you for you comment on the video!!!! :D It made my day. xD And yeah, I am awkward in front of the camera. It's gonna take some practice. xD I hoping to get a video camera by the time of the trip. . . though thats gonna hard. xP WE SHALL SEE!!!!!
ANYWAY!!!!
POST MORE SOON!!!!!!
This is turning out really long. :P Ima shut up nows. xP
Author's Response: Hahaha, did you post this comment a second time for emphasis? Or are you just being silly? Anyways....thank you...again :)
Date: 02/21/10 04:09 pm Title: Goodnight
Aww that was totally cute... the ending part. Shy!Tom is Adorkable! I love it. The isn't ebpnough Shy!Toms lol.
Author's Response: Ahh there will be plenty more Shy!Tom in the future...and Confused!Tom....and plenty more :)rnThank you for reading!!
Date: 02/21/10 03:24 pm Title: Goodnight
Cute.
Author's Response: Thank you. Although, I would appreciate, if you are going to review, please give me an actual REVIEW, and not just one word. Thanks ;)
Date: 02/21/10 03:06 pm Title: Goodnight
AWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SOOOOOOO CUTE!!!!!
LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE!!!!!!!
Gah, I'm so so so so sorry for not commenting earlier!!!! D: I'm such a bum, I know. xP I'm not going to bore you with excuses, but I will bore you with my ranting. . . xD Deal?
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I think this is your best series yet!!! Oh my God, the writing it so amazing, I don't see how you can read my crap called writing!!! xP *crouches in her emo corner and starts growing mushrooms. . . as in the fungus* UGH. Anyway, this is great, I love it. >///<
BWAAAAAAA. I really hope that Tom doesn't get in trouble with his parents when he calls. D: That would be sad!!! I don't want that to happen. . . >.< UGH!!!!!!
Ha ha... Tom looks like Medusa. . . WINNER!!! I can see it, it's in my head... xD *giggle giggle snort snort*
This is such a cute chapter though! love iiiit.... didn't I already say that? xD
post more soon!!!!!!!!
Oh, and you should continue Day Dreamer!!! It's one of my favorites by you!!! >.<
Oh yeah!!!! I GOT GRETCHEN!!!!! >:D
OH YEAH(again... xD) Thank you for you comment on the video!!!! :D It made my day. xD And yeah, I am awkward in front of the camera. It's gonna take some practice. xD I hoping to get a video camera by the time of the trip. . . though thats gonna hard. xP WE SHALL SEE!!!!!
ANYWAY!!!!
POST MORE SOON!!!!!!
This is turning out really long. :P Ima shut up nows. xP
Author's Response: OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG YOU ARE HERE?!?!?!?! WHY DID I NOT KNOW YOU HAD A THF ACCOUNT EARLIER????rnHahahaha, thank you for reading!! I'm so glad you like it!!! I totally thought this whole thing was going to be a bust...but people seem to like it. Makes me happy :)rnWhat do you mean??? I LOVE YOUR WRITING!! It's....amazing. And thats the only adjective I can think of because it is!!! WHOO!!!rnHaha the Medusa thing...yeah totally a spur of the moment detail. It's cute though. WIN!rnrnOkay, good....I was hoping you would say that... I just need some time to think on it.rnrnYES YES YES YES!!! You must show me Gretchen!!!!rnrnHehe, you are welcome!! Trust me, I would need all the practice in the world to stop my silly ass from stuttering like a blumbering idiot.rn
Date: 02/21/10 02:52 pm Title: Goodnight
yay for new chapters!! For some reason in no matter what fics I read I always love the whole 'oh you can sleep with me even though there is a spare room thing' hehe Idk why i just find it cute; but mabye I'm weird... XD
Author's Response: Ha, you are far from wierd, my darling. Or...we are all just wierd. Hey, we are writing and reading Twincest....so, I guess that's safe to say XDrnThanks for reading! There will be more soon!
Date: 02/20/10 08:13 am Title: Lost, Found, and All Around
this is really cute so far =] i can't wait to see the next update ^_^
Author's Response: Thank you! ^^ More will be here soon!
Date: 02/19/10 05:44 am Title: Running
hay thanks for the comment on my comment
Author's Response: you are very welcome :)
Date: 02/18/10 05:43 am Title: Running
i really love this chapter it was so funny when tom fell from the tree ha ha and when bill was like what are you doing up there i wonder what well happen to bill when he gets home is tom comeing to he he lol oh i hope bill does not get in the bad books lol bad books it that a word i mad up.i really love this story and i really cant wait to see wait happens nest it's so cute when they smile i hope they become best friends ,i cant wait for the nest chapter i'm in love with this story and it's just the start oh i wish i could right more but it might take a long time so i hope you enjoy righting more your a great righer and i hope to see more love nina
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the writing so much! Make me feel special! -hugsself...andnina- XDrnAnd thank you! For the compliment and readering and reviewing!! ALL OF IT :)rnMore will be up soon!
Date: 02/18/10 12:43 am Title: Lost, Found, and All Around
hehehe! bill got scared because of an owl...
tom on a tree? hmm... that would be nice to see...
what would kelly do to bill?
hmmm more soon please!
Author's Response: Ahh Kelley would crack him into shape, that's what she'd do! Haha, just kidding :)rnThere will be more soon!
Date: 02/17/10 10:10 pm Title: Lost, Found, and All Around
This is so cute! I really like it, especially how this has that whole Southern feel to it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading!!! :D I hope you continue. There shall be more here in the future!
Date: 02/17/10 04:36 pm Title: Lost, Found, and All Around
hmmmm... interesting very interesting :D
Author's Response: Haha, thank you :) Hope to see you reading more soon!
Date: 02/17/10 04:00 am Title: Lost, Found, and All Around
I really loved your description of the field, it was so easy to picture and sounds so pretty.
Tom falling out of the tree was pretty funny too :D
I think this was a very realistic first encounter, and all the mystery you've build up sorrounding Tom has seriously caught my attention.
I used to live in CA, actually i do currently, but i've moved 19 times, and whenever i told people i moved from, or used to live in CA i got the exact same reaction Tom gave, lol. I personally don't think CA is all that it's cracked up to be, but to each his own.
I also thought the last bit with the owl was clever and cute, i love Tom's inner dialogue "This guy was ridiculous" lol.
Though there was one line i got stuck on, "waiting to give his my biggest whooping" doesnt make sense, and there were one or two grammatical errors, but nothing mortal.
I'm really loveing this fic, and i can't wait for your next update!!
Author's Response: Why thank you :) The field was actually based off of one I live by. So it was my favorite part to write!rnI don't think CA is all that it's cracked up to be either, but I thought that Tom's reaction, for someone who has never been there before, was pretty realistic indeed :)rnsorry if you were a bit confused. i'll try and make stuff clearer in the future!rnREAD ON!! There shall be more posted soon :D