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Reviewer: EmmaKafrum Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/30/08 11:56 am Title: Chapter 3 Being told

looool I know what kind of boys are you talking about! my school is full of them =_=' that crazy bitches xD

"bite me" is "morde-me"
HAVE FUN ^^

Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: Orakel_nr2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/30/08 11:51 am Title: Chapter 3 Being told

*grins*
so cute!

Author's Response: thanks :)

Reviewer: EmmaKafrum Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/30/08 11:45 am Title: Chapter 3 Being told

....*melts*....
oh.....!!!! so ...cute..wonderfull...so... gaaahhh!!! TERRIFIC!
I love cute scenes like this!!! x )
and jesus christ! bill with NO makeup and his hair DOWN is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo beautiful! *blushes* I love when he's like that! of sourse, the lion hair is cute but the flat hair...omg... *dies*

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oh... and "thank you" is "obrigado". ^_^ ;
"thank you very much" is "muito obrigado"

had fun talking in portuguese with your friends? xD I love talk in japanese and see my friends faces. its priceless xD
Tell me if you want me to translate anything you like ^_^ its a pleasure!

Author's Response: obrigado :) haha I'm so going to use that *jumps happily* ok so I would kind of like to know what "bite me" is (cus I know some seriously disturbing boys) love your reviews as always *bows to the princess of reviewing* (meaning you)

Reviewer: el_gardner Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/30/08 11:37 am Title: Chapter 3 Being told

Oh... We can't have you dying before you finish this can we! Absolutely loved it again!

Was it just me or did this chapter have a slightly more serious undertone to is... Like the teasing between them was a more than just teasing. I got more of a sense of the feelings behind it. Anyway, I'll shut up... I'm rambling now lol XD

Author's Response: haha it's probobly just a sign of me going mental *smiles wierd* cus I am totally loving to write this, but I promise not to make it angsty or anything, fluffy yes, but not extremely serious ;)

Reviewer: Elle_Chan Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/30/08 11:34 am Title: Chapter 3 Being told

nawwww Luce that was absolutely sweet..so sweet that i melted...and burned my cookies...*pouts*

*reads again* naaawwwwww *cooes* so cuddly...*melts again*
"Screw the law…no actually screw me, please" -->> *laughs insanely and tries to nod*

oh man...*wipes tear away* so true very true..
YAY! the reviews saved your life..*pouts* although i was so sure it were the cookies and you're right Simone's baking skills are nothing compared to mine..*looks proud* cuz my cookies RULE!!! ^-^'

::gives lots of cookies:: that should keep you living so you can write!!

Author's Response: you burned your cookies 8O oh noooooooooo *reads rest of review and lets out big breath* oh thank god...I still get cookies pfhuh ;) I am soo extremely happy you liked this and you are right your cookies keep me alive *nodds head*

Reviewer: EmmaKafrum Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/08 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 2 Hands off the cookies

GAAAAAAAAAHHHH!!! so cute!!! I just loved the "mom told us not to touch" thing!!! it was such a tease!!! x )
e porra, agora deste-me fome com toda essa conversa das bolachas! - (and fuck, now you gave me hunger with all of that cookie talking!) =_='
IM HUNGRYYY......
well...I think I'm gonna to Elle's.. she ALWAYS have cookies in hand!
great chap hun!!! ^^

Author's Response: haha grazias (whats thank you in portuguiese?) *happy because my favourite reviewer liked my fic* hope you'll read the next chapter :) and cookies totally rock I think I got some from this chapter *diggs around and hands you cookie from Elle*

Reviewer: Orakel_nr2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/08 07:11 am Title: Chapter 2 Hands off the cookies

*yaaaaayy*
this is so cute^^
you must continue *trying to pull a strict face, but failing miserably*
XD
I loved that shower scene...what is it about shower scenes?
:P
*hugs from me*

Author's Response: shower scenes just rock !!! I mean it's the law or something...shower scenes rock anyway thanks for reviewing this it keeps me alive :)

Reviewer: el_gardner Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/29/08 06:28 am Title: Chapter 2 Hands off the cookies

I really liked this a lot, the shower scene was really hot! There's an almost light hearted, teasing feel to this which is really refreshing. I love it, please continue ;)

Author's Response: well I don't wanna go all angsty so I thought I try this, very happy it's working out for you. *kisses and hugs for review*

Reviewer: Elle_Chan Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/08 06:19 am Title: Chapter 2 Hands off the cookies

*looks at title*
hmm...cookies...sounds promising

*reads fic*
oh.... i know cookies were a good thing *looks proud* i wonder what give you the idea...

hehe you gotta love cookies ... especially if it provides this

^^
you don't need reviews to write!! what you need is cookies!! and a lot of them and since i'm the cookieprincess..i'm giving you cookies

::buries you under cookies::

Author's Response: well cookie I have to admit that Simones baking skills couldn't mach yours and you are right cookies are exactly what I need *smiles and eats cookies while thinking about what to write next*

Reviewer: Sheila89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/08 05:28 am Title: Chapter 2 Hands off the cookies

Luv the story. Great ideas. Go on, post the next one! I, for one, I'm waiting.

Author's Response: Thank you sweety will try to update soon :)

Reviewer: susie Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/08 12:42 pm Title: Chapter 1 Good morning

You really should continue!! It's really good! I wanna read more=)

Author's Response: good I will then :)

Reviewer: lipa Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/08 10:39 am Title: Chapter 1 Good morning

I liked!!the honey part was hot

Author's Response: thanx ;)

Reviewer: Emmla Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/08 09:40 am Title: Chapter 1 Good morning

omg
I really need you to continue this story! it has a lot of potential!

Author's Response: haha thanks sweety (:

Reviewer: Gisele Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/08 08:51 am Title: Chapter 1 Good morning

Really good start ^^ I liiike it ! :D

Author's Response: happy you do :)

Reviewer: Majestrix Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/08 08:35 am Title: Chapter 1 Good morning

I'm interested in seeing how this is taken. If you think you could keep going I would love to read more.

Author's Response: I hope I will keep going glad you liked it :) thanks for reviewing (see I know how to write it now *proud*)

Reviewer: Elle_Chan Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/08 06:48 am Title: Chapter 1 Good morning

...
*squeals* it was so...fluffy...like a cute little fluffy bunny...only much cuter and fluffier!!!
*grabs plushbunny and pets it*

XD i'm so happy you made another one Luce...*tilts head* i can call you that right?

::gives you BIG basket full of cookies:: it's been a while hasn't it?

Author's Response: finally coockies *stuffs mouth full* Of course you can call me luce, but then I'm gonna call you coockie !!! so thank you so much for sweet reviw coockie you rock ;)

Reviewer: Orakel_nr2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/08 03:38 am Title: Chapter 1 Good morning

contuniue, continue :D
this was so cool *grins*
..and if you don't then I won't find out whathappens next *pout*
*hugs you*`
^_^!

Author's Response: *hugs you back and promises to update because of review*

Reviewer: BrokenMirror Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/08 03:15 am Title: Chapter 1 Good morning

Haha ! I loved this. You're absolutely amazing :D I adore all your stories. *leans back and waits for an update*

Author's Response: ooooh it's so nice when you say that *jumps computer and waits for inspiration*

Reviewer: Razzle Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/22/08 03:06 am Title: Chapter 1 Good morning

"The madras moved and the body beside him turned around."

My favourite typo ever.

I like the idea, that they know and they're comfortable with it. It's like Resist, but much more sort of light-hearted. As long as you don't go too angtsy, this could be quite original. :)

Author's Response: I don't think it will get angsty but FLUFFY (atleast I hope so)

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